I bet I make one f*ck hawt business man. Look, Stephanie, we got to share a chapter together! <3 <3 <3

I appreciated the new level of hawtness in this chapter. It was...~sizzling~...there at the end. Yuuuuuuuuuuuuuuum. Kudos to Jake for being able to resist going all the way.

I hope Bella and Jacob TALK soon and establish where exactly they're at relationship-wise. No more miscommunications!

Jacob was an ass at the restaurant. Bella should have smacked both him and Val for running their hands  all over her without so much as a silent invitation. Grrr. But from Jacob's POV it was kind of hot because he was all primal and staking his claim, etc. Still an ass though. :P

I was a little surprised that when Jacob and Bella argued, the only defense Bella brought up was, "It was just a business dinner." I was kind of expecting her to tell him off and say that she was aware Val had been acting innapropriately but she had the situation under control (she'd told him to back off on the touchy touchy). I would like to get some of her POV of the fight because maybe she was just playing dumb? Maybe she didn't want to acknowledge Val's less-than-business-like manners? IDK.

Anyway, this chapter was fabulous and I can't wait for Seth to get his talking to. I'm curious as to how the rest of their trip is going to play out.

Love ya, lee.

Lee.......fuck.........That.Was.Hot.

I'm a sucker for good, angry sex and woman, this was some fuckhot angry schmexin!! And YES! They finally got it on!! This was so worth the wait. I loved angry Jake and adored snarky Bella. Those two are a match made in heaven...or where ever...

Congrats on the win and the gorgeous prize banner!!! We're both award-winning now!

<3

xoxo

Bianca

UPDATE!!! I"M CRAPPING OUT OF MY MOUTH IN EXCITEMENT

This was a great chapter as anticipated!   I loved the dialogue between Jake and Bella..They are sooo possessive over each other; especially Jacob but I absolutely love it as far as this story goes (couldn't deal with that in real life though lol)!!  I'm ready for them to just admit their true feelings already so they can finally cement their physical relationship and progress forward.  Looking forward to the next chapter!

was so happy when i saw this really love can't wait for the next one

OMG!  That chapter was so hot!!!  Thank you, thank you, thank you!

That was hot, very, very hot. And jealous Jake is amazing. It's nice to see them as grown-ups now, with grown up responses and feelings. Lovely!

You certainly deserve your awards Girl!! Another awesome chapter. When Twilghted sent me the update notification, i was like " be Lee, be Lee"  It made my night :) I just hope poor Seth gets out of it with all parts still attached.

OMG!!! The air between them during that argument was stifling. You could feel the naughty tension between them. I almost had to get out the fan!!

I gotta say GO JAKE!!!! He was just on his game. He totally commanded that shit!!!

I think Bella may be in over her head here. Can't wait for more Lee.

Rox

YEA!!!  I am so in love with this story!  I got soooo giddy when it popped up as updated.  You really poured your heart out in this chapter didn't you!  Gah, the so called fight scene in the hotel room was sooo dang sexy!  Loved every minute of it.  Lordy, I could just see the veins in Jake's neck popping out and his muscles tightening! I was really jealous of Bella at that moment of the story when they attacked each other! Whew! This cougar can only dream she was, huh?! You failed to warn us that this was a shamwow worthy chapter, my dearie!  So of course the Rockometer is skyrocketing right now for sure!  I cant wait to see how you can further out do yourself in future chapters!  Arrggghhh!  Cant wait!  Love ya chicka!

Hugs, stephanie  aka Stefano!   

Jakey is nuts- he needs to go for it! Thanks for the chapter! nancy

So good!  I wish it was longer.  I really love this story.  Jake and Bella need to do the deed, but I think we need it from Bella's point of view.  Please keep writing, I can't wait to read more.

Thanks, Chris

Ack!  I was stoked tonight when I got online and saw there was an update.  After the sneak peak, I was ready for the full chapter!  I love Jealous Jake.  He's yummy!  Jake's "business dinner" with Carmen and his confrontation with Val in the restaraunt... LOL!  I think the dinner was more amusing for me than anything b/c I was eating while I was reading, so it just made it even funnier.  I loved the fight and the events after.  Gotta find hubby...