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Reviewer: HHKU (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Coercion By Blackmail

Great start! I can't wait to read more.  I'm a little nervous that Bella wasn't confirmed dead (if Alice were to see her dead body) and may come back in the picture, but time to be patient and see how this unfolds!

Author's Response:

I sure do appreciate you reading and taking the time to comment!  I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far.  Edward is so impetuous, isn't he? 

Reviewer: GraceBlack (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 01:18 AM · On: Prologue

I love this so far, its a very interesting pairing and I can't wait to see what happens ;) Because I have no idea! 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  We'll just have to see. :)

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Coercion By Blackmail

Already some chemistry between the two of them.  Interesting and unique pairing.  Aro was a hoot here.

Author's Response:

Yeah...I think I accidentally on purpose made Aro overly flamboyant.  I just always pictured him as one of those call center reps that are overly nice, but probably put you on mute and spew out a string of profanities.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Prologue

Intriguing premise!  Can't wait to see where it goes!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: creuxx (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Prologue

This is going to be great I love it already.  I'm really excited to see where this is going to end up and I can't wait for the slash!  Hot Demetri/Edward lovin sounds good to me!

Author's Response:

Thanks for having a look! I'm glad you liked it.  I've got several chapters ready to post, and I'm and SUPER anxious to get to good stuff, too.  I appreciate you taking the time to leave a comment. :)

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