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Reviewer: nisacullen (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 09:44 PM · On: Found and Lost
ahh hell! I never picked this story for a tragic ending! I was wondering where it was heading when he started going mad but this is just tragic tears in the eyes tragic. It will be quite interesting to see how you turn this around in 5 - 10 chapters!
Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 09:41 PM · On: Found and Lost
So not happy, but it was expected and inevitable. Trying to figure out how this possibly could end well.
Reviewer: Lotte (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 09:41 PM · On: Found and Lost
OMG, this is so sad! I've been hoping for an HEA (still do...) but right now my hopes are crumbling. Shit, I hope everything is going to turn out all right. I love this story, it's so well written and unlike anything else I've read.
Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 09:35 PM · On: Found and Lost
You actually made me cry with this one. And then I read that you were going to end it here. HERE !??! That would suck and yes it would be tragic. Their story is definately not over. 5-10 more chapters sounds excellent. I know I am not done with this particular Edward and Bella. Right now I want to reach out and grab Edward and force him to stay with Bella. He's hurting her so much but in 2 mins he won't even remember that happening, how sad!
Reviewer: Moflo (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 09:27 PM · On: Found and Lost
Think I may be done now. *sigh*
Reviewer: SnapCrackledThePop (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Found and Lost
No tragic!
Reviewer: lunastar (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 09:05 PM · On: Found and Lost
ur driving me nuts u know that
Reviewer: starfish_fairy (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 09:03 PM · On: Found and Lost
NOOOOOO!!! I can't believe you were going to actually end it there. I'm not one for telling people how or what to do with their stories, but I have become so attached to these characters, please let them be together. Now that I've said that, you are free do as you wish I will still love this story no matter what.
Reviewer: 184 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 08:36 PM · On: Found and Lost
This is such an amazimg work!! Please tell me it will end happily somehow! Though I have no idea how you could work this one out. Thanks for writting, this is really great! Ahhhhh Angst!
Reviewer: buffbroinze (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Found and Lost
Ok...so you know that scene in Twilight...where's she's in the hospital and Edward tells her she has to go to Jacksonville so that he can't hurt her anymore? Remember Bella's reaction? Well that's me at the thought that you were going to finish your story there! lol
Ok..first I have to say that as the writer of this fantastic story you are completely entitled to write it any way you see fit..it's still been great reading it...BUT...you know, and every other writer knows that we mainly read these stories cos we want to read a multitude of ways...angsty/funny or romantic....for Bella and Edward to come together and live happily ever after.
It would break my heart for them not to have that.....just sayin'
ta for listening
x
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 08:19 PM · On: Found and Lost
No, I don't hate you. You are writing the story as you see fit. I am soaking it up like spongecake soakes up brandy......
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Found and Lost
Naw, you don't suck, but it did make me want to bawl my eyes out with Bella!
Adored what you did with Charlie. Very powerful.
Poor Bella, that his mind pushes away her declarations of love. So when he'd black out or have panic attacks was when she'd say it, I'm guessing.
Still eager to see what prompts Bella's change to vamp (since I'm certain that has to happen to allow them to enjoy their love for one anther without worry about time). Also can't wait to see how they fix him. Change in vamps is "permanent" but is also prompted by bigger shifts in thinking withing the individual. Wonder if getting well for E would just require a whole hearted shift in thinking about Bella and her blood. Or if it will be one more big drink (like the volume of her body amount) and then a shift in thinking.
Ending here would have SUCKED!!! Can respect why you would have planned it, but soooo glad you've changed your mind!
Sooo love what you do with this story (even if it has gotten angst emo from hades. lol)! Enjoy the World Cup (I'll restrain myself from feeling about it the way E feels about Charlie keeping B away)! ;D
Thanks for writing and sharing!!!
Reviewer: kisbydog (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Confuse and Amuse
OMG! Edward in Sponge Bob pants and telling knock knock jokes? I think I may have prefered it when he was eating dolphins and bengal tigers. No, not really. But, please! Make him sane again soon!
Reviewer: alejandra12 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 08:06 PM · On: Found and Lost
Ahhh ur trying to kill me I'm. From newyork city and I have had a cold and now that I cried I'm even worse. Please update soon
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 08:06 PM · On: Found and Lost
Thank you for now ending this here. That would have boken by heart. I am glad that Bella was able to stop him from killing Charlie. That would have hurt him because it would have hurt her. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: gbasjw (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Found and Lost
I don't hate you but I'm glad you're not ending it here. Although, I will be pissed off if this doesn't end with a HEA. I say that not because I think all E&B stories should end HEA, but because this story has taken a rather uneven path that has caused your readers to love this Edward not to revile him. I guess if he had stayed super intense & harsh as he was in the beginning I would feel differently. Instead, he morphed into this nutty, needy, funny and eccentric but totally endearing Edward. The Edward that Bella, as well as your readers, fell in love with. Your A/N said you originally intended for it to be tragic. Tragic for Edward, Bella or both?
I'm guessing you are getting enough heart-felt pleas to come to some sort of conclusion where E&B stay together. Doesn't mean that it has to be hearts & flowers perfect but...really - please don't go another 5-10 chapters to have them irrevocably separated. Please? This is a special story. Ending with them being reunited will not change that.
Reviewer: i-was-broken (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Found and Lost
Oh I am SO glad you're not ending it here. I would just die a thousand deaths if you did.
This was a really sad chapter, but I think we've seen it coming. That said, I do hope they can have some semblance of a 'happy' ever after together.
Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: cravingtwilight (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Found and Lost
so glad you're planning on continuing! great ch!
Reviewer: quitomom (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 07:51 PM · On: Found and Lost
Now I'm going to have to go back and re-read because that definitely threw me for a loop...but a GOOD loop...and SO glad you aren't ending it here. You would probably have to enter some type of witness-protection program to escape from the pissed off middle-aged female fans :)
Author's Response: The number of people mentioning things akin to lynchings is giving me that idea, yes. ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: kisbydog (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Realize and Rationalize
They just tossed the condom in the garbage? What if Charlie finds it? He could run DNA tests on it - hmm, that could be interesting.
Why can't they ever just phone Aro? I'm sure they could just call directory assistance in Volterra or something. Why do they always go there? Sigh.
Reviewer: Rosalynn (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 07:39 PM · On: Found and Lost
Yes, i am very glad tht this isnt the last chapter, I would have had a huge fit....how could you pull a new moon on us??? :(
Reviewer: nocturnal_rendevous (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 07:24 PM · On: Found and Lost
You are a horrible creature, my love! But Edward will be Edward, won't he? Idiot. Ah, well, let's hope someone can bring him to his senses.
Reviewer: Beth818 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 07:19 PM · On: Found and Lost
Yeah, you're awful.
Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 07:18 PM · On: Found and Lost
OMG, you were going to END IT HERE? How terribly cruel and heartless! I'm so glad that you decided not to do that and hope, hope, hope that you will give them a HEA. Jesus fucking Christ...if you were going to end it in HF, you should have put a warning or something. I could have had a coronary...I AM A WUSSPERV FOR FUCKSSAKES!
BTW, I am so glad that she has been telling him that she loves him, even though he doesn't remember. It makes me feel better. A little.
JFC, were you REALLY going to end it here? ::SOBBING UNCONTROLLABLY:: I don't think I want to read anything else you write, woman. My life sucks enough as it is.
Reviewer: pamirvine85 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Found and Lost
poor edward.. bellas gonna be heartbroken
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