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Reviews For A Betting Man
Reviewer: Shonla (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 32

Great chapter.

Reviewer: jdhsmomth (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 32

Loved this chapter! Can't wait for the next!

Reviewer: loveofhenry (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 32

they certainly have come a long way

wonder what bella was going tp say tp edward but decided not to????

Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 21

I was just wondering if my "johnny-come-lately"-ness could still get those EPOVs? I just have to find out what this guy's thinking. Please, with frosted Cullens on top?

Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 32

Still as good as ever.

Reviewer: pommedeterre (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 32

I found this story a couple days ago (or maybe just yesterday? I don't know) and I've had a reading marathon.

 

Thanks for writing it! Can't wait to see how you wrap up the last bits :)

Reviewer: megsten (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 32

this story is too good and too far along to believe you'd abandon it. i think everyone was just chomping at the bit for the EB sex. i look forward to reading the epi!

Reviewer: leechlover81 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 32

so sad this is about to end but can't wait to see how it ends up.

Reviewer: Trysh (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 32

i absolutely love this story! I am sad to see that it's ending though :'( but all good things must eventually come to an end :'(

Reviewer: 11dogs (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 32

Thank you for the great chapter. I really love your original story!

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 32

Oh wow, it could have been so easy for Bella to assume the worst of Edward (given his history) when she turned up at his house to be confronted by Lauren leaving. I'm surprised she didn't take the opportunity to try and convince Bella something more was going on with Edward, but full props to Lauren for being so classy about the situation. For recognising that she no longer stood any kind of chance with Edward.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 32

So happy for Edward!

Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 32

great chapter! I love them together, its so cute how happy they are with eachother <3 Thanks for the update! Its definitely sad that its almost over:( I have really enjoyed this story!

Reviewer: breaking dawn 84 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 32

que susto!!!!sabia que edward no haria nada malo a bella despues de todo lo que ha pasado para conquistarla e que lo perdonara pero aun asi bella podia no haber entendido las cosas  y pensar a mal menos mal que ha sido madura

 

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 32

Bella and Edward are seeing each other all weekend long.  During the work week they text and call each other off and on all day.  Once they started dating as a couple things moved quickly.  Physically they were compatible.  Bella got her first interview and story.  She was excited.  When she was writing it Edward felt himself a distraction, he went home to be alone and give her time to finish her article.  Lauren stopped by for a surprise visit.  Edward let her in and they talked.  Edward told her he found a woman and he was happy.  Lauren asked to meet her.  A knock on the door was Bella as Edward was showing Lauren to the door.  Bella's eye went wide.  Edward worried Bella would get the wrong idea.  Lauren was introduced to Bella as the woman who makes him happy.  When Lauren left, Edward explained they just talked and he told her about Bella.  All he did was hug her goodbye.  Bella is the only woman for him.  Bella actually believed him.  She trusted him, if he said nothing happened, then nothing happened.  Their relationship was getting stronger.  The love and trust between them is deeper. 

Reviewer: endless-bellezza (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 9

definitely curious about the terms of the bet and the cost.

Reviewer: cemyers3 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 32

Thanks for a great update!!  I'm so sad it's ending already ... what a great story!!

Reviewer: sfiddy (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 32

Yay!!  When I saw that Lauren was here, I thought "please don't do anything!!"  Some people just can't let a story end and love to bring back the drama.  Thanks for writing a nice story that seems to be wrapping up beautifully!!

Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 32

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO i don't want it to end :( you are sooooooooo brilliant though i mean just everything in this chapter was incredible bella getting that opportunity and then her meeting lauren everything was just amazing im kinda curious still what happened to have edward so anti-relationship i love you doll and i cant wait for more but i also dont want it to end haha quite the pickle huh haha you are amazing :D

Reviewer: seekingbecca (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 32

i love this story, sad to see it end!!!

Reviewer: wifie_b (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 32

Great chapter...you had me worried, but...Great chapter!!

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 32

It's good that Bella caught Lauren there. If not there still would be that unanswered question in the back of her mind.

Reviewer: TwiDi812 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 32

Awww Edward really wants this to work!! Will be sad to see this one come to an end but can't wait to see how you wrap this up.

Reviewer: endless-bellezza (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 4

Clearly Bella is a spaz and letting her operate heavy machinery was a bad idea.

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 32

im so glad that lauren didn't do anything stupid to mess with bella and edward! i could see bella putting the smack down on that girl!

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