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Reviewer: TJB (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 3 Operation Amy
Operation Amy - it's amazing what a bit of jealousy can stir up in a person. Another great chapter. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Well, something needed to get Bella's head out of her rear end! I think Jake gets a little more than he bargined for, though!
Reviewer: TJB (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 2 Unleashing the Guard Dog
Rick's POV was hysterical - I laughed so hard. This was another great chapter. Thanks for sharing your story with us.
Author's Response: Ah, the infamous Rick Graves chapter. Not a fan favorite, but it was sooo much fun to write! Glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: TJB (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 1 He's with Amy
I stumbled on this story and I'm super glad that I have. This is a great story and I'm glad I fell upon it late, but this way I can read 6 chapters in one night. Thanks for sharing your story with us.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you stumbled upon it, too! Don't you hate when you find a story you don't want to put down late at night? I can't help myself. I'll stay up and read it all night!
Reviewer: liljules (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy
You treat every word with such reverence. Truly amazing work here. I wish i could read this all day!
Author's Response: Julie - that is one of the best reviews I've ever received! Thank you so much! I actually do sweat over every word. I try to make up for my weaknesses by hard work and sometimes it actually pays off. :)
Did you get your pic and peek? Let me know if not and I'll resend it.
Reviewer: jzjazzy (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy
I love this story! The image of the wolf pack in Milan makes me smile. Plus. I find you wolf dialogue hilarious. Update soon please!
Author's Response: Hey Jen! So glad to hear about the easy vaginal repair! See, being a biomedical researcher really does have it's perks!
Reviewer: candygirl (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy
Today I woke up and I just KNEW that there would be an update from this story...and I was right! Thanks for the great chapter, leelator!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, C! Did you get your peek at Jake and Chapter 8? So, do you have psychic episodes frequently or is this a new thing for you? Any idea when Chapter 8 will be posted? I'd love to know! ;)
Reviewer: edwardsmine (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy
Great chapter! I love how she treats him as a wolf. I am stressed though. Bella shouldn't be in Italy. Those Volturi are scarry!
Author's Response: Hey Nancy! Thanks so much for reading, reviewing AND rating! Did you get your peek and pic?
Now, just because they're in Italy, does that mean they're going to run into the Volturi? They've been going for years and nothing's ever happened before. ;)
Reviewer: cassullivan247 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy
Ive been waiting so long for you to update! This was a good chapter! keep em coming!
Author's Response: Hey Cassie! I'm so sorry it took me such a long time to update. I promise I'll keep writing and I'll try to do it a little faster. Thanks for reviewing! Did you get your peek at 8?
Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy
Hearing the pack's thoughts is always hilarious and I really liked it there! I wouldn't have minded having the entire Chapter without the cut, trust me, I wouldn't have fallen asleep! And now you leave us with this cliffy? Oh, that's so not fair!!!! But anyway, it'll just make Chapter 8 even better!
I absolutely love your story! Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: You are so precious, Melanie! Thanks for reading, reviewing and rating. You are wonderful! Did you get your peek at Chapter 8?
How is the weather over there? It's gone from freezing to almost hot over here. Flowers are blooming like crazy and the pollen is an inch thick. Not a good place to be for alergy holders!
Glad you are enjoying the story so far. I think the cliffy was very unfair. Sorry about that. Will rectify the situation ASAP!
Reviewer: Wolfengirl (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 1 He's with Amy
Ok, you got me . . . I have to see this pic of Jake, and how could I resist a snaek peek at what comes next? I'm bad about reviews, I'm usually too busy reading, and I mean to ....
I love this story. I love your Jake and Bella, and was blown away by Leah giving Bella advice, and then this trip. I love how you set it up, and absolutely can't wait to read more ... soon, right :)
Author's Response: Ah HAH! Snagged you, huh? I'm so glad I did. I know exactly how you feel. Sometimes you just dont' want to take the time to leave a review or you can't think of anything to say. But receiving reviews is what feeds your authors. You feed us and we become happy and productive. We starve to death waiting for reviews and our inspiration for writing just starts dwindling. It's very depressing. :(
You get a gold star for reviewing, Tamryn. Did you receive your peek at Chapter 8 and the Jake pic? Wasn't it worth the trouble? There will be more soon, I promise.
Reviewer: everblue1037 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy
cant wait for the next part its great
Author's Response: Hey Kelly! Thanks so much for leaving a review, girl. I really appreciate it. Did you get your peek at Chapter 8? Let me know and I'll send it to you. :)
Reviewer: zweetchampaigne84 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy
Oh.. Bella and her dreams LOL. Poor girl will be mortified when she wakes up - and the guys gonna rub it in surely. Can't wait to find out what Jake is going to do. Well he could wake her up, but does he even want to?? hehe Another great chapter. It was really fun to read. Looking forward to the next chapter. Can't wait.
Author's Response: Hey Kiki! Thanks so much for your sweet review. Did you get your peek at Chapter 8? Let me know if you didn't.
Bella is going to land herself in some serious trouble with these dreams of hers. But it already landed her a hot werewolf in her bed when she travels, so maybe she's got it all figured out! ;)
Reviewer: mschenke (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy
What I would give to ride on the back of wolf Jake! Can't wait to see where you are going with this.
Author's Response: I'm with you on the wolf ride deal. Sign me up now! I hope you enjoy the ride.
Thanks so much for reviewing, M! Did you get your peek at Chapter 8? Let me know if I need to resend it. :)
Reviewer: WhiteLily23 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy
Definitely took you long enough :)
Great chapter. I'm hooked on the story-line, so different than every other story I have read - it's great so far!
Author's Response: Hey Nicole! You are right; I should be beaten with thorny branches. Glad you are enjoying it so far. Did you get your peek at Chapter 8? Thanks so much for reviewing, gf! I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: Cupcake 44 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 1 He's with Amy
Thanks for the reply :) and for the update, I really enjoyed this chapter! It's going to be interesting to see the pack's reaction after this! That ought to be both embarassing for Jake but funny for us to read, I hope. :) but not too much, we don't want a blushing werewolf, actually...on second thought, I think it might be the cutest thing! :)
Update soon!
Author's Response: Hey Farah! How are you, sweetie? Thanks so much for reading, reviewing and rating Chapter 7. I really appreciate it! Did you get your peek at Chapter 8? Let me know if not and I'll send it right back out, along with your pic of Jake.
I would give my eyeteeth to see a blushing werewolf. Hmm, have to see if I can work that in somehow!
Reviewer: peppermintpink (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy
That was really great and totally worth the wait. I hope you update soon - I cant cope with the cliff-hanger and such a long wait :)
Author's Response: Hey PMP! Glad it was worth the wait. It won't be a long one next time, promise. I'll only do a cliffy if I've got the resolution ready to go. Thanks so much for reviewing. Did you get your peek at Chapter 8? And your peek at Jake?
Reviewer: BlueBerryKitten (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy
Wow! I was never really a fan of Jaco, but your story turned me. I love the wolf-boy
Please update as soon as you can :)
Author's Response: Yes, ma'am, will do! I'm really excited to have brought you over to the dark, hot side for a story. Thanks so much for reviewing! I really appreciate it. Did you get your peek and pic? Let me know if you didn't. :)
Reviewer: toooldforthis (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy
LOVED IT! As per usual, of course! (Though, I wouldn't have minded 15,000 words either.) I loved this chapter. I like how you describe the physical pain Jake feels when he's away from Bella. I'm curious to see what's in those heavy bags that Bella packed. Something tells me it could be a portable stripper pole, in which case, Jacob doesn't know what's going to hit him. The pack run was a nice idea, especially since Jake took them to the place Bella wanted to see so badly. Now, that's romantic, w/out being all sappy like Sam wants him to be. Of course, poor Bella and her naughty little dreams. How IS Jacob going to get out of that one? I can't wait to see how the next chapter turns out. And, I'm holding you to your word that it'll be updated post hasty! I love your story and I eagerly await more to come. Keep up the wonderful work. :)
Erin
Author's Response: Hey Meany! Maybe Bella brought her portable stripper pole and instructor both in her luggage. They weigh enough she could have! Are you going to have an Eclipse party in June? Are you going to invite me this time? If not, I want more pics. They were hysterical. Did you all permanently tattoo your shoulders in the pack motif or were you a bunch of sissies and applied the wash off kind?
Can't wait for the next installment of Coming Full Circle. How many pages have you written? Ever hear back from the Eddies and Bellies? They really need to tell people what's going on, don't they? Take care of you.
Hugs,
Crazy
Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy
Yay!! What a wonderful update!!! It's too funny how they are doing the opposite to get the other to notice. I enjoyed the wolf ride-really sensual. I really look forward to how Jakey gets his tail out of that sticky situation.
As always, you did a fantastic job.
Rox
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing, Rox. I love hearing from you. Glad you appreciated the pic. It was drool worthy, wasn't it? Yes, Mr. Black has his tail in a crack on this one. We'll just have to see if or how he manages to get them out of this sticky wicket. ;)
Reviewer: DazedNCnfused (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy
Lol, I love the sexual tension! I can't wait for these two to finally get together!
Author's Response: Sexual tension? What sexual tension? Hee hee. That wasn't very nice of me, was it? Well, sometimes, it's just soooo much nicer to let things linger a bit instead of wham, bam, isn't it? Thanks so much for the review, Sam! Did you get your peek at Chapter 8?
Reviewer: anginha (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy
LEE Oh God, that was amazing, sweet, romantic this cap. 7.
I love the interaction of Jake with his brothers the wolves.
I loved the hint of jealousy where you brilliantly added Any conversation with Jake at the door of Bella, I also would die of jealousy.
Now it was a brilliant play by Jake sleeping in the same room with Bella, I predict great novels, great kissing and making out.
LEE, was worth the wait, I'm hyper-ventilating for the next chapter. I hope that Bella and Jake finally become one.
Congratulations as always a great chapter.
OF COURSE I WOULD LIKE TO RECEIVE THE CAP a peek. 08,, PLEASE, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE.
I LOVE YOU.
DIANA-CHICA BRAZILIAN
Author's Response: Hey Chica! Thanks so much for your review. I always love hearing from you. Did you get your peek at Chapter 8? I haven't heard from you and was wondering. Glad you enjoyed Chapter 7. I think you may enjoy the next one more. We'll have to see. ;) Take care of you, sweet girl.
Reviewer: xfirespritex (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy
Uhm, so seriously you're just gonna leave us hanging there like that? I've waited so long for this chapter and that's what I get?! Way to torture me.
Anyway, I loved the chapter regardless of the torture it was waiting for it. I definitely loved the wolf ride and I'm jealous of Bella's luck to have been there.
P.S. You and your hubby should've stayed, that is a GORGEOUS place.
Much love.
-xfirespritex-
Author's Response: Hey B! I was going to ask you about your next update for Everyone Makes Mistakes when I saw you had already posted the next chapter. I loved it and can't wait for more!
Sorry for the cliffy. All will be righted in the next chapter. You're right, we should have stayed in Italy. I could have easily added to my 500 pair shoe collection there. ;)
Loved your title suggestions! They are terrific. I hope you've cooled down after seeing the pic of Jake. It's quite - er, um, invigorating, isn't it?
Reviewer: TeamJacobYeah (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy
I always squee with delight when you update. You don't need to worry; I don't think anyone would have fallen asleep during a long chapter. While it sounds like the updating process is a long and complicated one, I will not complain because the result is always SO worth it! No tar and feathers as long as the wait isn't as long this time. I loved the wolf ride. It speaks volumes that Bella is more comfortable with Jacob's wolf side, and that he knows it. The banter between the wolves is so funny, and so absolutely how it really is between a bunch of guys. So what the heck is in all of Bella's luggage?? A portable stripper pole?? Lots of sexy lingerie?? Buckets of condoms?? (one can only hope). Costumes for role-playing?? Kinky sex toys?? (I could go on and on--and I bet Jacob could too--sigh!). So now we know why Bella and Jacob sleep together, too bad it can't be when they are at home too. While this is a long and wonderfully torturous (sp) ride, I just know the end will be worth it. I can't wait. Love it. Oh, and congrats on selling your house!
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review, Cindy! Did you get your peek and pic? Let me know and I'll resend if not.
I'm glad you got a kick out of Chapter 7. Chapter 8 is much more event filled. ;) Bella will tell you all about her luggage there and believe me, it is all reality based!
I just love the idea of Bella going on a wolf ride with Jake. That image is what inspired me to write this in the first place. There will be more to come, promise.
Reviewer: andib (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy
Loving the story!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, Loring, for reading and rating this chapter! Did you get your peek and pic? If not, contact me and I'll resend it. :)
Reviewer: Majesta Moniet (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 7 American Werewolves in Italy
Haha, love the pack humor in this chpater. It's great seeing them interact together in wolf form cuz they don't have to censor. Leah was perfectly ruthless. :) Also wolfback riding is an extreme sport that I'm considering taking up.
LOVED protective Jake! Gah. And it was sooo in character for Bella to still be humming along and petting him while all of the snarling is going on.
And I feel really bad for Jacob's situation at the end of the chapter. *snickers* Really bad.
So, I'm curious about Leah's role in all of this. She's knows that Bella is trying to seduce Jacob obviously, but she'll also probably end up picking up on Jacob's thoughts about wanting to romance her instead of just sleeping with her. That means that she'll be the only one in the equation who knows EVERYTHING, and she can either hinder or help. Hmmm...
(Oh, and I see you pimping out TATS, bb. *two thumbs way up*)
Love ya!
Author's Response: Hey A! Thanks for all of your help with The Air, The Sun. I know people are really going to love it and it was very badly needed. Hope your other authors have their shit in one sock unlike dodo here.
I think the extreme sport of wolfback riding would have every Jake fan in Twilightdom participating. I'm already waiting in line to sign up! Want me to hold you a place?
As far as Leah goes, she has her own agenda here. She already knows they're crazy in love with each other. She thinks it's high time Bella grows up a little and starts to live her life and Leah's going to seize this opportunity with both hands! As far as Jake is concerned, both will be working hard to keep the other out of their thoughts. She has to worry about Jake seeing what she'd doing just as much as he worries she'll see what he's up to. While Leah is a facilitator for Bella, she also never misses and opportunity to give Jake a very hard time. It makes her day. ;)
Can't wait for my next hit of Zenith, girl! Are you close or will we be waiting on pins and needles a while longer?
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