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Reviewer: crave (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Everything Happens For A Reason

the suspense is killing me.  you have to update very very soon. 

Reviewer: chatybebe26 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Everything Happens For A Reason

I love this story!!!! please update!!!

Reviewer: justjaime3 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Everything Happens For A Reason

this is an awesome story...can't wait for the update!!

Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Everything Happens For A Reason

Did she do something to Rob? Is he still alive? Why is she taunting Bella in that way? She has a plan, that's for sure, but we have no clue what it is.

She somehow knew Bella would go looking for her, trying to save everyone she can. Sadly Alice can't see her, that's odd. And what about Jacob?

Don't be a stranger for so long...



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review....

Yeah.. I'm hoping I'm getting back into my groove. Real life took a toll on us for the last couple months...

My husband lost his job, and so my computer was dominated with web searches for him some work, and well as being a mom, and a wife, I also work full time. So it's been crazy.. BUT.. he's back to work, and I'm getting back on a routine, so I'll be around alot more often.

Hope you enjoyed the Chapter, and I promise - all the answers you seek are coming up very soon :)

Thanks!

Lonna

Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Everything Happens For A Reason

Please update soon - this is so good!

Reviewer: dhull (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Everything Happens For A Reason

Ok, Lonna....I admit it.  I have been what you called in your CEN a "shadow stalker!"  I hate I have been named like that!!! LOL!!!!  I just don't always know exactly what to say to you that you probably don't already know or has already been said to you....I love your fiction!  I have been anxiously awaiting for you to update and glad you can finally post!!!

No apologies needed for not being able to update for awhile, as I understand RL happens and so does a lot of unexpected crap!  Again, I'm really enjoying your story and love your characters personalities!  I hope Edward gets to Bella before Victoria! 

AW - I'll be here in Austin, not "lurking" or being a "shadow stalker" while waiting for your update!!!  ;)

dhull (Austin, TX)



Author's Response:

First let me say - that I meant "shadown stalker's" with complete love.. LOL  :)

We've all done it!!!  Right now, I personally have around 35 favorites on my list, and there is no way I would ever get them all read if I reviewed on every single one....  You all know what I'm talkin' about ;P

Seriously though.. thanks so much for the review...  I'm happy to hear anything you have to say.... questions? Thoughts about what happened... ideas for where it could go...  I'm good with any type of review.

I don't really work from a completed idea. I literally take this one chapter at a time, so who knows... someone may suggest something that would make it sooo much better...  As soon as I finish one chapter I start taking notes on where it could go, and then I choose from the ideas that I brainstorm with my friends (my Beta Missy, Lala - yep she's real, and my sister-in-law) - who constantly are talking Crooked Halo's over with me...  (You should see some of the stares we get in public over our conversations - lol :D)

I feel so blessed to have kept such a positive rating on Twilighted, with all the competition that posts everyday. I'm greatful for all my readers, even those who don't have time to review... the fact that everyone is loving it and is continuing to stay intrigued with the story is reward enough. But hey... it's good to hear everytime... (even when the reviews are similar - they all count, and they all make me smile)!!

Thanks so much again for peeking out to drop me a line... hope to hear from you again :)

Lonna

 

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Everything Happens For A Reason

damn this is amazing!!! so damned exciting!! I can;t wait to find out what happens!! glad to have you back! 

Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Everything Happens For A Reason

thanks good chapter and cliffy

Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Everything Happens For A Reason

thanks good chapter and cliffy

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Everything Happens For A Reason

I was happy to see an update!!! :)

Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Everything Happens For A Reason

Love the chapter. Victoria is one nasty redhead!! I can't wait until the next chapter!!

Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Everything Happens For A Reason

thanks good chapter and cliffy

Reviewer: saya4haji (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Everything Happens For A Reason

nice to have u back, i missed bad ass bella

Reviewer: Emily Bowden (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Attempting Redemption

I knew Jake was going to show up soon! He is so awesome in this story, too. The best friend like he should've been in Eclipse.

Reviewer: Emily Bowden (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Too Late

Oh my goodness! That totally did not go how I thought it would. From Rob leaving to the whole Tanya kissing Edward mess. My gosh, I want to slap her...

Reviewer: Emily Bowden (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Destiny's Course

Just her luck, she starts moving on and Eddie boy is back in town!

Reviewer: Emily Bowden (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Pitch Black Clarity

Great first chapter. I am so glad you didn't drag out the misery for Bella. I hate that because I feel so sad for her. And I end up getting depressed and not able to enjoy the story.



Author's Response:

It stays a little heavy for a while, but with drama. I hope you stick with it, it's about to go crazy with some things coming up in Chapter 11.

Thanks for the review!

 

Lonna

Reviewer: blackjacklily (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Everything Happens For A Reason

I love you, and I love this story! When I had the pleasure of reading this (cause I'm awesome enough to get an advanced copy!), I had goosebumps by the end.

I promise everyone reading these reviews...you have no idea what's to come. It will be mind blowing!

Much love you, Lonna. You've become an amazing friend, a great confidant and a perfect doppleganger ;-)

MWAH

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Pitch Black Clarity

Wow ... love it a lot! Can't wait to see if it really was Alice?

Reviewer: saniaast27 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Everything Happens For A Reason

OH SHIT THIS IS GETTING INTRESTING OMG WHAT WILL HAPPEN

*8ITING MY NAILS WAITING*

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Everything Happens For A Reason

SO EXCITING

Reviewer: punkie (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Revelations

Man... even in this story... ya just want to slap Tanya silly! Someone needs to tear her apart and burn the pieces!



Author's Response:

Isn't that the truth!!!

Thanks for the Review! Glad to see some new eyes taking a look at the little world I'm creating :)

BTW - Ch 10 is posted, it's just awaiting validation. I finally did it ya'll. I got Ch 10 done :P

Working on Ch 11 now so that there won't be as long a gap for the next update.

Thanks for sticking with it, and I hope you enjoy where I'm taking it!!!

Lonna

Reviewer: nocturnal_rendevous (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Second Chances

Hmm...that damn Victoria just won't go away will she? Well, I love the story and I hope you update soon, cuz I have to find out what goes on with her and our Edward.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review. I have been on an unofficial break. My husband lost his job back Mid April, and life has been a lot more difficult and a lot more exhausting, thus cramping my creative freedom... BUT... I'm happy to say that I have near completed the next chapter, and hope to be back on track with the story, attempting to update every other week at the least.

Thanks to everyone that's still waiting around in the wings for me... I'm coming back... promise.

Off now to work on finishing up Ch 10.

Luv you all :P

Lonna

Reviewer: GrampysSchnug (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Second Chances

Hey!  I'm SO sorry to hear that your dealing w/RL (I've seen it written a few times on here and I'm trying to figure out what it means.  SO many ideas; rough life, was going to say writers log but thats a "w" lol--ugh) BUT whatever RL means, I hope your okay, and it doesnt last.  Especially if RL means rough life.  Yup--have that too lol.  Sucks.  BUT your writing is amazing and helps me get through those horrible days.  I love reading at night when my house is quiet.  I haven't posted my work yet.  I still have a few ideas Im working on--jumping back and forth (the missing months of New Moon etc) but ONE day I'll grow a set and post my first fic lol.  We'll see lol.

So, as always (I was so siked to see you wrote me back haha) I cannot wait to see chapter 10 as you had promised that it would be worth the wait!  :)  Anything you write is always worth the wait!   :)

Feel better, relax and enjoy your weekend!  I'll be sure to review soon!



Author's Response:

Yeah... R.L. = Real Life... :)

My husband lost his job, and we've been using the computer A LOT lately to look for him work, to no avail thus far.

By the time we've applied to multiple job postings and all, I'm just too tired to write, so I've been lacking lately. I apologize to all my readers... I PROMISE I am working on Chapter 10, and I'll get it posted as soon as I possibly can. I've just been very distracted, trying to make sure we can pay our bills, and take care of our household, etc...

Thanks for sticking with me. I'm keeping positive thoughts... bad things can't last forever, and God doesn't close a door without opening a window. So bear with me...

I Love all my readers, I'll post something soon!!!!

Thanks!

Lonna (ecandme)

Reviewer: GrampysSchnug (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Attempting Redemption

Oh for the love of all thats holy-can you please ink this up with an awesome update (your awesome and we miss your ink lol)!



Author's Response:

I'm working on it... I promise!!! R.L. has dealt me a really shitty hand lately, and I've been terribly distracted, but I swear it's coming soon!!! and I'll make it worth the wait :)

Thanks for the encouragement, it means a lot

Lonna (ecandme)

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