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Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 1 Big Money
hahahaha !!! that was so funny !!
Is that amount close enough ? Is that the ongoing rate ?
Author's Response: Good lawd, woman...I have no idea if that's the going rate! ha ha ha I don't know too many Vegas hookers. LMAO!
Thanks for the review. Working on Chapter 2 now.
Reviewer: edwardsmuse (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 1 Big Money
Oh. My. God. That was both hot and hilarious. I loved the ending.
Reviewer: 123appletree (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 1 Big Money
I love that both assume the other is an escort. I guess, the wish was father to that thought. This was a funny and interesting chapter. I am looking forward to reading more!
Reviewer: marteloise (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 1 Big Money
I really loved it! It was hot and the situation made me laugh. I can't wait to read about their next meeting! Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: vampgirl138 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 1 Big Money
Great lemon!
Reviewer: dvshipper (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 1 Big Money
Oh that was such a fun story. It was definitely hot but funny also. A good balance. I'd love to see this go for multiple chapters. :)
Reviewer: dvshipper (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 1 Big Money
Oh that was such a fun story. It was definitely hot but funny also. A good balance. I'd love to see this go for multiple chapters. :)
Reviewer: clancy (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 1 Big Money
priceless.... fucking priceless
while it was as sexy as hell i couldn't stop laughing at the situation they had got themselves into - more please.... PLEASE : )
Reviewer: jlugo (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 1 Big Money
Oh gosh, thats hilarious! Can't wait until next chapter.
Reviewer: fairytaleland (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 1 Big Money
Too funny. Can't wait till they meet again.
Reviewer: vysed (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 1 Big Money
It says complete NO... does that mean you are continuing this one shot... or is it really the end? Just curious before I mark it. if it's complete then I don't want to put it on alert.
Thanks
Author's Response: Hi! Actually I wrote it as a one-shot on FFn, and every review I received asked for more chapters...so I plan to write more chapters. =) Chapter 2 is done, but I need to have it beta'd. I don't know how long the story will be, but I'd guess somewhere under 10 chapters.
Have a great day!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 1 Big Money
LOL
LOVE THIS
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 1 Big Money
Oh, how delicious!!
Reviewer: Sandra (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 1 Big Money
Ooh...more!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 1 Big Money
hahahaha oh shit... well that is going to be an awkward meeting... but great story!!!
Reviewer: silleegyrl (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 1 Big Money
Wow! Great first chapter! This is going to be an awesome story! More please!
Author's Response: Hi silleegyrl! Thanks for the reply.
Chapter 2 is in the works, so stay tuned! =)
Karie
Reviewer: gabby871 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 1 Big Money
holy shit, this is so good. edward's gonna kick jasper's ass for telling him that. things are only going to get better from here. i can't wait for more. please update soon. thanks
Author's Response: HA! You are the only one who mentioned Edward kicking Jasper's ass. LOL! Yeah, I can't wait to write that part. *evil smirk*
Chapter 2 will be beta'd soon. Thanks for the review!
Karie
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 1 Big Money
Bwahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was FUCKING AWESOME!!!!! Sorry I've never laughed so hard. They both thought each other were escorts. LMMFAO!!!!! I loved it that Bella left Edward the money. That was fucking priceless!!!!!! The sex was amazing and hott as hell!!! I can't wait for the meeting because I got that feeling that is who Edward is meeting. I seriously can't wait until the next chapter. Great work on the first chapter.
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the feedback. Your review cracked me up! lol!
Yes...next chapter is the interview and I'm sending out to the beta very soon.
Thanks, again, for the review. =)
Karie
Reviewer: leigh1080 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 1 Big Money
omg!!! Love it!!! Can't wait for an update and to see where this goes!!! Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback!
Chapter 2 is in the works, so keep your eyes peeled for it! =)
Karie
Reviewer: Lily4 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 1 Big Money
OH.MY.GOD!!!!!! ****FABULOUS*****
More! More! More!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hi!
Thanks for sending me a review!! Glad you liked it!
Chapter 2 is in the works! =)
Karie
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