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Reviewer: Jenny True (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

I have to say, I really love this story.  :)



Author's Response:

Jenny, I'm so pleased I made you and hubby happy. I hope to send much more happiness your way. Thank you very much for reading, reviewing and rating my chapter. You made me very happy!

Reviewer: twilightelle99 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

Please don't take this the wrong way because it is certainly meant as a compliment: You have grown so much as a writer since the first chapter. This is such a wonderful storyline & you're funny, snide remarks crack me up. I SERIOUSLY can't wait for the next update! :)

Author's Response:

Hey Elle! You are so sweet. I love your review and your comment that I'm growing as a writer made my day! I really do want to improve and would love to become an accomplished writer one day. As far as my smart assed commentary, I've been working on that for years!

Did you receive your pic and peek? Let me know if you didn't. Oh, and thanks so much for rating Chapter 7! 

Reviewer: jbellamore (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

Yay! You're back....thank god! I was literally bouncing in my chair when I saw that you updated! So good! More please!!!



Author's Response:

Hey Erica! Thanks so much for taking the time to review my story. It makes me feel so good that you care enough to review it! Did you get your peek and pic? Let me know if you didn't.

Chapter 8 will be coming along before too much longer. I hope it's delivery causes you more chair bouncing! ;)

Reviewer: StillWaters (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

You are a tease. Really. And I don't think there is any way I would have fallen asleep reading all 15,000 words in one go! More please. As usual, I love the Wolf Pack. Dreamy-and funny. Poor Jacob is going to be tied up in knots. I have to wonder what slimy Rick Graves is doing skulking around. Please, please, please update soon!



Author's Response:

Hey L! I promise I will update soon. Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Poor Jacob is in for a bit of a mess, you're right. ;) As far as Rick Graves is concerned, if he had ANY idea he was going to encounter Jake that morning, he would have gone around the world to avoid him. Bella might be another story, however. ;)

Reviewer: uinen (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

Holy cow, 15,000 words. Some ppl don't even get to that in 10 chapters, lol.

That's great because like you said chapter 8 will be here sooner. I loved this chapter. Poor Jake, I feel so sorry for him, he must be so frustrated ;). Good for Bella and trying her new little ways to seduce jake. I Bet that this little bite and kiss is only the beginning.

I so cannot wait for the next chapter see what Jake is gonna do about the situation, lol. Seriously I live for your little sneak peaks :)

I hope to hear from you soon.



Author's Response:

Hey Marta! How is it going, gf? Thanks so much for not only reveiwing and rating me here, but over at FF as well. You are so sweet. You're right; Bella's little ear kiss and bite is very much just the beginning. Did you get your peek and pic? Let me know if not.

So how is your story, "I Thought it Was So Easy" going? Do you have time to update these days? Talk about a cliffhanger! You need to put us out of our misery soon, girl!

Reviewer: BeHowlin (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I actually squeeled when i saw this update!! For some weird reason I didn't put this story on my alerts, I thought I had, but I didn't. Which is weird, cause I got other people on to it, and they put it on their alerts and then it seems I forgot to do it myself. I will do it as soon as I'm done kicking myself up the ass...ouch...

Great, GREAT chapter!What I loved:

Embry's teasing (I have a soft spot for Embry, I wish he would imprint on me already)

Leah's thoughts of Jake with a pink bow (HI-LA-RI-OUS!!)

Bella's luggage issues (cause, like you, I can empathize)

ITALY!! Cause I just love that country!

Things I hated:

The nasty, cruel and torturous cliffhanger!!

Okay, that's all.Now I'm going to rate your ass, then put this story on my alerts (for real this time) and then tell everyone of my 9 Twitter followers that you updated and that they HAVE to read.

Ti amo, mia cara!

Bianca.



Author's Response:

Bianca, you are precious! Thanks so much for telling your pals about this story and for reviewing and rating my ass. (I won't tell you how hubby rates it. ;) Sorry for the cliffhanger. I hate them too, and the original megachapter did not have one. Didn't have a choice, though. The betas would have thrown me over the cliff if I hadn't cut it into two. Btw, I have a very soft spot for Embry and Seth. We'll get to play with them much more. I love you, too!

 

Reviewer: saffy j (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

Gah, Lee how could you leave it there??

*gasps* How can you be so cruel.

Keep writing!  I am LOVING this story so much =)



Author's Response:

Hey Saff! Girl, it was never my intention to leave you all on the edge of a cliff. I despise cliffys BUT I had to chop the chapter in two and really, this was the only logical place. Chapter 8 should go in before long. Thanks so much for the review. Did you get your pic and peek?

Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

Thanks for another fun chapter. I bet wolf rides would be fun. Nance

Author's Response:

Hey Nance! I'm convinced a wolf ride would be one of the great highlights in life. (And I'm not finished with writing about them. ;) Let me know if you didn't get your peek and pic of Chapter 8. Thanks so very much for reviewing! 

Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

Awesome chapter... I think all this that Bella is doing is following the advice of Leah... which is fabulous... in the grand scheme of things Jacob will nolonger be confused when she's done...LOL...wow...I totally can't wait to see how Jake handles a sleeping Bella in the midst of a sex dream...lol..

I never get your sneek peeks...usually I don't mind but I am way to curious to know this time... hers my email.. sumadon@att.net



Author's Response:

SD, tell me you got your peek and pic or I'm going to feel sooo guilty. I can't believe you never received one before now. :( I swear, I've dutifully emailed you one every chapter. I feel terrible you've never gotten it. Don't know about the peek, but girl, you do NOT want to miss out on the pic! Thanks so much for the review and the rating. You are the best, gf!

Reviewer: GiftfromtheGods (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

Great chapter! I loved the wolf ride. I mean who needs a car or a motorcycle if you can ride Jacob?!

Really looking forward for the next chapter. I hope Jake finally gets what we all want him to get lol.

Oh and I'd loved to see that picture ;-)

 

 



Author's Response:

Hey Chris! Did you get your peek and pic? Was it worth the wait? You are so right, gf, can you imagine how much fun it would be to take a wolf ride on a cold night? Well, it fired up my imagination immediately! Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: jake1121 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 1 He's with Amy

Hey. I'm reviewing the latest chapter .... I think chap 6 but I have a little trouble doing this on the iPhone fir some reason so I'm doing it on chapter 1 title. Anyway. Love it. I seriously want sine Jacob lemons. I want to lick my way up and down that sculpted body of his!!!!! Please give me some lemons and don't just tease ne!!!! I love that you send sneak peaks to your readers. And have wanted badly to review for a long time just to get a look, but reviewing hasn't worked til now. Yah me!!! I also love moonshadow. Have you also read the sound of silence. It's an old one. But I think that's what it was called. If I'm wrong I'll try and get back to you on it. Either way love your fic and I have revisited the shower scene several times slready. I'm such a dirty old lady. But hot passionate loving involving jacob black is all I want right now


Keep it up

Author's Response:

Hey Tosia! I've deduced the story we're thinking of is "Silence" by Slider or something like that. I think it's been taken off Twilighted because I've looked and can't find it. Sometimes when people are having stories published, everything they've written is taken down. What do you think? Does that sound familiar?

I'm sorry I'm teasing you with the lemons. But isn't it fun to let things develop a little more slowly so we can enjoy every little sensuous bit of teasing along the way? Believe me, I've written some chapters already that make Chapter 4 look like an after school program on the Disney Channel. Just come along with me for the ride. We'll get there, I promise. ;)

Reviewer: Yuri (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

I loooooove your story, and I can`t wait to see what Jake is going to do... keep the chapters coming....



Author's Response:

Yes ma'am! Will do. Did you get your pic and peek? Thanks so very much for reviewing and rating. You are mahvelous!

Reviewer: Sgt Clover (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

more. please? pretty please??

 

I usually don't read WIP's because it frustrates the hell out of me having to wait (and even more so when the story is never finished!) but this one beckoned me and I was powerless to resist. That shower scene between those two nearly caused the first local case of spontanious combustion!

(you mentioned a pic? and a preview?) *bats eyes*



Author's Response:

Hey Deby! I hope I don't let you down as a WIP author. I try to avoid doing to readers what pisses me off when other authors do it to me. I HATE it when an author just dumps a story. After becoming totally immersed in the story, I really wonder about what happened to the characters, and then I start worrying about the author. Did they die? Did something awful happen? Did I write such a mean review they never want to write another chapter?

Did you receive your pic and peek? It was the eyebatting that did the trick! Let me know if you didn't get it. And thanks soooo much for the review, the rating, and for taking a chance on my story!

Reviewer: Becstasy (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

Is there anywhere I can vote for you to become Queen of JacobLand!!!!! This is hands down my most favourite story of all freaking time!!!! But having said that if you take so long to update again. I will have to find you and kill you LOL!!!! You are so beyond awsome!!!

XO

 



Author's Response:

Bec, my little Aussie Angel, thanks so much for being such a wonderful supporter! I adore you! You are more than welcome to find me, but I've got a few tough months coming up, so I may kill myself and save you the trouble! Did you get your peek at Jake and Chapter 8? I thought you wrote and told me you did, but if you did, I can't find the email. Don't worry. I don't know what city I'm in, much less what I'm doing in the unidentified city! (This may throw a hitch in the plan to come find me. :p) Let me hear from you soon, sweetie!

Reviewer: AlohaWhatever (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

Yeah, You're back!! I am loving this story. 



Author's Response:

Aloha! Thanks sooo much for reading, reviewing and rating! You are fantastic! Did you get your peek? Let me know if not. Btw, I'm not going anywhere, promise. :)

Reviewer: morrigan (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

Oh Sweetie!  That was awesome!  I absolutely adored this chapter.  How will Jake get out of this one, indeed!  It's not like he wasn't having trouble keeping his thoughts clean, already!  lol  I can't wait to read the next chapter when it comes out.  And, don't worry about me trying to throw any tar or chicken feathers cause, we all know that I have taken the cake when it comes to delayed postings.  This chapter is my favorite one so far, I think...  Everything about had me smiling while dreading the moment it was going to end.  And now, it has.  Damn!  Btw... you sound as if you pack like I do.  Hehehehehe

Reviewer: litttlelizzy (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

oh I can't wait for number 8!!! Poor Bella and Jake I don't think the others will ever let them live this down but I guess I shall have to wait and see.



Author's Response:

Sweetie, did you ever get your peek and picture? I'm so sorry I screwed up. Let me know, okay?

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

She acted like I was going to paw through all of her panties or something. Well, hell. Of course I would have gone through all of her underwear when she wasn’t looking. Jesus, I’m a guy. I would have been discreet about it, though. - Haha!

I actually felt sick being away from her, and my resulting pissy mood made it possible to literally “kick the dog” when I was around my pack mates. - LOVED that line!!  :)

He was such a twat. - Calling someone a twat is ALWAYS funny.

Great chapter!  :)



Author's Response:

Hey Jess! Thanks so much for the terrific review! I have to confess, the "kick the dog" thing was BellaFlan's great idea, not mine. She has such a wicked mind! Glad you enjoyed the chapter! And I appreciate the review sooo much! Let me know if you didn't get your peek at chapter 8, okay?

Reviewer: lesel (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

I loved it! Jacob's POV is fantastic through your eyes. Definitely a winner. Plus, I always love a good protective!Jacob scene, even though I feel bad for Embry. A cliffy. Oh, so sad. I can't wait for Chapter 8! As a side note, I don't think anyone would fall asleep during one of your stories, even if the chapter was 150,000 words. Please submit it for posting it as soon as possible; I'm dying here! I think we all are... put us out of our misery with some smut :D Thanks for all you do!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, Les! The second half of the chapter (aka Chapter 8) is really the more interesting part. I hated to do the whole cliffy thing, but I think my beta would have killed me or herself if I asked her to take on a chapter that long. :(  I feel confident that I could happily ramble on for 150,000 words, but my entire beta team would send a hit squad after me should I try it.

 Thanks so much for your review! Did you get your peek at Jake and Chapter 8?

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

wonderful of course:)



Author's Response:

Awww, thanks so much, Ashley! It was great hearing from you. I really appreciate it. Did you get your peek? Let me know if you didn't.

Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

I am so happy that you wrote this in Jake's POV and love the title.  I forgot about you stressing over that.  I want to go out on a limb and guess no, hope that next chp will be Bella's POV even maybe get what she is dreaming about...well, we kinda already know a little but I want more.  teehee!  I was talking to beckieY when I got the email your update was in.  I got excited and she said she had to stop with this and is sooo disappointed.  Her story was in too and I have had such a wonderful day of reading my favorite stories!  Yea!! Joy!   Please give me another wonderful day soon!  Great chp!

hugs, Stephanie  



Author's Response:

Hey Stephanie! Yep, I sure miss my BB. She is just the best and was a wonderful beta. If it weren't for her, I would never have submitted HTSAW. I didn't understand how she had the time to even think about beta'ing on top of all the other stuff she has going on in her incredibly busy life.

I am thrilled she's found a little time to update "Heart in a Headlock" and she told me she and Meg are working on another chapter of "Anger Management", one of my all time favorites. I need some Paul help in Chapter 10, so I'm going to the experts. Do you write, Steph?

Did you get your questions answered in your sneak peek? You did get it, didn't you? Take care of you and thanks so much for being such a great supporter of this story. :)

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

awesome. i knew you'd make me look good.



Author's Response:

You are the awesome one, girl. Be ready for it in Chapter 8, though. Your name is being abused some more. ;) What did you think about your Jake pic?

Reviewer: Foxtrot (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

SOOOO glad you updated! I love this story, so get on those rewrite and get chapter 8 posted!



Author's Response:

Yes, ma'am, I'll get on it! Thanks so much for reading, reviewing AND rating! You make my day. Let me know if you didn't get your peek, ok?

Reviewer: stkrwildme (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

Lol... I absolutely love Leah. I think she's great... most people give her a bad wrap... but she makes my day. 

 



Author's Response:

Hey Lys! I love Leah, too. I think your idea of a rules chapter is great. God knows how long it would take me to write 257 rules, though! (Leah is very opinionated. ;) Thanks for the review, sweetie!

Reviewer: BeverlyB (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy

I'm a big Jacob/Bella story fan!  I do enjoy reading your story! I can't wait until chapter 8.

Ya, Jake's in a bit of a spot! hahaha



Author's Response:

Hey Bev! Thanks so much for reading, reviewing AND rating! You are so sweet. Yes, ma'am, Jake is in a bit of a pickle. :p The wait shouldn't be too long for Chapter 8. Did you get your peek at Jake and 8?

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