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Reviews For Hide and Drink
Reviewer: JB30 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Try and Fail

"Masturbation DOES lead to blindness!" I'm still laughing over this! I still have my fingers crossed Carlisle can figure this out. I loved their date. Thats the happiest we have ever seen Bella and it was nice. Loved the chapter Savage. Such a rollarcoaster ride with this story...I love that. Looking forward to the next update!

Reviewer: mgg (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 08:09 AM · On: Try and Fail

Cool really cool!!

 

I still loving it, still hooked, and still waiting for the cure, but loving all the smexing.

 

Thanks for sharing, see ya on the next chapter!!

Melissa

Reviewer: Mechcat (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 07:59 AM · On: Try and Fail

As always, great chapter.  I'm always happy when you post!  Not shocking that it may take a while to get the protein right. Although I do wonder whether Edward would be able to get what he needs from Bella if he was to change her. Not exactly a reversable process!

Thanks!

 

Reviewer: Mechcat (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 07:59 AM · On: Try and Fail

Good stuff!

Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 07:59 AM · On: Try and Fail

Well if at first you don't succeed.....have a hissy fit and walk into the walls!  Poor love-sick kids!!  Back to the old drawing board, Carlisle!  Knock knock...... ;)

Reviewer: twilgirl (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 07:56 AM · On: Try and Fail

As always, love it!

Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 07:36 AM · On: Try and Fail

 Alrighty then!  My computer made me sign back in, after I sent you my review!!  Grrrrrr

    So, here goes:   God Savage!  That was one hell of a chapter!  Your writing blows me away!  Everything,  from him making her acquiesce to his plea for her to say "Who's there," to his almost crashing the car, going blind in the shower, to his having to do battle with the monster and drink from her..  What can I say?  Girl, you got it all going on!   Beautiful, beautiful chapter!   "So much for sanity."   lol!  

    Perhaps I will stop by the forum, and say hi to you.  I already follow you on twitter and occasionally leave you comments, but of course you don't know it is me, and so maybe I'll DM you.      With affection   ~   Jeannie

Reviewer: VampSK (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 07:31 AM · On: Try and Fail

This...this right here is one of the most powerful "moments" I've read in fanfiction for a long while....

 

"I turned my face towards hers and opened my eyes, even though I couldn’t see the beautiful brown irises that grounded me.  I reached up and cupped her cheek, feeling the moisture from her tears as it collected on my thumb.  I brought my hand back to my own face, smearing the tears against my cheek before I settled back against her shoulder and closed my eyes again."

 

As always, thanks for writing and sharing! :)



Author's Response:

Yay!  That was my fav bit, too. :)  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Angel Wings 113 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 07:30 AM · On: Try and Fail

So close! But no take..... =(

Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 07:27 AM · On: Try and Fail

great chapter...and i shouldve known you wouldnt make it that easy...lol...wondering what will happen after or if Bella is changed, will Carlise always have to make blood for Edward?

Reviewer: imtruby (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 07:22 AM · On: Regain and Resign

Hi, I really like the story and find it far more different than the others. But for a long time, I feel like I'm reading the same thing. Even before his going to Italy, the treatment options started and it goes on and on. I wish there would be some unexpected actions and some new approaches. I do like the story but it's getting same old, same old you know. Sorry if I sound bitter but I want you to tell my sincere opinion. Thanks, I guess. Waiting for the next chap...

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 07:17 AM · On: Try and Fail

So close to a cure for Edward and with Carlisle on the job, its just a matter of time. Loved the knock-knock jokes, Edward can be so adorable when he loosens up a bit.

Reviewer: ambooboo (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 07:12 AM · On: Try and Fail

I never expected you to make it easy, that just isn't you Savage. Great chapter as always!!!

Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 07:03 AM · On: Try and Fail

That's new.  Edward going blind.

Reviewer: pirate51 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 06:54 AM · On: Try and Fail

Poor blind Edward.  How much more can her suffer?  Hopefully Carlisle will get it right soon, and they can live HEA. 

Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 06:46 AM · On: Try and Fail

LOL...that joke was almost as "good" as the "usher" joke.

Favorite line was "woke up the monster inside of me.  When he tried to approach the forefront of my brain, I punched him and told him to get the fuck out."  Blindward is taking no prisoners now.  But, OMG...talk about adding to the angst.  Everytime they think they see the light at the end of the tunnel, it ends up being a jar of fireflies which fly away when they get close.

I'm still appreciating your brilliant use of humor and drama tangled up into one messed up -- and sight-imparied -- Edward :-)

Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 06:32 AM · On: Try and Fail

JFC woman!  You do not make things easy, do ya? 

You do, however, kick complete and total ass!

I love these two and I love this world that you have created here.  Thank you for sharing it with us!

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 06:04 AM · On: Try and Fail

Good first try at a cure for Edward. I really enjoyed the Knock-knock conversation. Very cute,

Reviewer: amhatfie (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 05:54 AM · On: Try and Fail

Haha. Great job hun. Poor Eddie and Bella. I did think the mustang passing him was funny just so you know.

Alaina

Reviewer: Twi_LucyUK (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 05:51 AM · On: Try and Fail

Oh poor Edward :( Won't anyhing just go right for him and Bella? I hope so ;)  Great chapter as always - can't wait for the next update :) xx

Reviewer: noni LG (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 05:50 AM · On: Try and Fail

poor Edward that he's temporarily blind. can't imagine how it feels. this chapter full with emotions.. good emotion, sad emotion, love.. etc. it's so good!

Reviewer: lewna (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 05:45 AM · On: Try and Fail

Your's is my favorite story, currently!  It's so original; and so good!  I can't wait to see what happens next!  Keep up the awesome work.  You should be really proud of yourself.

Reviewer: starsong (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 05:44 AM · On: Try and Fail

For one brief shining moment we all were filled with hope at the end of last chapter, now we are back to this.  Oh, well, I still have faith that it will all work out, and there would be no satisfaction if the answer had come too easily.

Another great chapter, it was so strange having a normal, happy Edward, at least for a while.  I loved it, hope to see him soon!

I continue to love this story and have unreasonably excited reactions to seeing you have updated, so I look forward to the next time!

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 05:42 AM · On: Try and Fail

so bummed the first attempt didn't work! But I'm a firm believer in HEAs and I'm sure everything will be just fine. (I've put on my optimism hat...) Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks so much for writing!!

Reviewer: nanallac5 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 05:37 AM · On: Try and Fail

GHAAAA!! I ve never thought you would make it that easy! Actually I m prepared for the worst possible end, so anything you decide will be an HEA for me! LOL PS. feel free to send Boobward to tell me knock knock jokes anytime he wants *sigh* :) 

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