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Reviewer: angelathena (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 04:21 AM · On: Calm and Control
I like you made Edward act like a drug addict, make sense to all the madness. I really like your story so far and your way of writting too. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it - thanks for leaving a review!
Reviewer: angelathena (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 07:56 AM · On: Bite and Run
this story looks interesting!!!!
Reviewer: Snowqueens Icedragon (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 11:21 PM · On: Mope and Hope
A cure! I hope so.
Author's Response: Hey...if you're reading this, how can you be update MOTU2? ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Amphigory (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2010 10:20 AM · On: Found and Lost
Thank GOD you didnt leave it here...I would of been SO disapointed. I just cant rectify an awful vicious Edward turning into a feeble helpless Edward whos ultimate fate is giving Aro exactly what he wanted. It would of been tragic, indeed...and with so many unanswered questions.I am happy to keep reading, TYVM.
Reviewer: Amphigory (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2010 02:36 PM · On: Allay and Alarm
Ahhhh...and this is the story I've been waiting for! I see flashes of something forming that may not disturb me to read. You took such liberties with these characters that it was making me uncomfortable...interested, but uncomfortable, but its really paying off now. Great stuff.
Author's Response: Well, that's good! I think.... hehehe. You really aren't supposed to like him in the beginning. :) Thanks again for all your reviewins!
Reviewer: Amphigory (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Desperation and Despair
Nutty? This was my #1 favorite chapter, finally, Edward doesn't disgust me...FINALLY. I thought I was going to have to endure the entire story hating Tortureward, but, thank God, you got over that.
Author's Response: It's my fav chapter, too. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Amphigory (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2010 01:18 PM · On: Choose and Lose
Feeling better here...finally! I do love your chapter summations, very much, thank you.
Reviewer: Amphigory (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2010 10:55 AM · On: Coax and Confess
The final line of each chapter is rather brilliant...even if this Edward still disgusts me.
Author's Response: Thank you! Um....I think! :) He ain't right in the head...
Reviewer: ZaHL (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2010 09:16 AM · On: Epilogue: Love and Live
This was definitely original, but i don't think I really liked it ... Edward was too winy and annoying through most of it.
Reviewer: Amphigory (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 11:44 PM · On: Fight and Flight
This Edward disgusts me. Just so ya know...
Author's Response: He is kind of a nutcase. :)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 10:58 AM · On: Epilogue: Love and Live
Whew! What a ride! Excellent story, I'm glad you pulled it to the happy ending, it was a better love story than tragedy! Edward overcame tremendous obstacles and flaws in his quest to love Bella, he started it quite unconventionally, but won her over anyway. And of course, Bella was mostly silent on all her suffering, but we know she endured pain, guilt, ridicule, and being ostracized from peers and family. Not to mention all the angst and heartache they both felt over the woes of their significant other! Truly a great love story, I'm so glad I read it!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 10:35 AM · On: Consent and Change
I absolutely loved that he went to Carlisle to help him convince Bella he was as good as could be expected! There was nothing lost that meant more to him than not hurting her and he put his heart on his sleeve when he pleaded with her to love him as imperfect as he was! What beauty! And, of course, she does!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 09:00 AM · On: Vials and Trials
I can only imagine how many scars on Bella's body, how much self revulsion! Poor babies!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 06:40 AM · On: Try and Fail
And things were going so well! I don't think Bella is going to give up, so it's back to the drawing board!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Mope and Hope
What an awful time for our Edward! Sane enough to be ashamed, sad, broody, and afraid! I'm glad that Bella declared that she would leave if the family didn't treat him normally! A cure, wouldn't that be perfect!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 02:50 AM · On: Regain and Resign
Okay, first what a relief about Demetri and his affection for Edward! And second! The monster can't bite her with his teeth! It's either goodbye Bella or goodbye Bella's blood! Neither of which is going to do him any good!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 02:05 AM · On: Lost and Found
That was heartbreaking! His wandering around volterra like a patient in a mental institution! It is quite frightening how the monster has taken back so much control over the man! Will he become rational enough to beat him down and be the Edward she loves?
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 08:30 AM · On: Epilogue: Love and Live
Wow this was a truely amazing story that's all I can say. To tell you the truth I didn't expect this story to turn out the way it did, but I love how it did. What bella and edward both had to go through was heartbreaking, but beautiful at the same time. In this story bella is so strong, I look up to her for that because this has to be one of the strongest bellas I have ever read about. Personally I didn't like edward in this story in the begining but after awhile I very much loved him.
You are an amazing author and there is not enough I can say about you you are fantastic. You are one of the most talented and creative writers I know, lol. I very much look forward to reading more from you.
Well Until Next Time
mbellaandedwardm
Reviewer: Snowqueens Icedragon (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 03:09 AM · On: Desire and Defend
GAh... and now i have to go to a party... sheesh...
Poor Emmett
Thanks for this wonderful tale... it's been a welcome break x
Reviewer: Snowqueens Icedragon (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 01:41 AM · On: Confront and Expose
I love how he's always on the edge...
Author's Response: It is the birth of Boobward. :)
Reviewer: Snowqueens Icedragon (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 01:14 AM · On: Know and Tell
Oh noes!
Reviewer: Snowqueens Icedragon (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 12:45 AM · On: Greed and Need
*sighs*
Reviewer: Snowqueens Icedragon (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Play and Pray
Dammit.... I have to go to the hairdressers...
Not much of a review I know...
Gah..
Reviewer: Snowqueens Icedragon (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 09:39 PM · On: Calm and Control
Love they are in London.
Reviewer: Snowqueens Icedragon (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 09:14 PM · On: Fight and Flight
Oh shit... small blond boys in Spiderman PJs... i've had two of those.
Author's Response: I had one of those as well, though he preferred Superman and wouldn't admit to such things now that he is in his teen years. It *is* a bit of a horror movie at first. Glad you are enjoying it!
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