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Reviewer: nativebreeze (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 8 To Ride a Wild Wolf

gawd..please update soon...



Author's Response:

You are so adorable, Breezy. I love you. Chapter 9 is in my main beta's mailbox just waiting patiently until she has time to deal with it. It has been to two betas so far, so she is the last one who'll go through it. It is a looooong chapter, so it's probably going to take her a while. Then again, I could get it back tomorrow. Never can tell. ;)

Reviewer: moblin21 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 8 To Ride a Wild Wolf

I absolutely love everything about this story! Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up your wonderful work!

Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying it, M! I really appreciate it. :)

Reviewer: herperswife (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 8 To Ride a Wild Wolf

Excellent - felt the angst from both parties!

Author's Response:

Thanks, sweetie. Yep, I think they're both suffering here. ;)

Reviewer: Zohinette (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 8 To Ride a Wild Wolf

OMG! I am wondering how Jacob's able to have so much self-control because if the guy I was in love with wanted to jump on me, I'm pretty sure I'd not be able to resist. Enough hard to resist when he doesn't want....;-)

I can't stop laughing with this sentence : “Jesus Christ on a ladder! No! Now give me your panties before you drive me out of my mind! Damn!”

I can't stop picturing Jacob saying that seriously and Bella not at all dumbfounded.

I send you happy thoughts for your moving, one thing will perhaps make you smile : I had to search for "Bumfuck" in the dictionary. I will improve my slang. Eventually

Author's Response:

Hey C! Thanks so much for reviewing and rating, love button. Did you all have a good spring over there? Seems like we went directly from winter to summer and skipped out on spring altogether!

I can understand your confusion about Bumfuck. It's about as far away from Paris as you can possibly be! What did the dictionary tell you when you looked it up? Were you able to find it? I really do think the urban dictionary would be of huge help to you and Melanie. It straightens my ass out all the time!

Reviewer: Marlebelle (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 8 To Ride a Wild Wolf

Brilliant Chapter. Great descriptions of the Pack, how they work. Poor Bella, she's silly girl but then again so is Jake. Impatient for more!!!!!!!!! I'm enjoying seeing things from both perspectives, it's a nice insight into what they are both thinking when things go wrong or right. 

Author's Response:

Hey Marle! Thanks so much for reviewing and for giving me a rating. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: GaylenEagle (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 8 To Ride a Wild Wolf

Truly awesome chapter.. I find myself anxiously awaiting each installment!! please keep writing...

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it, Wendy! I will keep writing, but it is a slow process. Sorry about that.

Reviewer: WhiteLily23 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 8 To Ride a Wild Wolf

I'm gonna be completely honest here...I didn't like this chapter.  It seems forced.  The dialog isn't whitty, its actually kinda...lame?  The characters just dont seem right.  It's like you edited it so much that the end result was too far the original idea. 

To be fair, I went and read it from start to "finish" and, its still different...not as good.

I still love the story, please dont think I don't.  I am just giving some constructive critism :)


Author's Response:

Hey Nicole! Thanks so much for reviewing and giving me your honest opinion. I completely agree. This chapter is pretty shitty. I reread Chapters 1 and 2 and they suck equally as badly. I think you're right about the dialogue in this chapter. Guess I just wasn't feeling it. Usually my narrative stinks and my dialogue is pretty good, (reread chapters 1 and 2 for examples of crap narrative) but this dialogue is lame. Sorry about that. All 3 chapters need to be rewritten. Anyone want to beta them and improve them radically? I'd certainly be willing to send out and advance copy of a future chapter to anyone wanting to work on these chapters. *flutters eyelashes and smiles sweetly* Oh, btw, if you think Chapter 8 sucks now, you should have read them before I rewrote it 684 times. Believe it or not, it was much worse before. :)

Reviewer: musiclover0620 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 8 To Ride a Wild Wolf

Another great chapter! I can't wait for the first date. I really enjoy reading this story. Good job!

Author's Response:

Hey love! Thanks so much for reviewing and rating! I really, really appreciate it! I think I may name Chapter 10 "Date Night". We'll have to see. :)

Reviewer: nativebreeze (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 8 To Ride a Wild Wolf

gahhh..hoping for another one.  im soo..very for this story. 



Author's Response:

Hey Breezy! How you holding out, so far? I'm torturously slow, aren't I? Sorry about that. I'm just a slow poke, gf. I hate it, wish I could change, but there it is. And now I'm an incredibly busy slow poke, which really doesn't help matters. My vali beta is getting married May 22, so my beta is trying frantically to get through my latest pile of poop so it can get validated before the wedding. We'll see how it goes. Keep your fingers crossed.

Reviewer: toothpick (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 8 To Ride a Wild Wolf

Yep Bells is an idiot....I can't believe she didnt listen to Jake when he told her not to jump into the water! That almost got a  little ugly on her end cause she was in some trouble! I can't wait for your next update, I throughly enjoyed this chapter!

Author's Response:

Hey HR! Yep, she put them both in some serious kemshi by being such a dumb ass. Glad you enjoyed it, sweetie. :)

Reviewer: Franny (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 8 To Ride a Wild Wolf

I love your end notes - it's neat to see a little insight into your inspirations, and the fact that you actually do research!

great chapter, although I'm personally not so crazy about the repeated scenes in a different POV, probably because I'm just so impatient to get on with the story!

can't wait!


Author's Response:

Hey Miss Franny! Hey girl, I'm anxious to see any POV in "Fire and Ice"! Anything in the hopper for release soon? I adore your story, ma'am!

You are right, the repeated POV can be very tiresome and repetitive. I thought it was a good idea to see where the other was coming from on this situation so y'all wouldn't think Bella had gone off the deep end or something!

Reviewer: whitt96 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 8 To Ride a Wild Wolf

loved it cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!! Preview pleae ;)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Hey Whittney! Did you get your peek? Let me know if not. I'm hoping Chapter 9 will go in the queue in the next few days. :)

Reviewer: nicoleflores (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 8 To Ride a Wild Wolf

I can't wait to read what's next!

Author's Response:

Hey N! Did you get your peek at 9 so you have an idea what is coming next? I think it is a fun chapter. Shouldn't be too long.

Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 8 To Ride a Wild Wolf

They are both being to each other...not Sam and Leah!

Author's Response:

You are right, pg, but when you don't feel secure enough in a relationship to sit down and talk to the other person, what do you end up doing? Usually we go running to our friends for advice and frequently we get ourselves in a heap of mess if we do! ;p

Reviewer: nat1794 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 8 To Ride a Wild Wolf

Awesome as ever! IMO both are as Dumb as each other! But how good is it going to be once they finally give in :) I'm looking forward to reading that!! And reading my sneak peak (hint hint)  Good Luck with the move. Bella was all down about her move too and look how great that turned out! (of course it would have been a shit heap better if she had a brain in her head, and not so big an obsession about sparkly things) x

Author's Response:

Hey Natalie! Did you get your peek? Let me know if not. The move was horrible beyond belief, but at least it is kind of over since everything is finally at one address. Of course, if I knew where my underwear were, I'd be a really happy camper!

Well, they are a couple of coconuts, aren't they? At least Bella seems to be over her sparkle obsession - finally. :)

Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

awesome chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, sweetie! I really appreciate the reviews. :)

Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 6 I'm Not Dear F*cking Abby

LOL .... very funny chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing and rating, pg. You are a writer's best friend, you know. It is such a pain in the ass to review every chapter you read, but we REALLY, REALLY appreciate it!

Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 5 The Hair of the Dog That Bites

To answer your question...I have no idea why some people hate Jacob. Edward has his own issues that don't make him the perfect guy either.

180 stories???? Man, I cannot keep up with 20. And I have to have notes on those too.

Author's Response:

Hell, I can't keep up with them all either. I really need to delete about half of them because I just don't have the time to read all of them, but I can't bear to get rid of them. *sigh*

You know what amazes me about the E/J thing, Edward can do the most appalling things in a story and no one thinks a thing about it. Jacob can be a loyal, loving friend and half the reviewers want to stake him. Just don't understand.

Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 4 I Should Be Canonized

great chapter

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it, sweetie!

Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 3 Operation Amy brat!!!

Author's Response:

Poor guy had to do something, pg. He hadn't made much progress in 3 1/2 years, you know. Had to do something to get things moving. ;)

Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 2 Unleashing the Guard Dog

Yeah...he is the weasel all right

Author's Response:

You're right. He is a weasel. But did he really deserve to have Jake rip his head off and piss down his throat? Well, maybe, just on general principles.

Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 1 He's with Amy

Well at least she knows she loves him....and what's up with this Amy?

Author's Response:

You know, pg, I just got tired of all of the angst we usually go through with Bella trying to figure out which one of the guys she wants. I thought I'd start out with Bella realizing her feelings and having to wonder about Jake's for once. Serves her right, don't you think?

Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 8 To Ride a Wild Wolf

Awesome chapter...I knew you had pure genius in you.... I think Bella and Jacob need to seriously stop skirting around the issue and tell each other how they feel...but of course to do it that way would be less adventurous...and I simply love the way your mind work... I was almost upset with Jacob for yelling at Bella but I thought better of it and felt it was well warranted... loved it...looking forward to the next chapter...

Author's Response:

Hey SD! How are the girls doing? Thanks so much for reviewing and rating, sweet pea. You got it; if they come right out and say exactly what they feel, the story would be much shorter and less interesting! We gotta have some tension, you know. Glad you didn't get pissed at Jake for being mad at Bella. I think everything he told her was richly deserved, myself.

Reviewer: jaceadiane (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 8 To Ride a Wild Wolf

I really LOVE your story! :) And I would DEFINITELY enjoy beta'ing a chapter! There definitely isn't much you could improve on...the storyline is PERFECT! :D

Author's Response:

Hey J! Thanks so much for reviewing and rating! I really appreciate it. Glad you're enjoying the story. :)

Reviewer: reader_giggles (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 8 To Ride a Wild Wolf

i wanted the next chpater sneak peek so here i am. loved the chapter....even though Bella is a master at doing stupid idiotic things i do understand her reasoning....they should both talk & figure out all they need to say is ILY & everything's the way it should be. if i loved someone i wouldnt jeopardise it all for some sex....however if i knew it would never work out i guess i will take whatever i could get. i havent been in love yet so all i can do is think what i would do. i am crazy about this boy but i dont think he knows i exsist...i mean yeah he does we are in the same frnds circle but i keep a little away when all the girls go drooling over him...yes he's dishy!! anyway i take my hat off to anyone who's got guts enough to do what it takes to get someone...or even make that first move...i am just chicken...sigh

Author's Response:

Hey Lara! I think your story is an excellent example of what happens in real life. Even though we may think we should go talk to someone and tell them how we really feel, it ain't always all that easy, is it? We feel so vulnerable when we don't know if the other person feels as intensely as we do. Good luck, sweetie. Hope things work out just the way you want. :)

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