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Reviews For The Ugly Duckling

Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2011 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Futures

This is really getting good! I hope she gets to be friends with Edwin.

Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2011 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 3: Conversations

You have a broken italics tag here in chapter three. Just so you know.

This is really fun so far!

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2011 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Futures

I would feel better if Bella did not think about the Cullens so much.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2011 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 6: Decisions

Please find someone else. Even a human and change them. Leave the Cullens alone they are bad news.

Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2011 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Futures

Awesome. Got all caught up today. Can't wait to see where you go from here... :-)

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2011 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Futures

Well how cool! I'm so glad you haven't abandoned this story. It's really shaping up and looking more and more interesting. I really like the idea of Bella forging a life without the Cullens and actually doing stuff. Of course we all assume Edward will eventually come back into her life, but in the meantime there's nothing that says she can't learn and experience new things without them. She isn't just turning over and laying there like a lump, she's trying her hardest to make something of her newly undead status. I really like that.

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2011 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Futures

Thank you so much for continuing! I had just recently unfavorited it as I cleaned up my archive and thought it was abandoned. How often do you plan to update? Should I re-fav, or wait and see?

Author's Response:
Honestly, I'm hesitant to make promises since my schedule's so wacky, but I'm already half-way through the next chapter, so I'm keeping my fingers crossed that I get it done soon! (Not really an answer, I know :/ )

Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2011 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Futures

Amazing! This story has actually been updated! I'm sad to say that I had given up hope long ago. Great job on it though. Will the updates keep coming or do we have to wait another year or so before we get the next one? ;-P

Reviewer: hoppyliz (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Futures

Since it has been a while, I had to read again from the beginning to get back into it.

And I realised that there is quite a lot going on: Bella, the Wolves, Victoria, Matt, Anna, Edwin, Italy...

So, it seems there is still a long way to go, and I hope we shall get to read it soon.

Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Futures

yay for updating!!!

Reviewer: meyerfan (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Futures

what an interesting story - will the Cullens make an appearence soon??

Reviewer: suspiroscullen (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Futures

:P

I am new to the forum and this is the first story I read, I really liked!
we read in some time
bye

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Futures

looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Futures

Loving your story! I've been catching up - but I promise to faithfully review from now on!

Interesting how you show Bella's new perception of people, nad the couple of them that are able to tolerate her differentness. Matt and Anna are brave indeed!

I also love what you've done with her relationship with Jake and the wolf pack - we all know Jake could never let her go, not even if she was changed.

Thanks for writing and sharing!

Reviewer: gman63 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 1: Beginnings

Good to have a new chpt really enjoying this keep going please.

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Futures

This is a neat story! Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: TheSneakyFox (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 3: Conversations

Hmm... Poor Bella can't have her moose and eat it too, can she?

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 1: Beginnings

Whoa- this looks good!

Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Futures

I had to pinch myself when I saw this in my inbox! It's been what, a year?!? I'm so happy you updated though! I hope the next wait isn't half as long as this was! Can't wait for Bella vs. Victoria!

~Jazz~

Reviewer: Madietta (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2011 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 8: Meetings

This is such an intriguing story, I'm totally hooked. I see it's been nearly a year since you updated - I sincerely hope you haven't abandoned the story, because I would love to know what happens next. Great work.

Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 8: Meetings

Oh, poor Edwin. I'm surprised Bella didn't react to that name - it's awfully close to Edward. I'm glad he got the human part wrong. And I'm also glad Bella's a shield, so if she does meet the Volturi Aro won't find out anything about Edwin. Great chapter! Sorry it took so long to review, but I couldn't get onto twilighted for a while, and then I had to find the time to catch up on everything I've missed. Hope there's more soon!

~Jazz~

Reviewer: kkroonie (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 8: Meetings

I still am very interested in this story and can't wait to read more! Good luck writing!

Reviewer: princesspeach (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 8: Meetings

Really enjoy this story. Glad you're back.

Reviewer: holtzgirl (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 8: Meetings

Thanks for not giving up on this! I hope things settle down to be able to breathe a little!

Reviewer: ucsdgirl_cali (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 8: Meetings

Thanks for the AFDB note. I had no idea what that was. :) It's about time you updated!!!! Yes, there are people still following this story. Nice touch with "Edwin". Glad he turn out to be a total crackpot.

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