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Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 28 Flustered
*tilts head and listens, a faint ringing noise is heard* Are those wedding bells I'm hearing in the distance? I do believe they are! *squee!* I hope Bella doesn't...well...Bella this up and hurt Edward. And James *growls* I want him destroyed...*sheepish* sorry but I really do, he's a creepy little man, Great writing as usual, I can't wait for the next chapter. Jace
Reviewer: BethanyKnight (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 28 Flustered
Edward is goin to propose, I know it. don't ket James kill one of them please! loved it. can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: mickey2501 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 28 Flustered
Edward is going to propose!!
Reviewer: ikinz (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 28 Flustered
sigh.....I should really wait to read a few chapter at once. Now this is all I will think about today. LOL! Great chapter. Will Edward pop the question? Is that why he is acting the way he is???
Reviewer: YouAreNotLeavingMe (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 28 Flustered
Is it because he plans on proposing? I dont know but thats my guessssss.....Lol. Love it, update soooon!
Reviewer: vos es meus vita (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 28 Flustered
I think Edward is acting so weird because he's going to propose. It just makes sense to me because they talked about it AxJ's proposal before he left to go with Emmett and then when he came back he said he found what he wanted. Soooo.... But I could be wrong!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 28 Flustered
Nooooooooooooooo! Not the next chapter. edward is taking Bella out to propose right? He was a wee bit miffed that Jasper and alice stole his thunder?? I was on tenter-hooks this whole chapter wondering what James was doing, and being creeped out thinking he is up there watching and waiting. Arrgghhhh Please update soon, my nerves can't take it!
Author's Response: man do you know me by now? I always update soon. I'm sick, so I have nothing to do but write. Thanks for all your reviews!
Reviewer: DeltaSwan90 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 28 Flustered
Oh! So exciting! James is seriously creeping me out! It's AWEOSME! lol. uhh and Eddie's gonna pop the question ;) way to go Eddie!
Reviewer: Twilighter 4 Life (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 27 Mine
Ewww how sick of James!! I really wish Edward and Bella fled the friggen country. This is pissing me off! lol Couldn't you make vampire Edward and Alice's abilities present in their human lives?? This capturing James thing would be easier :) Great chapter...as always!
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 27 Mine
James is psyco! but it helps make the story great! I hope Edward kicks his ass... :) Love your story!!!!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 27 Mine
omg you have no idea how freaked out i am whenever bella's alone i start getting anxious and when bella came home, i almost had a heart attack i keep expecting it to be james and not edward to greet her oh my poor heart please update soon. you have me hooked!
Reviewer: rhea12 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 27 Mine
my my my my my my my. stop saying people are dying here. unless it's james. then let him die. that's fine wth me. butterflies occured many times (throughout the first half. if i had butterflies during the second half i would expect you to have me commited.) i would like to see crying eddie again... it warms my soul. greatness!
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 27 Mine
Fantastic as always but James gotta go
Reviewer: Belladonna75 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 27 Mine
Damn. James is going all out. This won' be pretty. Awesome update!
Reviewer: mllesinistre (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 27 Mine
OMG, that is so damn creepy! I knew it wasn't Edward who had come home for lunch. That was just a little too suspicious, especially when he didn't say anything about missing her. I really hope he gets caught soon.
Reviewer: vos es meus vita (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 27 Mine
James is such a psycho! You write him so well though. I mean, the stuff you come up with him to do is very creative. But he totally watched them slow dance. -shudders- He's a creep.
Reviewer: mottmom (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 27 Mine
Ahhh get James out of there!!! too creepy ...lol.... great chapter. the dancing part was awesome.
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 1 Stranded
Bella still agrees to marry him and they both never have sex.... ever. No sex ever?...as in ever ever *twitches* That would suck *sniffles* no sex ever. *shrugs* if you must *sigh* I would remain ever loyal of course...but really no sex ever ever *shudders* *chuckles* Jace
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 27 Mine
James is one sick dog. Great chapter! Update soon!
Reviewer: daedal factotem (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 27 Mine
Attic Stalker-I Luv it-Are E & B going to get together before this is over?(And please don't kill either one of them...come on, please not that)
Reviewer: anuddaone (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 27 Mine
who doesn't like to make people cry, really? still really enjoying this...
Reviewer: ekimmuh (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 27 Mine
Oh you don't have to kill anyone. Come on. We like HAPPY endings. Another great chapter though. You are really keeping us on edge. James need to get what's coming to him. I can't believe he is up in the atic spying on them. And that Mrs. Cope is NOT helping the situation spreading rumors about Edward and Bella. Didn't she learn her lesson from the last time.
Reviewer: sweetnsassy (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 27 Mine
Ewwwwwww!!! You are totally creeping me out! The scene with Edward and Bella dancing and then on the couch was so incredibly sweet and intimate. But then contrasting that with James. HIDEOUS! Even more hideous is that he was WATCHING THEM! {shudder} I think I'm going have that someone-is-watching-me feeling for the rest of the night. I'm still waiting for the PM, although maybe I should run. This is what you typed, "I am going to have to PM you soon so we can really be friends. I kind of want to kill someone so that everyone will cry." Yikes! Are YOU James????
Author's Response: Ha ha ha. I've been sick. Blame the niquil. I don't want to kill any real people I promise - especially you! that was funny. I've completely lost my voice, otherwise I would be laughing out loud right now. Unfortunately laughing only hurts at this point. I'm going to re read this now, and make sure I didn't type anything creepy. PMing you now!
Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 27 Mine
oh my gosh, i cannot believe this, i would love for him to come crashing through the ceiling and landing on something sharp!
Reviewer: ikinz (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 27 Mine
ugh!! what a slime ball. can't wait to read more....
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