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Reviewer: PuchuSwanCullen (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2011 06:04 AM · On: The Danger
Reviewer: therealedwardcullenlover (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 06:01 AM · On: The Danger
what : o sucky cliffhangers xD
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2011 05:18 AM · On: The Birthday
that was sweet. She could be a live in Nanny or go to UW after all. She could write when not doing other things.
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2011 04:04 AM · On: The Birthday
that was sweet. She could be a live in Nanny or go to UW after all. She could write when not doing other things.
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 04:44 PM · On: The Rude Awakening
If they want to keep things a secret they have got to stop doing things outdoors in front of windows anywhere someone could take private investigator type pictures.
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 04:47 PM · On: The Offering
she is going to allert Rose to a situation I am guessing.
Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 11:49 AM · On: The Danger
I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY AND I LIKE THAT EDWARD IS WILLING TO KEEP BELLA SAFE I HOPE YOUR NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE UP SOON I ALWAYS WANT MORE WHEN I LIKE A STORY AND YOU LEFT ME WANTING
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 06:13 PM · On: The Danger
in the words of Scooby... "ruh roh"
Edward's going to be even more paranoid about protecting Bella now :)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2011 09:39 PM · On: The Danger
Wow. Great twist there. I didn't see this coming. Was Charlie relieved that Edward could take care of Bella? I'd love some insight into the phone call between Bella and her Dad. I have missed this story and am thrilled that you are back!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2011 09:10 PM · On: The Connection
This was beautiful!
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2011 03:52 PM · On: The Danger
What? What! So didn't expect this twist! I was expecting sweet nothings and goodbyes... or somebody catching them at the house! Love it!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2011 08:10 PM · On: The Danger
well this is an interesting turn of events
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2011 07:28 PM · On: The Danger
Wow! That was one powerful seesaw back and forth about why they couldn't be together. When Bella's dad called, I thought he rounded up the authorities to come and arrest Edward. I was totally shocked by them going on the run to avoid her mother's killer. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
Reviewer: chrisnor (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2011 03:34 PM · On: The Danger
lIKING THIS , VERY INTERESTING AND EXCITING , KEEP WRITING !!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: chrisnor (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2011 03:10 PM · On: The Rude Awakening
Aw, shit , Charlie!!!!
Reviewer: AbruptlyChagrined (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2011 01:28 AM · On: The Danger
So now they're on the run...I hope this doesn't affect his custody situation with Honey in any way.
Reviewer: daryl_k (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 11:24 PM · On: The Danger
I was a bit shocked about the ending of this chapter.
If Edward and Bella are leaving Forks, what about Honey?
Reviewer: kallan0100 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 10:24 PM · On: The Danger
Hmmm, it seems as though it has been a freaking long time since you updated! But nevertheless, I am glad. =) Waiting for your next.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 10:19 PM · On: The Danger
Excellent chapter!
I loved everything about it and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 05:09 PM · On: The Danger
A big turn from heartache to drama and danger! Can this be their chance? Glad your back!
Reviewer: mayi (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 04:48 PM · On: The Connection
wow that was sooo beautiful, I feel bad for them that they are in the situation they are! ty for updating it's been a while!
Reviewer: BellaEdwardXOXO (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 09:06 PM · On: The Connection
wow ! This is sooooo good :) ! You have to update soon ! This is seriously an AMAZING story.
Reviewer: Floridasunshine (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 07:40 PM · On: The Spill
i liked it !!!!
Reviewer: lushloulou (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 12:46 AM · On: The Connection
yep enjoying it well done can`t wait for the next chappie ,thanks lou
Reviewer: TMK2 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 06:35 PM · On: The Connection
Is she going to be PREGGERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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