Ugh! Jacob drama! I knew it was bound to happen but it doesn't mean I had to like it. :)

Good riddance to Jacob! Too bad Edward and Jasper didn't rough him up a bit before he left... shucks.

Author's Response: Don't worry, I think he's nursing some bruises today.  I bet Edward was lying when he told Bella he's fine. 

A cliffie!! :)

Bella's getting a bit more confidante, that is good. Kind of getting tired of her not realizing how hard Edward has fallen for her.

Can't wait for E&J to meet up!! This will be GOOD!!

Oh no drama!! BUt I guess that's what keeps us turning the chapters..... :)

GAH.

Bella is so FUCKED up.

i love it.

and Jake coming back. 

Perfect.

Dudette, i found your stuff today and i read the whole thing. you really put a lot of hardcore effort in this and it pays off.

 

UGH nosey small-minded small-town folk!! BAH!

cracker jacks!! whats jacob doing back!!

 I loved your coffee comment!

 I like my women like I like my coffee...hot and strong.....and with a spoon in them ;) 

Eddie Izzard is my life!

And I can't wait to see what kind of havoc comes from Jacobs visit!  I hope he mouths off and Edward lays him out :)

Yes!!! “Bella, as much as I hope to pluck your flower sometime in the future, I just meant love.  You’ve given me your love.”

That is my favorite line!  And I love the title...because he just is extra hot.  

Great chapter...now for Edward to dump Jacob off on the side of a highway far, far away.

Too.  Much.  Fun!!

I started off (when she walked in on Alice and Edward) thinking, "Oh No!  She wouldn't!  Phew!  She didn't."  and I smiled because I knew you were thinking about me when you wrote that scene.  (By the way, I usually kind of want to hug you when I finish reading a chapter.)

LOVED the Best Buy scene.   Loved that Edward "became bff's with the salesman".  Oh I can so relate.  I think Edward and my husband would get along just great.

LOVED their conversations at Best Buy and Starbucks.  HILARIOUS!

As always, LOVED her internal dialogue, especially at Starbucks.  And when he gave her the truck.

I'm still nervous about Jacob showing up.  He isn't, by any chance, a quirky old man is he?  No?  I was just hoping...

I can't wait for the update, but I'll be clicking on it with fear in my heart.

I laughed and smiled though this whole chapter.   Thanks for making my day!

OH MAN!! You threw me for a loop about Tanya... how funny!!!! :)

Oh I couldn't leave you even if I tried.... too hooked on your story!! :)

*is comatose*...   ...   ...   ...   ...   ...

its a cliffy of Jacob-ness. *glares evilly* a cliffy!  It's a cliffy! And, and, and *grabs at hair* BELLA HAS A NEW CAR and its a cliffy that ends with JACOB!!  

Evil, evil, evil, evil Jackbauer!!

Jace

Can't wait to read more, great writing as usual.