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Reviewer: InThisTwilight (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
sexy as hell. - Mel
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 1
loved it was very good
amazing loved the smut
well until next time mbellaandedwardm
Reviewer: Rossandra1 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 1
I love smut and this was awesome!
Reviewer: asja (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 1
I absolutely love the Bella and especially Edward that you invented! I almost toppled of my couch from laughter a couple of times while reading Ladders and all the other outtakes ( thanks God my laptop was on the tabel and not on my lap), the way you write just drags us into the dynamic of Edward's hilarious mind and I hope you'll give us more adventures of 'this' Edward and the rest of them.Seriously, well done this is from now on, my favorite and most original story of all time.
Please keep up the good work and thanks. :)
Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
damn..i love when an edward gets all possessive with the mine mine mine shit lol
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 1
Awesome!!!! More, please?
(I am being polite....)
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
Aww...
Reviewer: edwardsvolvo (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 1
BRIMG IT!
Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
creepy
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 1
Even though this is an obvious case of Assward, it was still kind of sweet. Good job.
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 1
So not PC but so fucking hilarious!
Reviewer: sweetierosy (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
Yummy
Reviewer: Dawn ofthe dead (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love your Edward.
In my head, Jacob's name has permanantly been replaced with Tonto.
You are something like a goddess for writing Ladders.
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 1
LOL, I LOVE Jealous Edward!
Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 1
This Edward (yours and mine) is such a serial sexual sociopath -- he has absolutely no conscience, blithely skipping along his own version of the yellow brick road to Oz. Your humor is razor-sharp, the repartee is dead-on, and I can't even think about where your imagination likes to roam, but I look forward to the next invitation.
Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
Is it wrong to actually think it's sweet and hilarious that Edward can remember the exact date of every girl he's ever boinked? Yep. Love this too.
~Mia
Reviewer: stephdc (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 1
lol i still can't get over and Edward and "Tonto" i love this nickname for Jacob.. Edward is just a crackup :D
Reviewer: mistydawn (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 1
"checking her for tomahawk wounds as The Last of the Fuckhicans groans loudly." Oh my gosh, I snorted I was laughing so hard. I love it! nope... this native american is not offended ;)
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wonderful, too hot for words :)
Reviewer: itsanarchybaby (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
"My name is not effing Tonto"! Tonto shouts. I'm serious, that had me on the floor. laughing my head off. Again, I'm Native American and I find this all really funny. But then again, I'm also part Irish and I find Irish jokes funny. If it's all in good nature then I don't see the harm. Especially when the jokes are good. :) I'm off to read more of your stuff now, because I sure as hellokitty am not going to get any work done today. -Sam
Reviewer: soldiersgirl (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 1
Can I just say that the creative insulting names for jacob make my day. Pissing Deer has got to be my favorite so far...lol.
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 1
OMG! LMAO Loved it. Seems to be a theme with your fics. Love them all, they're funny as hell, and the sex is actually really HOT even if he's being an ass. LOL Great job!
~Cat~
Reviewer: Marjojo (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 1
Insulting Jacob based on his ethnicity is the same as insulting all Native Americans. Any insult directed at a person because of thier race is an offense larger than just the two people involved. Just because you think you are not a racist person does not mean that nothing you say can ever be racist. In addition, Edward's possessiveness in this story is quite misogynistic.
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 1
I just want to leave a massive review for the entire series cause it's too hilarious. I love your Edward and Bella, specially your Edward...something about ex-badboy's that are possessive is a big turn on. Great writing style I can't wait to read more!!! Keep up the fantastic writing. Jace
Reviewer: Lipsmacked (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2008 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 1
very sexy
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