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Reviews For A Betting Man
Reviewer: Cullenbychoice (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 11

This story just keeps getting better all the time :) thank you very much!

Reviewer: nbpowlk (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 3

ahahahahahahah. edward got dissed lol

Reviewer: MsTwiSwe (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 11

Ehhh, Bella got it bad, really(!!!) - but Edward got it abso-fucking-lutely much worse.

First - a kitchen, totally ruined by Bella - the one he should be nice to but just want to yell at!! Second - He has OCD - poor little thing. Third - he's in a bet he regret but can't seems to find a way out of it. Fourth - He is falling(probably painfully) for Bella.

Poor Edward!! Just a question; is Alice going to shows up, and in that case what should be her role, Edward sister, or Jaspers childhood friend??

   // MsTwiSwe aka Stina

Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 11

Like the couch romp - wonder how they are going to get out of the whole bet thing with both of them still liking each other like the obviously do! ;)

Achilles

Reviewer: cullen_fan7 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 11

I LOVE THIS STORY! absolutely love it. I just read all 11 chapters at once and cannot wait for the next ones!!!!!! You are extremely good at getting the characters emotions across to the reader. I love it, as previously stated, and can't wait for more.

Reviewer: LC Cann (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 11

I'm loving this Edward and Bella combo - keep it up!  Edward with OCD...what a freaking riot. :)

Reviewer: blkeyes_redlips (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 11

fuck. Damn Edward! All irresistable and shit. Ugh, so hot. <3

Reviewer: BRANDY_D (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 11

another great chapter....i am really enjoying this fic...i love stories that have a chase!!!!

Reviewer: fawnlike (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 11

Great chapter!

Reviewer: jslack0816 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 11

Great chapter. I'm loving this story. It makes me laugh, and I've had a ridiculous time trying to find one that's not just chocked full of damn angst! I can handle some UST, especially when you throw in a hot ass make out bit. Thanks a damn ton for that! Great writing!

Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 11

Great chap and awesome make out session!  You hardly ever read any of those any more!

Reviewer: leechlover81 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 11

Loved it as usual, can't wait for hot tub Edward! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 11

Loved it!  Sweet torture for both of them.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 11

good chapter, can't wait for more EPOV

Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 11

lol..i love this!....there are tooo many stories that are about edward and bella immediately falling in love, yet their all about horny sex..

 

this is more real..hahahah...

great story!

looking forward to next one..:DDD

Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 10

i love this story soooo much i cant believe its taken him this long to be the good boy i cant wait to see what goes on i cant wait for more :D love it :D you are brilliant my dear keep it up :D and i would love to come and play but months and months ago i tried to set up a forum account and i got the first email but not the second so i am without a forum account to play with you guys :( o well as long as you keep updating i should be fine Should be being the key words haha :D

Reviewer: emmetsotherlover (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 10

I think bella needs to and help edward relieve his problem, its sure to drive him crazy although she would more than likely getting a telling off from rose for doing it.

I do love hows she driving him crazy.

Reviewer: adma845 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 8

loving this story

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 10

well this chapter was short but very good...can't wait for more.

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 10

I so loved that she destroyed his kitchen.  That was too funny and brilliant!  And the water fight was great. 

I like his plan but I really hope that Bella can push that limit of his too.  Can't wait!

Reviewer: Miliejolie (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 10

I don't want Eduardo to be a good boy! Bring on the bad boy! C'mon, ya know ya want to unleash him! Great chapter!

Reviewer: 123appletree (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 10

I cannot think clearly right now. I mean, you used that word. That word! “Tiramisu”. The most delicious dessert I have ever eaten. The Italian restaurant down my street makes a really creamy version and last summer I made a version with strawberries.

Oh, and wet Edward wasn’t bad either. Edward and Tiramisu. Great. Now I won’t be able to function all day. 

I love the banter between Edward and Bella, especially when they forget about the bet. In those moments I forget about the bet, too. I am not sure whether this is good or bad...

I am looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: mrscullen (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 10

I just found your story and I love it! Are you going to bring in Alice and Jasper at some point? Update soon, please!

Author's Response: Alice? Yes. Jasper? As of right now, no. Sorry, I love him too, but he just doesn't fit in with this story...although he does exist, he's just in Cali with alice. I'm still not sure whether or not he'll come to visit.

Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 10

i can really see that bella is starting to get under edwards skin ,i was worried for a minute that emmett would be exposed because of his help in getting bella into edward house but was happily relieved ,i dont want the game to be over to soon but when does i wonder which one is gonna be shedding the tears?

Reviewer: jattyca (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 10

I'm finding your story oddly fascinating. There is more to Edward than meets the eye. He has a dark past, and an ulterior motive for entering into this reprehensible arrangement with James. I'm intrigued enough to keep reading. And Bella is just fun. I really enjoyed what she did to his kitchen (although, being OCD about the kitchen myself, I was cringing).

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