Oh I love me some crazy and dark Edward.....I think he should just grab Bella and run back to their island---no one would know where to find them.

yeah!  together again!  edward seems to be doing better - how long was he away for?  good ol' alice with her food delivery, haha.  thanks for starting to bring back eddie!!!!

The last two chapters were riveting... I for one would have gotten your original ending but am thrilled you've opted to press on.  It will be great fun to compare Ending 1 with Ending 2 when the time comes.

Faced with Edward's conundrum, [he needs to feed on Bella to get better, yet Bella is a limited resource] fascinates.  I'm hopeful there will be some symmetry to your solution and am eager to learn what it is...

BUT as I hate to say goodbye to these characters I shall happily continue to enjoy your slowburn, syllable by syllable.  :)

Oh, and the lemons are great, did I mention?  LOL

Thank you for sharing, 

red

I don't know if this is good or not.  I think that he does need to do some serious hunting and glut himself before he feeds from her though.  I wonder if once he is sane again could they do a gradual reduction of her blood and kind of wean him off and still maintain his sanity.  I can't wait to see what you have come up with.

OMG, that was so f*ckHAWT!!

Does he need to drain her to be cured maybe, like taking a large dose of medicine? Calisle could have drained her slowly while Edward was gone and saved it so Eddie could have had her blood in a full dose.  I don't know.  I'm just grasping at straws here.  I don't think 'other' human blood will do though unless there is another singer perhaps.  I just hope Carlisle can come up with a solution and soon. Right now it looks like Bella will have to grow old all the while making blood donations so no hopes of becomming a vamp and staying with Edward.  I'm so into this story it's ridiculous.  And I love that the chapters are long and juicy.  I hate to get a story update that is 500 words.  That's like waiting all day to eat a crumb. Excellent story.  I love what you've done with it and it is nothing like what I was expecting it to be.  It's fantastic.

Oh the tension in this story is going to be the end of me!!

We have a saying in the south. You can say anything about anyone as long as it's followed by "bless her/his heart"..  I think I would go absolutely frigging nuts saying what all I would like to because I would be having to type that phrase after almost every sentence... I think in way they are BOTH nuts, ( bless their hearts). Bella was sweet but crazy to go back for him but love will make you do crazy things.( Bless her heart).. Poor Edward and his now uncaged monster are going to have to work really hard to not kill Bella ( bless his heart)....  See what I meant....LOL....  great post as always. I do so really love my hbv. He and Bella do love each other. Guess they will till death parts them...thanks for the chapter update...  Pam B.

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My old assistant at work used to say that all the time!  LOL

This isn't going to be good for them.  I'm actually really worried that Bella isn't going to make it out of this story alive.

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek! H&D chapter 29 update in my inbox...

*opens the tab. scrolls to the ending. sees that everything is okay*

Phew. Cos I really couldn't start reading knowing things wouldn't be okay, after that teaser you gave us... Okay, I can admit it. I'm a chicken, deep down. *grin*

I didn’t always know if what was in my mind was what was happening at the moment or a memory from the past.  Maybe it never happened at all.  I could no longer discern the difference.

Sometimes I knew.  Those times were worse.

Oh Edward, Edward, Edward... Poor boy. I hope there's a solution for this, really...

*goes downstairs and gets some waffles* Cos I'm hungry... And stalling. ^^

One voice always made it through the prattle of the others.

Come to me, son.

Why? Why him? Is this important, or is it just an Edward vs person of authority thing? Don't know...

He discovered fairly quickly that I was in no shape to be of any real use to him.

Hehehehehehe... Sorry, but that's just too funny. He finds another one if the gifts he wants, a mind-reader that doesn't need physical contact, and bam! He doesn't work... *snort*

He had tried to get me to drain the receptionist.

Bye, Gianna... :-D

“When they think about you, you’ll kiss me,” I remembered.  “The co-pilot watched you get on.  He thinks you’re hot.”

It took me a moment, but I get it! Heh. Samson, or what was his name again? The airport on the way to their island... Hehe.

“You’re thinner,” I said, running my hands over her hips.

You know... I think fat people have more blood than thin ones. So obviously Bella's going to have to eat regularly again, gain weight, to sustain Edward. Could it be funny to suggest Bella gains a LOT more weight? Though in my imagination, Edward will say a quick 'no' to that one. After all, The Even Ones are fine the way they are.

My hands and mouth found her breasts, and I thought I would just have to find a way to move into the space between her breasts and just stay there forever.

It's about time he thinks he should just go live there... Way time. :P

A/N: Is he so used to human blood again, and now he'll starting snacking on Bella's fellow students?

Bye, Mike Newton... Oh, and Tyler. :-D

Criminal Minds is up, gotta go!

Spikey

Oh I'm loving this story, its just so twisted and mental....and sweet.

at least they got him out of there.. though i doubt aro will be away for long. this cant last forever and hopefully carlisle has a cure :(

Uh oh, is Edward's little love next about to be invaded?