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Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2012 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 15
loving every word so sweet sensual dont want it to end
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Typical
I think I figured it out, with 'it' being why Carlisle's so grumpy... He's impotent, isn't he? It makes sense...
^^
Spikey
Author's Response: *gasp* How'd you guess?? ;)
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: BellaCullen184ever (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 19 - All Around Me
I love it
1 This story is amazing and wow! I have no words. More chapters, please? Oh, I do have to say, Edward SR is a dickhead!!!!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 19 - All Around Me
well the meeting with Ed sr didn't go too well, though it at least triggered a few revelations for our Edward & even Bella to some degree. Now they have an idea of why Carlisle doesn't like the music, maybe they can find a way to make it more acceptable one day.
Oh and B&E took their relationship to a new level, wonder how they'll feel in the morning with two major events to talk over now :)
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 19 - All Around Me
Some people are not meant to be parents. It's too bad it took Senior two kids to realize it was not for him. I wanted to smack him in the face for Edward.
Their first time was so descriptive, I could feel sympathy pains with Bella.
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 19 - All Around Me
great chapter.....
Reviewer: trulyedwardly (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 19 - All Around Me
Gee i wish my first time was like that!!!! mine was in the back seat of a 60 some camero with a jail bird LOL
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 19 - All Around Me
Yup, sometimes biological parents are just doners...not really caring about their progeny.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 19 - All Around Me
Wow! They did it :) About time. Poor Edward though with his biological father...what a douche.
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Everglow
I love their interaction !
You have it spot on ..bless Bella when she walked into Edwards back ,in the queue.
Can't believe you ended on a cliffy ,you have ,however ,promised that chap 19 is on its way ,so I think you can be forgiven !!
Reviewer: anna42hmr (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Everglow
fantastic story cant wait to read more!!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Everglow
=O OOMMGGGG!!!!!
This was INCREDIBLE!!!
Reviewer: noni LG (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Everglow
yikess cliffie... butterfly was flying all over E & B =P... i can imagine how nervous he was...
Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Everglow
You are so meaaaaaan! Lol.
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Everglow
I'm so glad you're back again with this story. And yes, you're so, so bad for letting us wait for Edward Masen vs. Edward Masen. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Everglow
hehe great place to stop ;)
I really liked the way Bella "jumped" Edward when he talked of finding his bio-dad - so she could "see" him hehe :)
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Everglow
Ohhhh....EVILLE cliffie! *LMAO* But SO good.... relieved that the whole frat-party incident etc has in some way brought Bella & Edward closer together.
Meeting Edward Masen Snr must be such an out-of-body experience for our beloved Edward. Will be very interesting to see how his biological father reacts to the news. Truly hope he doesn't just brush him off. :(
Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Everglow
Argh... What a place to stop! *throws heavy objects towards author*
No, I'm just kidding. I'm glad you updated, and I really liked the chapter. It's great that they finally learned to communicate. And it's cool that Edward found his dad - but I still hate the cliffie ;-)
Thanks for sharing, I'm REALLY looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Everglow
You're bad for the cliffie but as long as the next chapter is going to be worth it then I'll forgive you lol. Is it going to be the sex rumble royale we have all been waiting for? lol
Reviewer: Alex81 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Everglow
now that was just a cruel cliff hanger... not that i expected anything different! I would have done the same. :) Keep up the great work! I cant wait for more!
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Everglow
Thanks for the update; it was wonderful. So happy they are getting better. I hope Edwards father accepts him
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Everglow
And you end there?! Clever writer.
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Everglow
thanks as always awsome chapter
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Everglow
Love it! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Everglow
What a place to end (can you see my evil eye I'm giving you?) Wow! I think that was a lot more anxiety riddled because it was Bella's pov - without the visuals and just the emotions and sounds. I can't wait for the next update!
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