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Reviews For A Betting Man
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

Go Baby!! Go baby!! GO!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Haha! Go she shall...

-mybluesky

Reviewer: enchantedmind (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 2

hehe... really cool.
That Edward sure has a way with her... Great job!! I'm intrigued!



Author's Response:

Yes he does...be strong, Bella!

-mybluesky

Reviewer: enchantedmind (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

Ooooh, somehow I don't think James' bet will hold up...

Good story, by the way - very entertaining!



Author's Response:

we shall see...muahaha!

-mybluesky

Reviewer: rubytuesday (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 2

Ooooh, intrigued ;)

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review...and I totally used to work at Ruby Tuesday, though I'm sure you're referring to the song :-) Haha

-mybluesky

Reviewer: SeeMyEvil (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 2

I like the look of this story, your Bella and Rose certainly seem like characters. lol Will be adding this to favourites.

I just wanna point something out in case you're not noticing - when Bella is thinking something you say she is 'wandering' when really it should be 'wondering'. Because 'wandering' means you're walking around aimlessly, and 'wondering' is thinking about something. :) Just something I noticed - for your benefit too I hope.



Author's Response:

Dang, stuff like that always gets me...apparently I'm a sucker for hoped/hopped, forth/fourth, and now wondering/wandering. Thanks for pointing it out, I'm always open for good constructive criticism! Keep it coming and thanks for the review.

-mybluedsky

Reviewer: tigger12 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 2

i really like this story! its different and interesting :)



Author's Response:

Thanks a bunch!

-mybluesky

Reviewer: Daisy Mae (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 2

Enjoyed it!  Bella---you go for it girl!!



Author's Response:

Bella grins and wiggles her eyebrows deviously...oh yeah, she's totally going for it.

-mybluesky

Reviewer: sjg12 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 2

Good story. Sounds a lot like a book I just read. Bet Me by Jennifer Crusie. Ever heard of it?
S



Author's Response:

A real book...what's that? Lol! No, I haven't heard of it, but that's interesting...will definitely check it out when I have more time! Hope you still enjoy the story.

-mybluesky

Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 2

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks! It's over halfway finished.

-mybluesky

Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 2

wow, great story! i love it already, sounds like you're going to have a lot of fun with it.



Author's Response:

I sure hope so, I have lots of fun things in mind for these two...>:-)

-mybluesky

Reviewer: sabr101 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 2

please keep writing hopefully more reviews for u



Author's Response:

Will do, thanx!

-mybluesky

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

OMG I LOVE THIS

I AM HOOKED

DYING FOR AN UPDATE



Author's Response:

thank you much!

-mybluesky

Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

funny premise; hope that you update soon!



Author's Response:

thanx ma'am!

-mybluesky

Reviewer: Twylight_fan_4_life (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great first chapter!  Can't wait to read more.  Post soon!!!



Author's Response:

If my fingers had asses they'd be all typed off. Next chapter soon!

-mybluesky

Reviewer: Daisy Mae (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting storyline----will follow to see how you develope your story.

Like the premise, though.



Author's Response:

Thanx, darling! Hopefully I won't disappoint.

-mybluesky

Reviewer: blue_eyes (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

nice start :)



Author's Response:

Thanx!

-mybluesky

Reviewer: clancy (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

oh i can not wait to read more : )

I hoe has ALOT of fun with him - at his expense of course !!

Author's Response:

She will, don't worry - and 100% at his expense.

-mybluesky

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hold strong, Bella.  Please do no let Edward win this time, mybluesky...at least not yet!  This does sound like it could get interesting.



Author's Response:

Bella's a toughy, I promise. She'll make him work for it ;-)

-mybluesky

Reviewer: sugaraddikt (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

This seems like an interesting story line, can't wait to see where it goes!

watch out for spelling mistakes, you had a couple in here, hoped on the train to china, and forth drink.

xx



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I guess my spellchecker doesn't fix those, since they're actual words...lol. Whoospie, I'll be on the lookout for those next time.

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