Edward and his big mouth. If only Carlisle would sit her down and tell her about being his singer, then maybe she would figure out that he really didn't do it on purpose.

Author's Response:

Hmm, well, for reviewing, here's a little teaser: She does will fully understand why Edward couldn't stop himself...

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AG1981

it's interesting to see how Jasper try to "tame" Bella as a new born. likey !! ^_^

what a transition... tough Bella =D

i like this story's pace... n Bella the vamp seems awesome.

He better think of a new angle or he's screwed.

Author's Response:

LMAO! Right?!

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AG1981

Wonderful chapter!

Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for R & R!

xoxo,

AG1981

i think would be pissed at Edward also..  even if he had thought her dead he is still at fault.. will enjoy seeing how they end up later interacting with each other since they have  a draw to one another... since she took off (to find solice in Jasper?? maybe??) or to where ever, hope she does not come across a human if she did not go back to the house

 

Author's Response:

I would be, too.

The next chapter went into the queue tonight, so I hope you enjoy it when it posts!

Thanks for R & R!

xoxo,

AG1981

This story has been so much fun to read. Awesome writing style. Here's hoping that Bella does not go all soft and take Edward's emo BS. She rocked when she kicked Edward's ass. Loved her anger even if manipulated by Jasper. I can't wait to read the next chapter. 

Author's Response:

Thank you! I am so thrilled you are enjoying this story so far! I hope it continues to please you as it goes on!!

Bella will not go soft or take it easy on him. This isn't Book-Bella in the sense where her transformation was easy-peasy...she was thrust into this and will have trouble controlling her urges (as we saw in the woods with Jasper).

The next chapter is in the queue now, so it should be up soon!

Thanks for R & R!

xoxo,

AG1981

Oh wow. Just started this and WOW.

Very interesting rethinking of the Regular Cast.  Mostly Edward, natch, but also Esme and Carlisle.  And Bella was not, perhaps, virginal?

It reads like a very good one-shot with that abrupt, shocking climax.  NICE.

 

Glad there's more, though. lol

glad no humans were harmed in the making of this post..(haha)enjoyed your posting . looking forward to seeing how the relationship of B and E plays out in future postings. calm or volitile?? both??  waiting to find out

Author's Response:

LOL! Me too!

Their relationship will be...complicated. What he did will not be easy to forgive, so he will have to work extra hard...plus THIS Bella didn't have time in her human life to adjust to this, so her newborn self is a little more unstable than Book-Bella.

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xoxo,

AG1981

Love it!!

Author's Response:

YAY! I'm so glad!

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xoxo,

AG1981

Thanks for another great chapter!  Not realizing that Jasper was at fault, I wondered as I read Bella not being able to coordinate her mind with her body, if she would remember that when she let's Edward explain to her -- whenever that might be.  I also had the same thought when she and Jasper were in the woods after their hunt.  The lust Edward felt -- from himself, and from Bella -- combined with his bloodlust for Bella as his singer combined to cause him to lose control.  I just wonder if Bella will think about this whenever they do talk.

I wasn't crazy about Jasper influenceing and using Bella's anger to get back at Edward, but Jasper's been so great to Bella, that I can let it go this time.  And it isn't great that Edward torments Jasper that way.  Of course, if she had rippend Edward limb from limb, I might feel differently.  I was glad Bella was happy to see Edward, even if she (Jasper) let her anger get out of control.  She had a right to be angry, but I have the feeling that, had Edward not done what he did -- without her permission -- at some point down the line, she would have wanted him to change her.  I'm happy that, despite her anger, Bella is still drawn to him -- that she still feels the connection to him.  And, yes, he is the most beautiful thing/person she has ever seen.  Wonder if she will let him talk to her?  Looking forward to that.  Go figure!  :)

Thanks again for another terrific chapter.  As usual, I'm definitely looking forward to the next one.  :)

 

Author's Response:

Well take comfort in the fact that Jasper won't use Bella like that again. Any anger that Bella throws Edward's way from here on out is pure Bella.

There will be some lusty feelings between Edward and Bella in the future...and at first, I can tell you they won't be loving, lusty feelings...she will however come to terms with it and they will be fine. They have a lot of obstacles to overcome first.

Thanks so much for another awesome review! Chapter 6 went into the queue this morning!

xoxo,

AG1981

I enjoyed the interactions between everyone. Bella should give Edward a blast of anger after the way he left her. Considering how cruel he is to Jasper it is understandable that he would help.

Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed how she interacted with everyone. It was important to me to have her be accepted by the whole family.

The next chapter is in the queue as we speak...I hope you approve ;)

Thanks for R & R!

xoxo,

AG1981