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Reviewer: lauraveela (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 1 He's with Amy

Ahhhhh... I can't wait for Chapter 8! I love your interpretation of moonshine'd Bella, and your descriptions are GRAND.



Author's Response:

Hey Laura! So glad you liked the picture! Will the peek at 8 hold you over for a little while? Thanks so much for reviewing, angel! I really appreciate it. :)

If you like moonshine'd Bella, make sure you catch the last chapter of "Coming Full Circle" by toooldforthis. She just submitted a hysterical chapter and, of course, her story is one of the best Jake/Bella fics out there.

Reviewer: bubblegum2020 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

totally worth the wait pleeezee write more you have me sitting on the edge of my seat....loved everything about this chapter



Author's Response:

Hey BG! Thanks so much for being such a faithful reader, reviewer and rater! I really appreciate it! Chapter 8 will be coming shortly, I hope. Did you get your peek at Chapter 8? Did that help any? Let me know if I need to resend it, ok?

Reviewer: btrimble (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

I really enjoy reading a Jake who is comfortable with the wolf. You don't flat-out say it, but I gather it's in no small part due to the fact that Bella's so comfortable with his wolf side?  

It's darned funny reading the pack's commentary, but then again I kinda feel uncomfortable for Bella. Also, I have a hard time believing that she can't tell by noise and body language, even among wolves, that some kind of private conversation is happening.  Or are you setting something up? Wimpy-Bella would just take it, but your Bella has grown a bit and developed a backbone so perhaps we'll get to see her dish out, too! 

And thanks for the shout-out. I'm happy to help anytime, though due to life I didn't get to do good in-depth study of this chapter like I'd hoped.  I'm usually the type who wants to correct Facebook posts. 

Now I'm headed back to the world of non-working printers, computers that are doing whatever they please, and the pile of dead tree remnants on my desk.  I like your Italy much better!  (Oh, that's one thing I should say: for me the mark of a good story is that my real surroundings disappear when I read. That happens when I read this story.) 

-b.



Author's Response:

B, thanks so much for all of your help with this chapter! I really think you improved it and I appreciate it so much!

You are right, Jacob is very comfortable with his wolf side. Bella adores that part of him and I think he enjoys how well he can protect her because of his wolf abilities. We'll see some more of their interaction and Bella's take on the whole thing in Chapter 8. Hope you enjoy it!

Btw, I am so ready to get out of here and go to Italy! Why don't we all take a group trip? We should be able to get a great discount! ;)

Reviewer: WritersBlock (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

I could just imagine what it feel like to run my fingers through Jacob's fur...and I'm not an animal lover whatsoever.  I just can feel Jacob's SOFT fur while reading.

The run was exhilerating....I'm hoping Jacob turns back into human form and makes sweet love to Bella....then the pack won't hear him through his thought.  They will know later of course, but at least he can have a private moment....unless they SCREAM (ha-ha)



Author's Response:

Hey C! I'm so glad you enjoyed the wolf fur imagery. More to come in Chapter 8 and future chapters. Mmmm. ;)

Thanks so much for reviewing, sweetie. Did you get your picture and peek? Let me know if I need to resend it for you, ok?

Reviewer: nat1794 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

So i have logged on here and once again i'll tell you how awesome you and your story is. :0) Can i have my preview and Jake picture please? Pretty please??



Author's Response:

Natalie, I'm so sorry to make you jump through so many hoops to get your picture and preview! I'm ashamed of myself. But, stupid FF doesn't let me send pictures to you directly. I'm sure if I had any kind of technical ability, I could figure out how to do it, but unfortunately, I am a total technological dullard and it is beyond my skill set.

So did you finally get your picture and preview? Was it worth all the work you had to do to get it? Hope so. You better let me know if you did all of that and then you didn't get it, okay? And thanks so much for the double reviews! :)

Reviewer: magdacho (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

Love this story! This was a great chapter - especially the end - LOL! I can't imagine the shame when she wakes up :) Looking forward to next update! Thanks for the picture! Never been there, but I'd love to visit it's beautiful!   



Author's Response:

Hey Girl! I did NOT know you were from Bulgaria and I think your English is beautiful! Bi-lingual people amaze me. I am discovering every day how much I don't know about English. I don't think I would ever be able to conquer another language as well! I want to hear all about Bulgaria! Please tell me about it because I am woefully ignorant. I did know it is in Europe, but, shamefully, that is about all I know. :(

I'm so glad you liked your Jake picture. Amazing, wasn't it? Thanks so much for reviewing the chapter, Magdalena! I really appreciate it and I loved hearing from you!

Reviewer: sherunswithwolves (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

This story gets better with every chapter! I LOVE the whole Bella/Jacob wolf scene. So Sweet! I can't WAIT to read what happens next. :) BTW, I would love to see a Jacob pic like that.



Author's Response:

Hey sweetie! Did you get your picture? So, was that amazing or what? Someone said they wanted to have a camera on the faces of the women opening that picture for the first time. I know I could have caught flies in my mouth when I first saw the thing! Glad you enjoyed the whole Bella/Wolfy Jacob interaction. That relationship was so special in the books; I just loved it and the thought of a wolf ride was what inspired me to write this story. Thanks so much for taking the time to review the chapter, SRWW! I appreciate it so very much!

Reviewer: enchantressinblack (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

I loved this chapter! I hope she finally just gives in already and lets their relationship happen.



Author's Response:

Hey Lorina! You know, I think Bella is ready to give any and all to get the relationship going. It's Mr. Black who is the holdup here. ;)

Did you get your picture and peek at Chapter 8? Let me know if not. Thanks so much for reviewing, gf.

Reviewer: nerdfighterchic (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

Amazing as always :) I can't wait for the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, E! Did you get your pic and peek? Let me know if not. I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far. Next chapter is better, promise. ;)

Reviewer: 82c10 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

Great chapter, can't wait for the steam, oh yeah and I'll take that pic of Jake anyday!

Can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

Hey Lynda! I'm sooo glad you loved the picture! Guess what? One of the reviewers wrote a oneshot based on that picture! And is it steamy! I'm going to post it in my Shameless Pimping Section for Chapter 8. You must check it out!

Reviewer: fangast (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

Really enjoy how you have the pack so tight and in each others heads.  Bella having a dream about Jake nice. Him unable to do something due to being in wolf form - hysterical.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, sweetie! Did you get your pic and peek at 8? Let me know if not.

I knew Bella's sex dreaming about Jacob was going to land her in hot water. Just didn't think Jake would have to pay the price for it! ;)

Reviewer: fangast (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 6 I'm Not Dear F*cking Abby

love this chapter.  The Sam singing part is priceless.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed Sam's terrible singing, F! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and rate the chapter!

Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 1 He's with Amy

Yeah, I'm over on FF.net.  Author name: sweetness4683; the name of the story is 'The Wonders of Life'.  This is a Jasper/Bella story; mostly fluff.  It was my first story and it's mostly lemons and a little drama, but it was well received.

Peter/Bella story is still in the beginning stages and I'm not sure what's going to happen yet.



Author's Response:

A JASPER story!!?? Ok, since you wrote it, I'll check it out, but I never felt any kind of interest in Jasper. SM writes that he has all of this charisma, but I thought every guy in the series had much more charisma than Jasper. You're going to have to tell me what attracted you to him, 'cause I'm not seeing it from the movies and the books. I will say, I've read fanfics where Jasper comes alive and is a much more intriguing character than SM's! So Peter in your new story is the Peter that was Jasper's friend in the past?

All right, I just dove into the first 3 chapters of "The Wonders of Life" and really enjoyed them! I think your Jasper is far more entertaining than SM's! Great work, girl! So I have 3 little dogs as well. You'll have to tell me about yours. Mine are dirty and ill behaved. ;)

Reviewer: StillWaters (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

I think I have a problem. I keep checking to see if Chapter 8 is posted yet. I think I am addicted to this story. Sigh...Maybe tomorrow morning it will be up! You think? Hopefully!



Author's Response:

No, ma'am, it will not be up tomorrow. It has to be beta'd, rewritten, submitted and validated. That ain't happening for a little while. There are three sets of people besides me that get it, work on it and then send it back. I take in all of their input, rewrite and turn it in to the validating beta team. Then they either accept or reject it, depending on how much I screw it up. But don't fret. It's in pretty good shape and I honestly don't expect it will take long. I need to start working on Chapter 9 so y'all will have a sneak peek when 8 goes up. I'm hoping that will be a very interesting chapter. ;)

Reviewer: Orchidsrnaughty (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

thanks so much for the sneak peek!!!!!!!! The pic made me fan myself!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for more!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

You are so welcome! Yep, the pic causes instant body temperature rise. ;)

Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 1 He's with Amy

Yes, I did get my sneak peak; awesome as always!  Your story makes me want to write a Jacob/Bella story.  I just finished a Jasper/Bella story and by reader request I'm doing a Peter/Bella story.  But reading yours gives me ideas for Jacob.  I love your story!



Author's Response:

Am I a dumb ass for not knowing who Peter is? Tell me about your story, Nicole. Are you posted on FF? I can't ever find anything at that damned place. I think you should get to work on your Jake/Bella fic! ;)

Reviewer: jmo74565 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

Really like the story. Bella and Jacob are so hot together.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Jacque! And thank you for taking the time to leave a review! Did you get your peek at 8?

Reviewer: raeb2008 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

This is my 1st time reviewing for your wonderful fic, sometimes they can be sporadic at best :) sorry, but I had to let you know that I'm really enjoying your story! There aren't many Jake & Bella fics that come close to being as great as yours. You've really set the bar high for others! Excited for the next update! Rae

Author's Response:

Rae, I can't tell you how much I love hearing from a first time reviewer! Thank you so much for taking the time to read, review AND rate the chapter. You are wonderful. Did you get your little reward? Did you like it? Let me know if I screwed up and didn't send your pic and peek, ok? Take care of you and let me hear from you again soon. I really enjoyed it. (Btw, Rae is one of my favorite names. :)

Reviewer: WhiteLily23 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

Okay, so...thank you for the sneak peek...and the picture (although I had to be sneaky and quick like a ninja because I don't think my fiancee would approve of the picture)...but, just because I figure there's no harm in saying...I started at these words: “Does my being half naked bother you?”— Jacob Black for like five minutes, with my head tilted and everything, trying to figure out WHEN Jacob said this in Eclipse.  You know why?  Because I thought it said: Does my half naked brother bother you?   Don't as me why...cause I can't answer you. 

 

mmmKay, thanks for the preveiw!



Author's Response:

BAHAHAHAH! I love it! Hope I don't get you in trouble with your fiancee, but it would be worth it!

Reviewer: Kate_Masen (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

Somehow I stumbled across this story the first day youposted so now I eagerly await updates.  I laugh out loud often.  This is also the only Jacob/Bella story I read, I'm Team Edward, but after seeing Taycob in NM I couldn't help myself.  Hey, he's legal now anyway...  Thanks for the great story!

Kate



Author's Response:

Kate, I'm so glad to have a Team Edward member along for my ride. I really hope you enjoy it! I love Edward as well, just platonically. I have to agree with you, Taycob was disturbingly - er, yummy for a 17 year old in NM. Thank God he's legal and women across the country don't have to feel guilty about being mental pedophiliacs any more. ;)

And talk about disturbing, did you get you picture and peek at 8? Let me know if not and thanks so much, Kate, for taking the time to review. I appreciate it more than you know!

Reviewer: Zohinette (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

I wish I could make an interesting comment but I think I won't be able to so I'll talk about something else.

 

*********ADVERTISEMENT********

Exchange a fat female cat on diet (hey, she almost lose one pound) who could also could be used as a cushion (a purring fury cushion but she love it) and who sleep on her back (my cat is a slut) for a big reddish brown werewolf to snuggle against.

 

Hum, having wild dream against a wolf should be...eventful?

See you next chapter!

 

NB: I know my cat is a "she"



Author's Response:

Girl, you are soooo bad! Your poor kitty! She is going to be so pissed you are trying to exchange her for a damned dog and she will not understand! (But I do!)

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing, advertising and rating, C! Are the cherry blossoms blooming in Paris? Is that what blooms there so beautifully? You'll have to describe it for me. Take care of you! How are the plans for your Italy trip coming along? I think you and Melanie should go together. Wouldn't that be fun? You know, I'm counting on you to do some research projects for me, so y'all better get cracking! ;)

Reviewer: Mkystich (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

Aw thanks for pimping my story out Lee. Cherry Vally is getting no love out there. I need all that I can get. So please tell me we are going to get some Jacon/Bella love'in soon! PLEASE!



Author's Response:

Hey, my angel! Thanks so much for reviewing and rating, Kris! If you want your peek at Chapter 8 and didn't get it, give me a holler, ok?

I sure hope "Cherry Valley" gets the love and attention it deserves. I've got mostly wolf girls over here and I don't know how many of them will give it a try, but they certainly should. I love it!

Hmmm, Jacon/Bella lovin. Are you hungry or are you thinking of Jasper/Jackson? Naw, you just used the wrong hand for your b!

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

Great chapter. I am looking forward to seeing how wolfy Jacob deals with the sex dream. Should be interesting. This is just a great story so far.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing, Dani! Did you get your pic and peek? Let me know if you didn't.

I think Chapter 8 is much more interesting than Chapter 7, but it could just be me. You'll have to let me know. ;)

Reviewer: andib (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

Oh Oh Oh OMG....that picture is SOOO HOT.  Wow, I have never wanted to be handcuffed so bad!!!!!!!!!!! mmmmmmmmm....that is one hot wolfboy..er...man, definetly a MAN in that pic!!



Author's Response:

Uh, yeah, Loring, definitely a man! ;) I don't know what it is about that picture that makes every woman I know and me just lose it! My sense of modesty and decorum prevent me from saying what I really feel, but HO-LEEY F*CK!  When mybrandofheroin saw it she wrote, "I feel like my vagina just exploded!" Um, yep, I'd agree with that one.

Reviewer: LCB (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

OH MY!! Not nice, i want more!!!



Author's Response:

Well, it was kind of nice up until that point, wasn't it? Eh, you're right, cliffies are never nice! Did you get your peek at Chapter 8? Let me know if not, ok? Thanks so much for the review, Lauren. Btw, hubby is very mean not to let you name your future child Jacob. It's become my favorite name. Maybe he's worried it will be a girl and you'll go ahead and name her Jacob anyway. Something to think about, you know. I don't really see the problem. (Btw, bloodofbeckie did name her first son Jacob! Now is that an understanding and supportive hubby, or what?)

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