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Reviewer: Belindella (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, great first chapter! I've been meaning to get into this story for so long. I finally have some time and I'm so glad! I love that you haven't made James TOO bad, that he's a regular guy who's a creep. And Rosalie on the phone came off so normal and a great friend.
Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 21
omg Please update real soon. All caught up now and a cliffie. Awesome story by the way. Can't wait to read more soon
Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 21
such a good story
Reviewer: pixiechix7 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 21
Bella should have called Edward on his crap a long time ago, but then, there wouldn't be a story, would there? *sigh*
You want to hate him for his womanizing ways, but you just can't. Although, did something happened with his bio dad? He doesn't get mentioned much?
Reviewer: kncopeland (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 21
I just found your story last night and haven't stopped reading. It is awesome and can't wait for more. Parts of the story made me laugh out loud. Love it.
Reviewer: weerussia (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hi, just want to say been reading this story for a while a thiught it was time i came out of hiding & tell you i think your story is fantastic. Really, it manages to be light but heartfelt at the same time, i can only assume thats a feat to write. Can't wait to see how the story progresses, thanks for giving us some great reading x
Reviewer: Luny (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 21
Hiii
I just began reading your story, and i've got to say its amazingg..though i do see some heart break coming about. Poor Bella. Poor Edward. Both playing each other. Both falling for the other. and both ganna have a heart break.
Please continue soon...and do i get a EPOV outtakee?
Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 21
I'm so hoping that Edward comes clean before the wedding, I think if he tells her about the bet and the terms, because I'm assuming it's something serious that has to do with Alice, then she might just want him to win. I've been loving your story. I've been reading it on my iTouch though and can't review on there. Great work!
Reviewer: mms1972 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 21
i'M totally addicted! great writing and great story! can't wait for the update!
Reviewer: babe4ever (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 21
So excited to see where this fic leads :D defo one of my top 10 :D
Reviewer: ahill1 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 21
i just started reading this fic two days ago, on my lunch break no less, and im now addicted. i blame you. regardless, i love it, and of course, as it gets to the really good part, and iver had twenty some chapters to indulge, it stops. so im really, really, really hoping that you type pretty damn quick haha.
on a more serious note, awesome fic.
Reviewer: joyful (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 21
love it can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: krizzie (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 21
ohmy. i'm so curiuos to what's gonna happen.:)) next chapter,please. :D
Reviewer: littlemonstercpb (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 21
James is such a sleazebag. What did Bella see in him anyway? Edward seems to be falling just as hard. James must have some good dirt on him.
Reviewer: misscharlotte (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 21
i love your story ! you are an awesome writer. i cant wait to see how it ends :)
Reviewer: 1505081 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 21
i really love your story!
when is the next chapter :D
Reviewer: AMooreM (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 21
wait im like depressed that this is the last update... whend o you think there will be another one? of course I would start reading it when the last chapter is literally like a culminating moment. On a different note... I really love Edward and Bella's banter about the cat. For some reason it really just shows how much they're getting along and genuinely like each other. They were bickering a lot there for a while, and I dont know it's kind of conversations like that that make a relationship and they get skipped over in a lot of cases, so I really liked it.
Reviewer: vampfan173 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 21
thanks for the EPOV while waiting for the next chapter. Really want to know how E is gonna get out of this one! What I appreciate about your writing is how you have taken these characters and made them your own. As I read, I don't imagine E & B of Twilight or RP & KS. These characters are unique unto their own. good work
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 21
ewwwwwwwww i hate james i mean i know that without him they wouldnt have met in all probability but still ewww then all the drama that emmett and rose are bringing but idk i think this is just a really good story so far :D i love you :D you are brilliant :D cant wait for more
Reviewer: jo43 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 21
OMG! I was wondering when Bella was going to read the text because I knew as soon as he wrote it you were going to put it in somewhere! Poor Bella - now I know she's going to pour it on - hopefully being very brutal to him because she thinks he deserves it. Can't quite figure out what the bet is for - is James tied to the fashion world somehow? Why didn't he just call the bet off if it's not that big of deal? Hope she gets back at him good but then again, he mans up to tell her first. Can't wait to see how it ends!
Reviewer: Artie (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 21
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed this fic before, but it's one of my favourites. I look forward to your weekly update and you leave me hanging at the edge of my seat every week.
Can't wait for the big reveal. Are they going to make it to the wedding or is the proverbial going to hit the fan beforehand? I wonder. Well done on a great angsty heartrending and sweetly romantic story.
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 21
Ugghhhh.... the texts are evil~ ! Poor Bella!
Reviewer: vampfan173 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 20
reread this chapter. . . missed where Bella says, " we can't have sex" and Edwards respects her wishes but they get pretty darn close! I think I luv this E more than "Twilight" E. . . good job!
Reviewer: karabell (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 21
love it! can't wait to see what happens now!
Reviewer: vampfan173 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 21
Oh no! you did not just end it there!!!! Please don't make us wait very long. My poor heart just can't take this. P.S. can't stand cats and just thinking about Ursula's hair had me scratching. Update soooon plzzzz
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