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Reviewer: sharonjane (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 05:43 AM · On: Found and Lost
What I don't understand is if he can't remember anything for any length of time for example that Bella says she loves him, then why can he remember verbatim what Aro said to him when the went to Volterra. he never seems to forget that, that does not make sense.
Sharon
Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 05:30 AM · On: Read and Bleed
I love that Edward is being so bad....love it when he lets his inner monster out.
Reviewer: Fairest of Them All (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 05:25 AM · On: Lost and Found
can he ever really be cured?
Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 05:19 AM · On: Lost and Found
Girl....even though you could STILL totally crush me and go tragic ending on this (I never read non-HEA, by the way, life sucks enough, JFC) I'm going to go vote for H&D at everything that it is NOMMED for. You are amazing and if anyone can get these two out of this predicament and into a HEA, it would be you.
Thank you for the update!
Reviewer: nicoleaj (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 05:16 AM · On: Lost and Found
Love it :)
Reviewer: soton (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 05:10 AM · On: Lost and Found
Such a sad sad story. My heart broke for Edward when he was trying to find his way out of Voltera so that he could be with Bella. Loved it that Bella was the one to find him instead!
I know you have now brought them back together - but I don't trust you to give them a HEA! I check all of the time to see whether there is a new chapter. Tonight there it was - but I was so afraid to read it incase it was something really bad. Please, they have been through enough - give them a HEA!!!
Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 05:05 AM · On: Cry and Consume
So Edward is feeling a tad remorseful....but just a tad. This chapter felt a bit erotic also, with the way Edward holds Bella to take her blood. Great job with this story, am loving it.
Reviewer: SallyThePumkinQueen (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 05:04 AM · On: Lost and Found
LOVE it!!
<3
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 04:50 AM · On: Lost and Found
You write excellent lunacy! :D
So glad to have them back together and I liked how you covered the time in Volterra without torturing us by drawing it out. The forced feeding was powerful (sick and twisted like it should be) and made my own gut twist for him.
I'm guessing Aro let them "rescue" him since he was useless to him (and he probs secretly hopes they will fix him so he can have another shot at him).
Yummy reunion sex. He's so sad and she's so poingnant here too. Wondering if Charlie will have lightened up from seeing her fall apart worse from having E offically gone. Or if he'll hate E's guts even more. Probs the later. lol
Still loving the journey even more than ever!
Thanks for writing and sharing!!!
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 04:47 AM · On: Lost and Found
Hey great great chap i dont think that it will cure him well tbh i dont want it to cure him i mean i want him to be cured but not by drinking human blood again
Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 04:43 AM · On: Shop and Kill
Love this story....very intense and dramatic. Love how over the edge Edward is. Great job.
Reviewer: AliciaZA (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 04:42 AM · On: Lost and Found
Great chapter. Yay, Bella came and got Edward back. She is so awesome. And she most definitely loves him - as evidenced by her slitting her wrist with a razor (wide eyed shock). Edward is amazing. I certainly don't blame him for falling off the wagon (who wouldn't with Aro as such a ruthless drug of choice dealer around!); and I hope Bella doesn't either. Its amazing how far Edward has come, and how much self-control he still has to be able to wait to feed from Bella! Cannot WAIT to read what happens next. This story is blowing my socks off!
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 04:40 AM · On: Lost and Found
I thinbk it is a good move for him. He can get enough focus to use his medical degrees & work with Carlisle on a cure.
Reviewer: TessLouise (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 04:32 AM · On: Lost and Found
I'm probably wasting my breath, but I'm really really hoping for an HEA. Please? :)
Reviewer: KStewLipBite (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 04:26 AM · On: Lost and Found
Another great chapter! Thank you:)
Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 04:18 AM · On: Bite and Run
Love this dark Edward....when he loses it, there's no half-way with him!! Hope he can see past Bella being just a food source. lol
Reviewer: Gennell (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 03:58 AM · On: Lost and Found
Well only you know the answers to all those questions. I am really glad they are back together. And whether or not it is a good idea for him to drink from her does not really matter. They need each other, and this one act is the only hope they have. Hope is everything. You have to try. I really enjoyed this chapter.
Reviewer: beacullen (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 03:52 AM · On: Lost and Found
I don't know what to think, I'm no sure Edward can stop himself again. I hope now that he has a little more clarity, and he can control his urges. I felt so bad for him in Volterra, he just seemed so lost. I'm glad he's back with Bella, but I wonder where Charlie is and why he's letting her be away from him. Oh and yea I worry about the students of Forks High lol thanks again.
Reviewer: 50bestfriends (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 03:06 AM · On: Lost and Found
Friend, I am so very glad they are back together. I'm holding on for the hea and praying it's not too hea and mushy, as in no Renesme's blood fixing the problem. Ugh!
Author's Response: Good lord, no! :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 03:01 AM · On: Pause and Persuade
Fabulous chapter, eventhough what's happening to Edward is breaking my heart! Dammit, why won't he just listen & drink?
~Kat
Reviewer: wordslinger (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 02:59 AM · On: Lost and Found
Wow, I didn't expect Bella to come for him, I guess I thought he'd escape or the Volturi would have her kidnapped or something. I was all kinds of wrong. I'm so anxious to see how this is going to play out. He can't drink her blood forever, she'll die.
I'm in agony!!
Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 02:44 AM · On: Lost and Found
I am glad that he is back with her. I also think it is reasonable that she is offering her blood as a temporary cure. I am really impressed witht the section from Volterra with Aro and his aversion to touching Edward. That was a nice touch to the story. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: You're welcome! Thanks for reviewing! You are reviewer #6000! Woo hoo! :)
Reviewer: bonz245 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 02:44 AM · On: Lost and Found
This story is so good. I don't know what I wish for them. So much for indecision....Patiently I wait for the next chapter. I do wish for a happy ending though! Thanks.
Reviewer: ihopatz (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 02:31 AM · On: Lost and Found
As much as it sux, hopefully drinking from Bella will heal Edward. At least they're together again YAY!
Reviewer: chucklesfamily (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 02:16 AM · On: Lost and Found
I'm glad they are back together but I am still so nervous about how it is all going to end!
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