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Reviewer: mtomlinson (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 06:22 AM · On: Never Wander Alone
B-E-A-UTIFUL!!! Loved every bit of it.
Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Love is All We need
god this story is just making me sick and sad *sniff sniff* Damn Bella...just let him bite you already!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Never Wander Alone
This was just outstanding. Wow. Beautiful struggles, beautiful conclusion.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Where do we go from here?
Oh, I just found this story and am still crying over this chapter.
A truly moving concept. Wow. The cancer is sad but their lack of communication and everything over the past decade to me is even more so.
Beautiful story. Okay, now I have to find more Kleenex and finish it. *smile*
Reviewer: Sumsums (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Never Wander Alone
very good! i loved it!
Reviewer: Lori01 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Never Wander Alone
I really enjoyed reading this, it was a different and interesting perspective.
Reviewer: crazycoffeemom (Anonymous) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Never Wander Alone
ok well i have read the whole story and i wasnt sure how i felt about it cause i was worried that bella would die and i didnt want to read that and then hear how miserable edward was. But i kept reading and i was happy to see when he changed her i knew he didnt do it on purpose even without reading that part yet. I really like this story it was very good and i loved the ending. thanks
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Never Wander Alone
I very rarely feel like crying while reading fan fiction stories, but yours was so beautifully crafted that I found myself in tears. Bravo!
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Never Wander Alone
That was amazing!!! you're great!! this was a great story and you did a great job.
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Never Wander Alone
awwwwww so cool!!i was realy worried when i read the chapters names that Bella died! but i'm soooo glad Edward change dhe rbut i :O at him doing it like that though and at that time lol
brilliant story though!! and charlie's tribute was ace!!!
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Never Wander Alone
Bella may be overreacting. 30 isn't hagdom. Edward can pass as a man in his early 20's. I don't see Bella looking that much older, not after being changed.
Actually, I like that they live alone part of the time. I think it could be good for them. There's an advantage to looking like adults.
But yes, Edward should have changed her sooner.
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Never Wander Alone
I am speechless! Such an amazing story with detail and emotion.
My only issue is the ick factor of Edward physically 17 and Bella 30. It would have been nice for the "change" to have lessened her aging details and maybe helped her look more like 20 (the picture in my head is just wrong lol)
One of my favorite stories yet! Thanks for sharing :)
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Never Wander Alone
I just want to say ...THANK YOU!
This was am amazing story, I dont think that I have cried more in a long time. You put so much feeling into this, it was very realistic and tugged at my heartstrings.
I am so glad that it ended the way it did. Them renewing their vows couldnt have been more perfect.
Again thank you for taking the time out of your busy life to give us such a wonderful story. I am saving this one so that I can read it again. :D
Reviewer: ashlee87 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Never Wander Alone
Great story!
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Never Wander Alone
I really enjoyed the ending. I love how it wasn't simple and that they had issues.
Thanks for sharing your story.
Reviewer: Mizra (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Never Wander Alone
The entire story, I think, is summarized beautifully here:
"Then my life was turned upside down by this woman beside me and for once I was thankful that I had eternity. Thankful that I would never have to say goodbye to her and never again would I wander alone."
It's just beautiful. It's wonderfully happy, despite every bit of hardship they had come at them; Edward and Bella made it through and are now together... forever.
What young girl didn't dream idealistically about a certain someone for forever? I know I did. It's authors like you (and Stephenie Meyer) that have reminded us ladies what those childhood fantasties of love are about: hardship, come hell or high water and the light at the end.
Thanks for finishing this. :)
Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Never Wander Alone
wonderful ending.
amy
Reviewer: na-is-fba (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Never Wander Alone
I like that it's a happy ending and everything but if I was Bella I would be livid that he took so much time to change her and he only did it when he wanted to, not when she wanted to. And that she looks so much older than him, it only makes her kind of an outcast in the family.
anyway...good story, I liked it.
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Never Wander Alone
Thank you for a beautiful story. I cried, I laughed, and I simply enjoyed it. Thank you.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Never Wander Alone
Wow, thank you for sharing this with us.
I'm sorry that it's over though cos I really enjoyed it but this was a perfect ending.
I'm glad they went back to their meadow and that Edward recreated their first date there.
I hope you write more, you write really well.
Thanks again. YOU ROCK!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Never Wander Alone
Good story--congrats on a job well done!
Reviewer: Twilightlvr (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Never Wander Alone
Aww, I thought that was a wonderful ending. I've enjoyed this story the whole way through. Even though at times I felt incredibly sad for Bella. Loved how Edward was thinking over the years, of the course of their relationship. And so romantic that he proposed again and they married again so she can have that wonderful memory. Thank you for your story, as I said, I have most definitly enjoyed your writing and look forward to reading more from you.
Reviewer: sick_masochistic_lion (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Never Wander Alone
What a fabulous story. You really did a great job
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 11:11 AM · On: Never Wander Alone
Loved the triangulation with the weddings. Loved that you took the hard route and showed how the age difference still bothered them - that took guts. I just adored this story. The emotions, the creativity, just wow!!
Books :)
Reviewer: BloodRedNight (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Never Wander Alone
Wonderful
Thank You
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