Ummmm...WOW??!!  That was....yeah....H.O.T.!!  And it would appear that the next chap may pick up where this one left off?  (I hope I hope I hope)!!

For the record...I am on a Team somewhere in the middle of the "2 Teams"...I want them to BUT I still feel this twinge of guilt b/c she is married to the idiot! UGH! We'll see what you have planned for these two...I can go along with whatever.

Uhhhh...James? Freaking me out. Just sayin. What's he playing at anyway?

Two weeks sure feels like a longgggg time to wait!!!

Author's Response:

LOL! Yeah, two weeks IS kind of a long time, but I promise to make it worth the wait - can you say MORE LEMONS?! Yeah, I kind of thought that would make you happy! I can empathize with your "team" choice of "somewhere in the middle" (wow, that just sounded really dirty when I typed that). I'm being very mindful of the fact that Bella is indeed still married to the "idiot", as you called him. Have no fear, I will handle her physical relationship with Edward very delicately and tastefully. Oh yeah, and James - be afraid; be very, very afraid. Just sayin'. Thank you so much for continuing to read & review! :)

FM

Loved this chapter - I can't wait for the next update - I am in the camp of Team Dear-God-Let-Them-Just-Fuck-Their-Brains-Out-Already!!!!  I am curious so does this mean that Bella will be meeting Alice?

Update soon please!!!!

Author's Response:

LOL! I admire your "team" choice! Bella WILL be meeting Alice eventually, just not under the circumstances you're probably expecting! Stay tuned! ;)

FM

Oh honey, you KILL me with this chapter :) (For all the right reasons of course!)

I don't see their intimacy as moving too fast. Ok, so it doesn't change the fact that Bella is married, but she's clearly in a loveless marriage where her husband is cheating on her.

If this was just about instant gratification for her and/or Edward, they'd have simply screwed each other by now and let bygones be.

It just makes me smile that Edward is letting Bella call the shots - that he wants to worship her and make her realise what being loved is all about.

Author's Response:

Aww, sweetie! Your reviews always make my day! Thank you so very, very much for your kind words. I'm trying to be mindful of the fact that Bella is indeed still married, and I won't let her stoop *quite* to Jake's level, despite the extenuating circumstances! I kind of love Edward for letting Bella "call the shots" too! She's never had that feeling of "control" in her relationship with Jake, and it's a real confidence-boost for her!

FM

i think things are moving just right ..*sigh*

I cant wait for her to catch Jacob .

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, hun! I'm glad that you're enjoying the pace of the story. The confrontation with Jake is coming soon!

FM

I'm Team "How Can You End It There?" ;)
Loved it and I think with everything going on, they're moving along just fine.
I could go on and on, summarizing what you wrote but I won't. Suffice to say, it was awesome and I really wantbto read more. Edward is perfect so I can't wait until full consummation is had!

Author's Response:

LOL! "Team How Can You End It There" - LOVE IT! I'm so glad that you enjoyed the update. Don't worry, Edward will get some "reciprocation" in the next chapter! ;)

FM

BRAVO! Bella finally gets some REAL lovin'!

Edward's turn next??

Author's Response:

LOL! Edward's turn next? DEFINITELY!!! :)

FM

James is a spy for Newton? They are going to set a trap for Edward at her house??? Loving this story!

Author's Response:

Hi again! It's getting suspenseful now, isn't it?! LOL! Don't worry; all of your questions will be answered in time!

FM

Oh oh oh!!!  Edward wants to "re-nogotiate"!! Hell yeah!

GAH...I just loved this chap! This fic just gets better and better! Loved them snuggling in bed....the Dirty Dancing references, the massage, all of it!

I am so so glad E fessed up to what happened with Claire.  Was really worried about that...but it was better for him to be honest about it.

And oh my goodness...2 FULL DAYS ALONE? Whatever will they do to pass the time??  I need to know!!! :o)

Author's Response:

LOL! Thanks, hun! I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter, especially my homage to Dirty Dancing! I love that movie SFM! Now, what to do, what to do, with two full days alone together ... ;)

FM

First of all I love Dirty Dancing I own the movie and it has always been one of my favorites. Loved the reference. I'm hoping they get to do more fun stuff now that Claire is gone. Here's to hopin. Thanks for a great story so far.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you enjoyed the chapter and my homage to Dirty Dancing! I love that movie SFM! They will DEFINITELY be doing more "fun stuff" with Claire gone! ;) Thanks so much for your kind words!

FM

Hey, I just found this story a couple days ago and am now caught up. I love it! keep it up.

Author's Response:

Yay! I'm so glad that you found my story and that you're enjoying it so far! I will definitely be keeping it up - I update about every 2 weeks, or so, and there's still MUCH more story to tell. Hope you'll be back for more!

FM

omg!! gah! i'm so effin excited! i follow this story on ff(dot)net and here so sometimes i'm commenting back and forth, but that's beside the point. the point is that i love this story and i wish the chapters were longer and that i could read it all at once!!!! keep on with you're awesomeness!!!

 

~Tay

 

P.S. - i thought we were supposed to be worrying about claire? maybe she turns up later.....??

Author's Response:

LOL! This is the first "shorter" chapter I've written in a while - most of my readers complain that they're too long! Don't worry, though, you'll REALLY be satisfied (in every way possible) by the next chapter! It's going to be a looong day and night! ;) Oh, and don't count Claire out just yet. She'll be baaaack!

FM

I think Edward should get a PI to photograph Jake and Leah so Jake can't cite Edward cos I bet Daddy's girl Claire is gonna kick off

Author's Response:

LOL! Yeah, don't count Claire out of the game quite yet. You haven't seen the last of the car/stalker yet, either. Just sayin'! ;)

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