Awwwww.... Our Edward got a door slamed on his beautiful delicious face. This story ROCKS!!

I have been looking forward to this all week- thanks for the promise of updates at least once a week

take it from someone who works 60+hours a week- the full load of classes will just turn into working just as hard- hang in there and keep writing xoxo

 

 

 

ah, alice...i love her.

Sister Alice awaiting on Edward's doorstep.  With a wonderful invitation for dinner at Esme and Carlisle's house.  Bella has to face Rose to discuss her date/dinner at Edward's house the night before.  Rose wants all the details.  So Bella invites Jake hoping he'll be able to halt Rose and her questions.  Rose has too many margaritas and sure won't be stopped for the information.  Bella tries to delay by having Jake giving wedding information.  Then drunk Rose wants to know why Bella was glowing.  Bella doesn't want to tell Rose it was caused by an erotic dream. Of course the dream was taken from the activities on his couch before she left to go home. Edward having made a semi sex date with Lauren.  That's pretty low considering he's suppose to be romancing Bella.  Well Rose decides she hasn't gotten enough information than kissing.  Jake is getting upset about kissing.  Bella is trying to tell Jake Edward won't be around for 2 weeks if she doesn't at least kiss him.  Of course she won't be telling them it's been more than just kissing between them.  Rose grabs Bella purse and takes her cell phone trying to make Bella call Edward.  Bella doesn't want to call him. Rose dials and a woman answers, it's Alice, but Bella doesn't know that.  Bella is surprised that a woman answers his phone.  Especially when the woman won't identify herself.  So Bell describes herself as a Edward's girlfriend.  Then Alice says she his sister and was Bella Lauren.  Of course Bella got upset about being called Lauren.  About that time Edward is handed his phone by Alice.  Bella demands who is Lauren and why is a woman answering your phone.  Talk about one angry woman.  Then she realized I'm not suppose to be a jealous girlfriend.  There is the bet and I'm playing him to get a date for the wedding.  She is using him and playing him, taunting him, leaving him frustrated, eventually denying him herself, and making Edward lose the bet. But Bella is hurt and upset inside.  Edward explains that Lauren was someone he used to see.  Bella figured out not date, but sex player.  Edward mans up and admits he hasn't seen her since they have been dating.  He apologized for his sister and the misunderstanding.  Bella realized her role is to mess with his mind and drive him crazy while dangling him along.  She told him Fine.  Surprised Edward Bella gave him with the explanation.  Bella went back to Rose and Jake told them about the conversation. Rose wanted to call Emmett and have him kick Edward's buns because he was cheating on Bella.  Edward made no comments about Bella describing herself as his girlfriend.  Very surprising to the reader.  Maybe Edward is starting to think of her as his girlfriend.  Bella took Rose's phone away and said no.  She'll deal with it.  Finally Bella returned home, checked her phone, and had email from Edward.  Simple I am sorry E.  Sorry for what, Alice answering his phone?  For Lauren sex buddy? Making her upset? or what.  Biggest surprise was call from Alice later that night.  Bella going out with Alice.  Boy will Edward be upset when he finds out his sister and Bella went out together.  Sneaking behind his back, maybe Bella will learn more about James.  Give her another opinion on why Edward was the way he was.  Alice hinted at because of their mother's death. How would that make him a man whore?  Not wanting a serious relationship?  Is he afraid of losing someone who he loves?  Is he afraid everything he loves leaves him?  Could be, guess we'll have to wait until the future chapters are posted.  I really enjoyed the way Bella with the help of Emmett has been messing with Edward's head.  That poor boy doesn't know which way is up or down.  He can't figure Bella out.  Just when he thinks he knows her, she changes her patterns to be another woman.  Making her a challenge as well as intriguing puzzle to figure out.  Looking forward to Edward's new seductive activities to win the bet.

Loved it. I'm glad Alice is here.

Great chapter.  I want to kick Edward's arsk!  Lauren...pftt!  So glad Alice interrupted his night out.

Drunk Rosilie is my favorite

Wow, that was a great chapter, would love to hear Bella seducing Edward by phone and reading all about him getting steamy!!

Great new chapter, can't wait for the next.

I really enjoy your story.  It kills me that it isn't complete and I have to wait for each update!  I just want to know what happens! :o)

:) yayy alice!

i do love this story, i hope h realises hes kinda falling for her soon.

update soon please, im hooked :)

For someone who thinks that she is a "nice" person, I find Bella pretty mean....and whiny, and with her antics...she's just as bad as someone who would make a bet to bed someone.

Interesting....I'm anticipating that this is all going to come back to bite her in the ass eventually.

 

WHAT? NO... COME BACK... THIS CHAPTER CAN'T END HERE...  OMG... ALICE COME IN THE STORY. YOU'RE GOOD. LEFT ME ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT THEN DROPPED ME ON THE FLOOR. GOOD JOB