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Reviews For A Betting Man
Reviewer: NicoleLight (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 15

Great chapter!  I was so excited to get an update. loved the ending - I hope he doesn't get mad!!

Reviewer: KellyCullen (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 14

Amazing story...super excited to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: Miliejolie (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 14

Great couple of chapters! Keep it up!

Reviewer: Rose1130 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 14

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story!!!!

You have done a great job..please, please, don't make us wait too long for an update!!!!!

Love drunk Bella, love Edward and Emmett and Rose and Alice!!!

Thanks so much for writing this!!!!

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 14

freaking love this story!!! ahhh drunk conversations - never more truth is brought about than when you are drunk!!!! LOVE it; can't wait for more.

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 14

LOL. Drunk Bella.

Reviewer: mfrancesj (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 14

She better make Edward work harder!

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 14

Great!  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 14

getting a promise from a manwhore solely based on his credibility

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 13

Love it!  Again!  :)

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 12

There was kind of an overuse of the word "yet" in there.  I only say this because I love the story SO much and that's the only possible thing that could change to make it absolutely perfect.  Keep up the good work!  :)

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 14

hmmmmm well that was interesting.......he has a conscience!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 14

I loved Bella and Alice's time together.  And while it was hard, I am glad that Alice was honest with Bella.  It is a very tricky game she is playing.  And loved drunk Bella and Alice.  They were fun - hope to see them again!!

I did like that Bella asked Edward about his feelings and that he was uncomfortable with his decision.

Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: fashionista19 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

I can't remember if I've left a review for this story yet or not, but I can honestly say it's one of my absolute favorites! I always anxiously wait until you can update. I love the plot you've set up and how both Bella and Edward's personalities are evolving and it's realistic. They are attracted to eachother, but it's not like they're getting married tomorrow. I'm just in love with your story, what else can I say? Lol. Please update soon! I can't wait! : )

Reviewer: HayleyLoux (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 14

Mahhhh, im so bloody addicted to this story its insain! hurry up edward and fall in love ;)

your a fab writer and cant wait for you to update soon :)

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 14

I thought for sure Bella would blurt out about the bet to either Edward or Alice. Especially being so drunk! I like how this is progressing! It's fun! I'd love to see James show up to see if Edward was being upfront with him about not being with Bella. James is a snake no matter how you write him. ;)

Great writing!

Reviewer: alfieman (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 14

amazing! keep them coming - its hard waiting for the next chapter! longer ones would also be appreciated!

thanks

Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 14

hah I love Alice! :)

Nice chapter so more please soon - I want to see if she eventually reveals to him that she knows and what happens next :)

Achilles

Reviewer: pepper_cucumber (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 14

i don't like bella in this chapter... i understand she's drunk but she acts like a desperate drunk, she should have called jake or rose to take her home. oh well i can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 14

UU OO I hate those "Why dont you like me" drunken phone call.  Very well done you made me chuckle.

Loved that Bella and Alice have hit it off.

And loved that somewhere deep inside Edward does have a decent bone and didn't take advantage of Bella in her drunken state.

Reviewer: green_eyes4646 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 14

totally in love with this chapter i love this story!!! update soon!!!

Reviewer: ifka (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 14

I think Edward is in deeper than he realizes 

Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 14

Wow what a chapter. Way to go Edward. If I was bella I would have smacked him and blabbed about the bet to both- glad she didn't. Can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks

Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 14

i'm surprised she didn't blurt it out in her drunken state lol

Reviewer: t-reader09 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 14

Im really liking this story... are we close to finding out what the bet actually is? who will bring up the bet first edward admitting it? or bella asking about it? 

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