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Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 21
Poor Bellie boo.
Reviewer: auditqueen (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 21
argh! What is the bet??? Update soon!!!
Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 21
gasp!!.i knew it would be soon, but gasp the way bella's seeing the texts!!..hope bella confronts him about it!!
Reviewer: Kiwibeme (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 21
Awww man! I damn cliffhanger! That text message is subjective...it looks bad, but if you look closer he is using a plural in there! You need to update soon...the suspense is killing me! =)
Reviewer: Mickster (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 21
Thank you for the update. I LOVE this story. I wish this was out in the open already. It is driving me nuts!! I love how much Edward seems to totally love Bella. So cute!
I hope you will let us know the terms of the bet soon, because I am so confused as to why he doesn't just bow out and let James win.
Thanks again for the update!
Micki
Reviewer: twiggs66 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 19
Ha! Edward didn't really think he didn't have competition did he? I mean, Tyler was just following up on a conversation they had at lunch. The only thing Bella needs now is for James to show up! Looks like this story is really heating up, but I'm wondering who will end up taking her to the wedding, I have a feeling Edward is gonna bail...
Reviewer: JM91590 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 21
i love love love this! great chapter. i just knew that bella would wind up reading those texts. dammit to hell edward just confess all already and stop being a deucher.
can't wait for the next chapter ! (and of course the edward pov... :) )
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 21
OMG! I can't WAIT to see what she does next! It would seem to me it would hurt Edward more if she was really nice to him before she broke it off. And I'm looking forward to finding out whether she tells him she's known all along! This story is really fun, I have really enjoyed it! (And I do want the EPOV!)
Reviewer: justonekiss (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 21
love, love, love this story. I can't wait for more!!! glad it's all gonna be out in the open soon.
Reviewer: tkeaton1 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 21
I had a feeling that would come back to bite him in the ass! MAN! cant wait for more!
Reviewer: logan671 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 20
I enjoyed this chapter. Awe, Edward is falling in love. Thank you for updating. I look forward to every one.
Reviewer: pinkstampkat (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 21
Oh I just love this story! I missed last chapter so I got a two-fer tonight! Woo-hoo! Can't wait for next update! Poor Bella!
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 21
Why doesn't she just tell him.........so frustrated with both of them, and then they'll have a blow up at the wedding and ruin it.......aaaaarrrggghhhhh!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Raspy_Luv (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 21
I hope it doesn't take too long for Edward and Bella to get on track after the reveal.
Reviewer: amkes88 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 21
Great as always. Is the big reveal gonna happen during the wedding? Then leah can beat edward down for trying mess up her wedding because clearly she is the tougher 1 in that relationship lol.
Reviewer: SillySarahAnnn (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 21
Oh my gosh so close, so close, so close!! I swear I can almost taste it. I hope beyond hope that bella uses those text messages to out him on this silly game then and there and doesn't wait until after the wedding. I feel like it would be dragging it on a bit too much if she waited to out him. Now is her chance! She needs to take it! Especially before she gets hurt even more.
I love this story, you are doing a good job with it. please update soon.
Reviewer: Trysh (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 21
omg...i forgot about those messages to james....D'OH!!!!! I'm still curious as to what the end result of this bet would be...Poor Bella :'( How long do you expect this story to be? I am really enjoying it and would hate for it to end :'(...lol. although i know all good things must come to an end :)
Reviewer: misspanda (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 21
OMG! I just knew those texts were going to come back to bit him! Seriously, I cant wait to see what Bella does with this new info
Reviewer: ginabina (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 21
The ending of this chapter made me very sad. I feel very bad for Bella and he sure is going to have to work awfully hard to convince her she was more than a bet to him. This is one of my favorites and I have thoroughly enjoyed every twist and turn. Keep it up!
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 21
Great Chapter!
Reviewer: KristenDH (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 21
Ugh noisy bella doesnt she know snooping gets you in trouble. I know its impossible now to but...... Well let hope that they can figure this out and make it till the wedding!
Reviewer: EmelieHenriksson (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 21
I'm really anxious to see how this turns out... I love me a happy ending, and I'm loving this story so far... great job on it! I'm always impressed with fanfic-authors who just pump out chapters as if it was water from a tap or something... It takes so much work!
Reviewer: jessica730 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 21
Once again, a great chapter. I really appreciate the slow build of the characters and the relationship. For 10 plus days, it somehow feels much longer. I do hope things will finally be put out in the open, though I suppose if Edward lasts beyond the wedding, Bella will have her answer about the bet. Please update soon!
Reviewer: imlikecandy08 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 21
i love this story... and thank you for the HEA part in your notes... I read one once for like two days straight, almost lost my job and then bella died at the end I was so pissed for like three days that people just avoided me...hahahaha.. so thank you for letting me know i can rest easy and keep reading... again really great job...
Reviewer: marysway (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 21
Awh this is getting better and better. Update soon. Can't wait to see how this plays out even with HEA ending :-)
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