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Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 31: Retribution (qjmom)
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
FM
Reviewer: JayNahNah (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 31: Retribution (qjmom)
Charlie, my new hero!
Jake is going to contest the divorce settlement? On what grounds? His ex wife is happy? Good luck with that!
Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks, hun! I'm so glad that you enjoyed Charlie's POV. As for Jake, well, it it wouldn't be HIM if he wasn't being a complete ass! LOL. More coming soon! :)
FM
Reviewer: lil_jess (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 30: Collision
Poor Edward and Bella, they can't catch a break can they? I know you won't kill either of them off so I'm not worried. Wouldn't mind if you killed off Newton though. ;D
Author's Response: LOL! You're certainly not alone in your sentiments for Newton. If you don't feel like waiting for the update on Twilighted, I just posted CH 31: RETRIBUTION to FFnet. Just sayin'. ;)
FM
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 30: Collision
A cliffie....NOOOOOOOOO! Anyway, great chapter. Thanks so much for the update.
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks, hun. I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter, in spite of the cliffie ending. More coming soon! ;)
FM
Reviewer: BellaAguilera (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 30: Collision
i meant to say "is it too much trouble to ask if you just kill mike off?", but i somehow misplaced the sentence i confused myself :(
Author's Response: No worries, hun - I knew what you meant! ;)
FM
Reviewer: BellaAguilera (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 30: Collision
i can't remember the last time i read something non sexual that got my heart rate up. whoa!
did mike's eyes fall out? decapitated? hands chopped off so he'll never click a camera again?
ha ha! i knew james was coming back! and the pool man! james killed the pool man! aha! i got something right! is it too much to ask that you just kill
claire is acting like a typical teenage brat. she'll come around with a little hollywood glitter. teenagers can be bought so easily.
i'm starting to consider signing up to be a beta just for the sole purpose of getting to read the story before anyone else does!
Author's Response: Thanks so much - I'm glad that you enjoyed the action and suspense of the chapter! So, I guess I'm forgiven for the cliffie ending, huh? ;) You're not alone in your sentiments for Mike - most readers either want to see him dead or severely mangled! Lol. Nice call on figuring out that James killed Jose. I know that Claire was awfully hard on B & E, but she's not completely beyond redemption. Heh - if I ever need a stand-in beta, I'll let you know! ;)
FM
Reviewer: BellaAguilera (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 29: Refuge
okay. i'm not mad cuz i still have a chapter to catch up on! but wow! that had to come sooner or later....
as for the unexpected guest! grrrrr! carmen! duh! you always intertwine SM's twilight somehow! and i missed it! i totally blew it! of course carmen! you are really awesome. you can really spin a story so well that i would forget your formula.
Author's Response: Hi, hun! Glad to see that you're still reading and enjoying. Just try not to kill me after you read the next chapter, m'kay?! ;) Thanks for all of your lovely reviews!
FM
Reviewer: JayNahNah (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 30: Collision
The only reason I'm not saying "you suck" for that ending is because I truly believe that ulu believe in the HEA and wouldn't put these two together just to rip them apart. Plus, I'm hoping Newton gets his just reward and perishes for his erratic driving. Serves him right to hurt himself & not others...papparazzi scum!
Author's Response: LOL! You know me too well, hun. I'm definitely a sucker for a HEA! You're not alone in your sentiments for Newton. Most people are hoping he's either dead, or at the very least seriously maimed! I know there was a lot of heartfail in this chapter, but I think you'll be cheering a little bit by the end of the next one! ;) More coming soon ...
FM
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 30: Collision
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response: Thanks, hun. Glad you enjoyed it! :)
FM
Reviewer: chy3 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 30: Collision
*Stomps foot petulantly*
Author's Response: Hahaahaa! Well, I guess that beats a pitchfork or a flaming torch. Hope you enjoyed it anyway! ;)
FM
Reviewer: Velvetwhispers (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 30: Collision
hummmmmmmmmm....*in my mind* (not gonna yell ,not gonna yell) How could you?
update soon plz you cant leave them hanging in that SUV for tol ong .
Author's Response: LOL! Well, thanks for not yelling - guess. I promise not to leave you hanging for *too* long. The next update should be in about two weeks. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)
FM
Reviewer: Andi (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 29: Refuge
i love the image of bella yelling in spanish, what a spitfire!! lol. im mucho excited for more england talk and for bella to meet esme and carlisle. im wondering how edward and alice will respond to one another, and if edward will still have a job or not. lol
yikes claire and charlie...talk about the double wammy!! haha cant wait for the next chp.
Author's Response: LOL! Yeah, Bella finally found her backbone. I'm glad that you're excited about Bella going to England to meet Esme and Carlisle - that's going to be interesting, for sure! I have plenty more surprises in store for the next chapter - more coming soon! :)
FM
Reviewer: chy3 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 29: Refuge
Awww! Man!! I hate those! Cant wait for the next update.
Author's Response: LOL! Sorry about leaving you with another cliffie. I promise it won't be long until the next update! ;)
FM
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2011 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 29: Refuge
Good chapter......
Author's Response: Thanks, hun! Glad you enjoyed it. More coming soon ...
FM
Reviewer: roseblossome (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2011 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 29: Refuge
OMG I love it!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, hun - I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
FM
Reviewer: anniem40 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2011 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 29: Refuge
Great chapter - I was so happy when I saw this update in my inbox. I don't think Clarie will have an issue with all of this. I figured that Bella would go to England with Edward. Until next time.
Author's Response: Thanks, hun! I'm so glad that you enjoyed the update. Kudos to you for guessing the Bella would go to London with Edward. You'll have to wait & see what Claire's reaction is! ;) More coming soon!
FM
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2010 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 28: Thanksgiving
Is it Alice?
Thanks for the chapter, and looking forward to more as always.
Spikey
Author's Response: You KNOW I can't tell you! :P But, I CAN say that whoever it is will probably surprise a lot of people! Thanks so much for continuing to read & review, hun! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
FM
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 28: Thanksgiving
Great chapter and and evil cliffy to go along with it. Loved my read!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, hun! I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter in spite of the evil cliffie. More surprises to come! ;)
FM
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 16: Suspicion
of course jake is suspicious, doesn't he manage all of cullen's money? he would know he spent it on those flowers right?
Author's Response: Jake manages Edward's investments, but not his day-to-day checking accounts. Hmm ... perhaps he's suspicious because of his OWN guilty conscience?! ;) Thanks so much for reading & reviewing!
FangMom
Reviewer: allienicole16 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 28: Thanksgiving
I have a feeling it's going to be the jackass known as Jake. Am I right?
Author's Response: Hee, hee! You KNOW that I can't tell you who walked in on them, right?! I will say this, though: it's not who everyone's probably expecting. I have some surprises in store for the next chapter, so brace yourself! Thanks so much for reading & reviewing!
FM
Reviewer: Velvetwhispers (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 28: Thanksgiving
Jake perhaps caught them?
Can i have Edward for Christmas? no need to wrap him just strip him down and throw a bow on him ..mmmmm and a happy New Year it will be..sorry got carried away in my own little world.
Author's Response: LOL! I think you'll be surprised by who walked in on E & B. I have to agree with your Christmas wish - all I really want for Christmas is ROB (clothing and bow optional)! ;) Thanks so much for reading & reviewing!
FM
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 28: Thanksgiving
HOT HOT HOT!!! Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Thanks, hun! So glad that you enjoyed the update - more hotness coming soon! ;)
FM
Reviewer: Kuuipo (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 28: Thanksgiving
I love, love, love your story. Charlie knows and Claire is with him. Could it be Jake or did Claire and Charlie come back early? It could be Claire's cough but, I would rather it be Jake. Maybe he came back early.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind words, hun! I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. Ahhh ... the conspiracy theories! Who COULD have walked in on Edward & Bella?! I think you'll be surprised by what I have in store for the next chapter. Thanks so much for reading & reviewing!
FM
Reviewer: pumpkinmykitty (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 28: Thanksgiving
Great update! Have I told you lately how much I love this story?
Author's Response: Aww, thanks, hun! You're so sweet! I'm very glad that you enjoyed the update. More surprises coming in the next chapter! ;)
FM
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 28: Thanksgiving
That was a wonerful chapter... it was just what both of them needed. I'm guesing since Jake is out of town that it must be Charlie... oh my..
Happy Holidays and I look forward to so much more....
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind words, hun! I'm glad that you enjoyed the update. I think you'll end up being surprised by who walked in on them! The next update should be posted sometime between Christmas and New Year, so stay tuned. Thanks so much for reading & reviewing! :)
FM
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