Please do a one shot. Wasn't she mad at Edward for doing the same thing. Charlie wanted to be better but I am not so sure about being a vampire. The Cullen's will not be too happy..the tribe will be mad too.

I would LOVE to see a one-shot (or more!) about Charlie and Bella!

I really love this story - but Edward, ANYONE, "sneering" and "snide" with the Volturi?  It lost credibility at that point for me.

Author's Response:

Sorry to hear that. I can totally understand that, but *this* Edward is a little OOC to begin with, which is why that was the direction I took there.

Thanks for taking the time to give me your honest opinion! I always like to hear the good with the bad (not that it was "bad" per se). I find it helps me learn and grow as an author. 

AG1981

OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!

HEA????  OMG

Post again soonw e can't just end it there need more ugh!!!  lol

Author's Response:

sorry, I've been HORRIBLE for review replies lately. busy busy busy!

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing! the next chapter it up!

 

xoxo

AG1981

I'm happy to know that you are writing more chapters.  I just didn't see how you could have a confrontation with the Volturi this quickly.  So, thank you for continuing this even if it's just a couple of extra chapters.  I really can hardly wait to see how you get them out of this.  I'm glad Bella had time to train, and that she's more prepared to face the evil incarnate that are the Volturi!

Thanks for another awesome chapter, though I didn't understand the title in the middle "C.b.Bella"  I imagine I will feel foolish if you tell me what that meant, but at the moment, I don't know.  (You are right, though, I would rather you get the chapter done, that to reply to a review.)

At first, I thought the Volturi were coming for Bella because of Mike Newton.  But, if they have a seer, that would explain how they could know about Bella's gift.  I really don't see, though, how you are going to write a confrontation with the Volturi in just one chapter.  I hope it's a long chapter, and a long epilogue.  I'm really enjoying this story, and I hope you aren't rushing it just to get to the end.  However, as long as you give me a HEA for Edward and Bella -- that's not in Volterra -- I will be happy.  :)  I'm just really glad that you got back to this story.

Thanks again for another great chapter.  I'm very eager to read the next one.  Go Figure!  :)

I loved this chapter . . . well . . . until Alice said the Volturi were coming for Bella.  I keep telling myself that you will give me a HEA for Edward and Bella, and that wouldn't work in Volterra.  I *hate* the Volturi.

BTW -- speaking of the Volturi, if you haven't seen BreaKing Dawn Pt. 1, go see it, and watch through the credits for a surprise scene.  Talk about a cliffhanger!

Thanks again for another awesome chapter.  I can hardly wait for the next one.  Go Figure!

great chapter! thanks for the update

Loved the Grey's Anatomy "pick me" reference in here...and I'm glad he did!

 

LOVED the chapter...love that Bella is finally getting a grip....not loving the cliffie so much.  ugh! Can't you give them one drama-free chapter!??! lol.  <3

Jealous Bella is bad but a jealous vampire Bella is really bad... For Tanya that is. Loved it

Well, now we know that the wolves won't be coming after them, and I'm happy about that.  However, I was disappointed that we didn't get the confrontation between Tanya and Bella.  How you are going to deal with Tanya and Bella, the Volturi, and still give us a happy ever after for Edward and Bella in three chapters, I haven't a clue, but you promised the HEA, so I trust you to do it.

I was a bit confused when Edward was thinking about Bella on the trip to Alaska, and said he was confused about his feelings for her.  I thought he already knew he was in love with her.

How much of Edward's conversation with Tanya did Bella hear?  If she heard all if it, she could get the impression that she was a problem for Edward, and not that he was in love with her.  But I'm glad that Edward recognized the look on her face as jealousy.  Perhaps this will help him with dealing with her, now that seeing him with Tanya made Bella jealous.

Needless to say.  I can hardly wait for the next chapter.  I hope it won't be long until you are able to post it.

I am all caught up and I like the story I look forward to more..Post again soon