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Reviewer: FrankieCullen18 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2013 04:28 PM · On: A for Effort
I really like this story!! i love the Bella humour and i think it has a lot of potential! cant wait to read on!! :) x
Reviewer: Rebecca Rage (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 08:58 PM · On: A for Effort
i love it. good job on a vampire Bella. Lol
Reviewer: Rayla91 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 03:13 PM · On: A for Effort
No matter what anyone else says, I love it :) Also I love apple so get your butt over there and update again! <3
Reviewer: ANGELiCAWROTE (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 03:57 AM · On: A for Effort
Ahhhhh, please tell me you'll continue this. i like this switchoroo.. yup i like very much. + your writing is wicked and oh so fresh. i hope you continue on with this fic.. since it's been like iono almost a year since you updated.. okay that's an exaggeration.. but i'm a new fan. i'm avidly reading your fresh creations.. whilst i should be sleeping
Reviewer: iheartDKschrute (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 07:53 AM · On: A for Effort
Duuuuuude! You have to keep writing this story. For reals! It's only 3 chapters in and I'm left wanting- nay, needing -more, like a crackhead needs a fix. So please don't be a tease! Give us more!
P.S.- out of all the stories I've read on twilighted.net, this is the first time I've ever felt compelled to write a review. No joke, your story is that good!
Author's Response: i'm seriously honored. really, thank you so much. i've been kind of a jerk at updating lately because i'm getting raped with RL, but hopefully once i finish my GREs and grad school application... and sample from my novel for said application... i will have more time to finish my stories. i miss them. and thanks for following me. and also i love dwight too. but i love michael more. hope to hear from you soon :)
Reviewer: wistfulthoughts (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 02:05 AM · On: A for Effort
I want more!!!! I love the twists you take. Instead of BXE with the J falling for their kid you take Apple in another direction with E falling for the kid of BXJ. Now you've flipped the Bella and Edward dynamic. I likey.
Reviewer: nicewordusage (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 06:00 PM · On: A for Effort
I am really liking this story. It is intriguing. Please keep updating as you can!
Reviewer: swanisadora (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 01:07 PM · On: A for Effort
Great chapter! Patience through the first two has rewarded!
Excellent quotes & parodies, brilliant development of the staircase date! (This was the situation I was waiting for since Edward confessed about his forst temptation in "Twilight" and that SM in "Midnight sun" apparently forgot, thanx for this!!!)
Hot dialogues as always, italian expressions can get a bit better though (as a mother-tongue I sometimes don't understand what the characters mean). Don't forget, I offered You my assistance already.
Hoping to read soon the next chapter, I thank You from the very bottom of my heart for this one and keep furiously cheering
from Germany with love
Reviewer: cole5183 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 07:39 PM · On: A for Effort
Please give me more! I love the idea for this story and the Edward/Bella banter is wonderful!
Reviewer: cole5183 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 07:19 PM · On: Oops.
I love it so far! I must admit you are one of the best writers of snark in the fandom!
Reviewer: Gingertoffee (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 03:47 AM · On: A for Effort
fun and funner! I luuuurrrvvve it! Atta girl keep going - can't wait!
Reviewer: belachia (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 10:33 AM · On: A for Effort
i like the flip side...looking for the next chapter.
Reviewer: RoseBlack (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 05:29 AM · On: A for Effort
I love it and I'm awaiting the next chapter.....???? you said it was okay, sooo...
*throws keyboard against wall*
can't wait to read more sooooooooooooooooooo... please write more???
Reviewer: Freckleforce (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 02:50 PM · On: A for Effort
I love this. Are the wolves or indians going to be involved. Or like a girl jacob for edward?
Reviewer: bellarose1015 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 05:51 AM · On: A for Effort
I'm really like the story and I can't wait to read more. And I hardly ever review on anyone's stories. I think you make four and I have over 54 stories that I am/have read on this site alone. So please continue with this story.
Reviewer: mysty1234 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 10:51 PM · On: A for Effort
This story is sooo funny! I dig the role reversial! cant wait to read how u do certain scenes in Twilight!
more more more more!!!
Reviewer: mrs_n (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 02:43 PM · On: A for Effort
I LOVE your Bella and Edward. LOVE THEM. SM's Bella was not a normal girl. None of her high schoolers seemed normal to me. Your characters seem normal to me. They talk like normal teenagers would talk and don't worry about missing a day of class and they just seem more actual. Know what I mean? Anways, I'm lovin this. I really think that your poor self confidence is crap. You should def know that you rock and you should pull a Bella and literally pat yourself on the back for all this :)
Reviewer: Graceful_imp (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 05:07 PM · On: A for Effort
Another great chapter :)
Reviewer: need2read (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 10:22 AM · On: A for Effort
I love it!!!
Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Gingertoffee (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 10:06 AM · On: A for Effort
This is fun! - You are my favourite author next to Steph Meyer and Jane Austen,
quick get writing - I can't wait for the next chapter of this and Apple. Now you will need to write the same story from Edwards perspective - Midnight Son?
love it love it - can't wait to read it!
Janet (sydney australia)
Author's Response: hahahahaha midnight son, that's awesome. and thank you! i'm going to try to get some work done today, but my computer is in the shop, so we shall see :)
Reviewer: Zyla Nyx (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 10:30 PM · On: A for Effort
I LOVED it. But then again, I love anything you do!! When are you going to realize that you are TRULY amazing B? Exquisite. Nuf said!
~Z
Reviewer: arethea (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 05:49 PM · On: A for Effort
LOVE IT!!! edward is just crass enough, and bella is just strong enough to make the characters even more real for me. look forward to the next installment :)
Reviewer: sdnez (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 10:22 AM · On: A for Effort
for such poor self confidence... you got balls for putting this up not knowing where you'll take it.... I never got past the 2n't chapter in my random fic and still it lies on my computer....
But so far I'm liking this. It has a fun quality to it and now I'm wanting to see if this Bella would sneak into this Edward's room late at night as well... (of course I could see this Bella messing with him in his sleep while in the room...lol)
Reviewer: gracebella (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 08:14 AM · On: A for Effort
I just read your story and I like it!! can't wait to know more about Edward. so, besides of Alice and Jasper no one in the Cullen clan is gifted?
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 07:15 AM · On: A for Effort
I think Edward was being sassy at the end there? I'm not sure, but that's how it felt :)
At least Bella wasn't able to run away, as a certain someone did when the roles were reversed. Looking forward to seeing how B&E work through this, and perhaps a glimpse of whether Alice is going to "See" anything about them?(that doesn't involve Edward's permanent end ;)
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