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Reviewer: CubanFIre004 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 6
I loved it i cant wait for your next chapter!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll post the next chapter in a few days.
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 6
Why was Bella crying?
Author's Response: Because of the pain.
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 5
Quite a funny situation Bella was in. :-) A nice break from the angst.
Author's Response: Well, she deserves a break. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 6
Haha, don't be worried if people are complaining for longer chapters....It means they Love your story!!! But yeah, though I'd love ten pages of ready-to-go story, that ain't happening, so I'm completely content with waiting. Besides, you don't take long between chapters at all!
I'm very curious as to Bella's story. I'd glad Alice didn't get around to telling Bella about Edward...I don't really think it was her place.
My crystalball tells me that Bella's going to have some company downstairs....and that I'm going to squeal with delight when I get to read it!
Author's Response: Let's see if you're on to something... *lol* Hopefully you'll like what's to come in the next couple of chapters. Thank you so much for your review!
Reviewer: clancy (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 6
i'm more pissed at Rosalie - the ball buster she is sometimes : )
there's always next chappy for some interaction !!
Author's Response: Absolutely, and I'm working on it as we speak. :) Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my story!
Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 6
ahhh, we almost got to know more about Edward's and Bella'S past.
Rosalie was abominable. I bet he feels bad about the way he left Bella in the kitchen.
Author's Response: He probably does. More about their pasts soon, thanks for your review! :)
Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 6
love it
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: fashionista19 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 6
love it! can't wait for your next chapter..hopefully reviews make you update faster : )
Author's Response: Actually, the amazingly large amount of reviews I recieved just over the night made my muse squeel with delight and start on the next chapter immediately, so it's definitely working. *lol* Thank you!
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 6
This is good stuff - nicely done :)
Achilles
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: Echo (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 6
MOAR!!!!!!!!! please. You really are very good.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! :)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 6
I'm not pissed off about the cookies, but am looking forward to Edward and Bella talking - they ahve obviously both ben through bad things, and I can see them comforting one another, eventually.
Author's Response: Let's hope they will, they need each other whether they know it or not at this point. Thanks for leaving a review!
Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 6
You BETTER make it up!!! Oh man!!! I AM soo looking forward to some B&E interaction!! Just some more conversation even- please!
Author's Response: I will, I promise! *lol* I don't think the next chapter will disappoint, or at least I hope. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 6
Poor Edward ... it's horrible to always feel like everyone blames you for the crap in life. Hope he and Bella get a chance to talk and connect a bit.
Author's Response: It sure is, and it's not really new to him. There will most likely be connecting eventually. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lal08 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 6
I read all the chapters today. I love well written angst stories. This is a very tough subject. I can imagine it will take awhile for Edward to sort his issues. I am really looking forward to read more...
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, more coming soon. :)
Reviewer: reddms88 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 6
hell i was surprise he spoke to her....i seriously cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: You won't have to wait very long, I promise. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: GlitterInMyHeart (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 6
awh man why did rosalie come in?! im way curious of what edward's case is..
u need to post more often!!!
Author's Response: I honestly don't think I can post any more often than I already do. *lol* Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 6
So glad that they talked. Very interesting beginning to their relationship. I so want to know more about Bella's past. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you, there will hopefully be another chapter up by the end of the week. :)
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 6
So, what are Bella && Edward going to talk about then? :)
Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see... :) Thanks for your review.
Reviewer: wonnabcullen (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 6
aww i wanted bedward cookies! pretty awesome chapter though! can't wait 4 the next!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, more will be up soon. :)
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 6
Ok if you are putting more E/B interaction in the next chapter, then I won't have a fit. It sounds like Bella went thru something intense before coming to Forks. I can't wait to find out! Please Please PLEASE update SOON!!
Author's Response: The next chapter is halfway finished so you won't have to wait too long. Thank you very much for your review!
Reviewer: fuckward (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 6
The chapters are perfect as they are, I'd rather you update more often and have smaller chapters, than getting an update once every few weeks just so the chapter is longer. So right now it's all good. :) keep up the great work! i love that you don't let us waiting too long!
Author's Response: I'll do my best. :) Thank you so much!
Reviewer: TammyDevil666 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 6
Evil of you to leave it there, some things never change...lol! I don't mind him not helping, I just like that he at least talked to her and apologized, even if it was with a note. It looks like these two could possibly have more in common than they thought. I'm really enjoying this story=)
Author's Response: Hey, you! :) You know me and evil cliffies. *lol* I'm really glad you like the story, thank you!
Reviewer: lovesam66 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 6
Why r Bella getting these headaches? Is edward gonna go back to being silent and brooding after this Bella thing? I want some b/e time please!!!! Lol great update
Author's Response: Thank you! *lol* Keep reading and you'll find out! ;)
Reviewer: CandraJade (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 6
Poor Edward. I felt so sorry for him when everybody was fussing over Bella and nobody thought about going after him and looking if HE was alright after Rosalie accused him of being the cause for Bella's semi-breakdown.
Edward was actually pretty sweet for his standards when he asked Bella if Tyler hurt her.
I wonder how much Alice and Emmet know about what happened to Edward. Alice obviously knows that Edward has been abused, but does she know about the sexual abuse, too?
Phil asked Bella to let go of "her?" Of her mom, I assume. Maybe Bella's mom was attacked and Bella got hurt by trying to help her? It sounded like Phil somehow tried to help Bella, to tell her that she can't do anything anymore. I think her mom died during whatever happened and that's why Bella came to Forks.
The meds are really for Headaches? I didn't suspect that. It's very rare that flashbacks come together with migraine attacks. Dizziness, nausea, trouble with breathing, chest pain - yes, but usually no headache.
Author's Response: Maybe things will look up for Edward soon. ;) In the next chapter you'll find out more about Bella and her past. And you'll find out more about Edward and his family eventually. Thank you so much for your review, promise you'll get all the answers if you keep reading. :)
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 6
I look forward to your next update. love how edward finds her distracting and is curious about her, very sweet.
Author's Response: I'm really happy you like it, thank you!
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