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Reviewer: seh314 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 11

I LLLOOOVVVEEE this story!!! OMG! I was really hoping they would... ahem... sleep in the same bed at the hotel, but I guess I'll be patient! Omg... I just love this so much... Can't get over it

Reviewer: seh314 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 7

I love this so far! I am rolling in laughter at the thought of Jacob being gay! HA! So hilarious! And I'm even Team Jacob! Excited to read the rest!

Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 15

I used to have drunken lunches in college. Drinking age in most of Canada is 19.  A bunch of us would take off for the pub and come back for afternoon classes drunk and throwing bits of plant at each other (Horticulture program).

Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 11

awww, they are so cute.

Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 8

I really, really like your Alice and Jasper!  I don't always like them when they are in more prominent roles in a fic, but I like them here. 

Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 7

oh, they were so cute!

Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 4

I love that Alice doesn't immediately see everything and is just getting 'dazzled' by Jasper.

Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 3

Oh, sexy Mr. Whitlock!

Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 2

I'm really liking this fic.

Reviewer: herperswife (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 22

I felt guilty reading without reviewing but only read completed stories because too many authors just STOP! I absolutely LOVED your story. It was such a perfect mix of angst and backbone and romance and friendship - it was SUPER! : )

Reviewer: vabeachgal (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 21

Loved it...you should be a confident writer.  It was a very enjoyable and well told story.

Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 22

very nice epilogue!

Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 14

very very good

Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 1

I have to say that i love the picture of Alice & Jazz so very sweet good no Great Job

Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 7

do the Happy Dance Enjoy the H*ll out of it !!!!!

Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 5

so far so cool  

Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 5

so far so cool  

Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 22

So sweet!  Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: hoodsgirl (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 16

I always like to 'hear' Edward's pov.  He's so enigmatic, I need to know what he's thinking.  That being said, you've done an amazing job on this story!!!

Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 22

awe - how adorable and a great ending!  Good job!  

Reviewer: Krysy (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 12

amazing. aww. & that was hwat!!

Reviewer: samantadrusila (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

And by more, I meant more of your stories. I'm not that great at reviewing so I hope this is enough.

Reviewer: samantadrusila (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 22

I love this story. Cannot wait for more.

Reviewer: TweetieBird (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 6

So... you named Angela and Ben's kid BJ? *facepalm* I know this is a few chapters late, but I was so caught up in your frabjulous story that I couldn't find a break in the action for constructive criticism. Please, /please/ have them call him junior, or something. BJ stands for not so babyish things.

Reviewer: Meikela (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 22

Loved it, loved the entire story actually. I will miss these characters!

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