Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 32 Motherly Advice
Hehe. I love Alice and I'm going to steal Emmett from Rose. LOL and he's great! I'm still waiting to see that line. This is great. I can't wait for the bacherlorette party. Great writing as usual! Jace
Reviewer: vjrick (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 32 Motherly Advice
i really do love this story, i hope that you will continue it a little while longer. the main part of the story is now pretty much over. is james going to make another apperence? (like the trial or someting). anyways. great story. :)
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 32 Motherly Advice
Bachelorette party please!!!!!!!!! This was a great chapter! I love when Bella is embarrassed! :) Poor Emmett... he will never grow up!
Reviewer: rhea12 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 32 Motherly Advice
yeah yeah yeah... wedding night please?! lol
Reviewer: lovedforeternity (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 32 Motherly Advice
I love this story. I know some moms like Renee. That was stinkin funny. So was Alice's revenge. Thanks for updating as much as you do. It gives me something to look forward too. Your awesome!
Reviewer: sweetnsassy (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 32 Motherly Advice
I love this chapter! I loved Edward trying to get Bella back in bed. I loved that Bella sent Alice to Walmart (and Alice's revenge!). I loved Bella lunch conversation with her mom! I loved Emmett and Rose's interaction. I love that you're still writing chapters!
Author's Response: Thanks favorite reader! My mom is really kind of like that - or she would be if I didn't run away screaming.
Reviewer: abcd1234 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 32 Motherly Advice
I'm so glad you didn't end the story!!
Reviewer: mottmom (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 32 Motherly Advice
I love it!!! Yes bacherlorette party please!
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 32 Motherly Advice
I love it!! I am so glad that you are going to keep going!! I can't wait for the Wedding!!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 32 Motherly Advice
LOl Poor Bella, two traumatic embarrassing scenarios in the one day.
And way to go Alice :)
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 32 Motherly Advice
They will have only been together for like 2 months by the time they get married, but they are so perfect together. I just hope that James doesn't try to ruin their wedding by making another appearance.
Reviewer: ikinz (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 32 Motherly Advice
I am so glad that you are going to continue. I promise to let you know when it is over kill, LOL! I want to see a wedding and honey moon. I wasn't ready to say good-bye to this story yet. Thank you!!!
Reviewer: Twilighter 4 Life (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 32 Motherly Advice
Yes to the bachelorette party!!! Bella's mom needs to be put on meds lol very cute chapter :)
Reviewer: vos es meus vita (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 32 Motherly Advice
I love this story! Don't let it be over soon! But I can't wait to see the what's next! A bachelorette party would be quite fun to read.
Reviewer: Jencrane (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 32 Motherly Advice
I understand why you don't want to end the story. You have written really great characters with fun personalities. A Bachelorette/bachelor party would be funny, plus everyone at the lake house for the wedding. You could really go on for awhile with this one, and as long as people are reading it, you should. I think everyone wants to read the wedding night too!!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 32 Motherly Advice
Yay! OK Bella's mom scares me. Honestly she truly acts like she wants to be friends with Bella rather than a mom. Although I guess she does bring up a good point because Bella is terrified about the wedding night. But I do have confidence that Edward and Bella can talk things out and it'll be okay. I liked this chapter, no pretending for me!
Reviewer: vjrick (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 31 The News
I really enjoyed reading your story, i think that a few more chapters would be great :)
Reviewer: mickey2501 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 31 The News
A few more chapters!!
Reviewer: Morgan (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 31 The News
Edward is soo funny.
Reviewer: wmlaw (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 31 The News
I'm always a fan of fluff- but you could always do them as one shots if you're worried about dragging this out too long. I'll read them either way :)
Reviewer: BethanyKnight (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 31 The News
awwwwwwwwww. that was sweet/ lmao off when she squeezed.
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 31 The News
I think at least one more chapter, a kick as chapter would be awesome (if not more)... cuz Emmett still needs to pop the questions! :) Definately need an epilogue! :) I loved this chapter!!! It was so awesome!!!!
Reviewer: Alylyn (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 31 The News
please do a little flufy stuff!! It was great!!
Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 31 The News
Excellent story. (You even got Emmett to cry. lol) I hate to admit this because it makes me sad when a good story comes to an end, but I would hate to see you drag this out any farther. I'm afraid it might ruin the integrity of what you got going. I highly recommend ending it next chapter with a epilogue. I like your writing style; I hope that you continue writing. I would definitely read more of your work. :)
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 31 The News
Ugh, James is alive! Durn! Although I guess I don't want that on Edward and Bella's conscience, but still. I know that personally I'd be happier if he were dead if it were me. So when are they getting married?! I can't believe Edward said Tomorrow with her dad in the room. I guess Edward's in a bit of a hurry!
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