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Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 7

Such a great chapter :) So sad for what Bella and Edward had to go through. :( I am looking forward to hear more about Bella's past. Can't wait to read more. Great job

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked the chapter. :)

Reviewer: katt flynn (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 7

Excellent chapter. Can't wait to hear about Bella's past though. Edward's " break down" was truely heartbreaking. As always looking forward to the next chapter.


Author's Response: And you won't have to wait very long. :) Thank you!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 7

*Gasp!* I can't help but feel my heartbreaking for Edward as he has to relive his nightmares again and agian. I sure hope that rat bastard James is rotting in a jail somewhere and that he's someones bitch...I have no tolerance for child predators and if I could I would totally kick Edward's mom's ass for letting such a horrible person by her son and WALKING AWAY no less!!! What the hell was that woman thinking!?!  Grrrr....

Author's Response: I agree. It's horrible to think that these kind of things actually happens to children.

Reviewer: littlelarinda (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 7

Heartbreaking but I love it

Author's Response: Thank you, so happy to hear that. :)

Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 7

love it

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 7 sad. I love your story..please update soon

Author's Response: I will. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 7

Poor kids :(  Heart breaking but so well written


Author's Response: It means the world to me to hear that you think my story is well written. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: NICOL3 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 7

moree chapters pleaaase .

Reviewer: clancy (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 7

if they'd let me i would hold them so tight that they would have no option but to feel safe : )

Author's Response: I feel the same way when I'm writing this. :) Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 7

That was painful.  The first part made me sick and angry.  It was good, though....and necessary.  I wonder if Phil abused Bella or if he was just trying to keep her from going to her mother's body and accidentally pulled too hard.

Author's Response: Keep reading and you'll find out. :) Thank you so much for leaving a review!

Reviewer: RiaMaria (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 7

Interesting to get some more background on what's been going on with Bella.

Author's Response: More about Bella's past in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 7

This is so sad, but they need each other and this is a big step..Maybe he can open up a bit, since Bella has started telling her story....

Author's Response: Maybe. Thanks for your review! :)

Reviewer: angiewal421 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 7

love the story. update soon can't  wait for more

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! :) Next chapter is coming soon.

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 7

Great story so far. Very sad...the part at the beginning made me tear up a little but I like where this story is going. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! More will be up soon. :)

Reviewer: lovesam66 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 7

Omg that was so freakin' intense!!!!! I feel so bad for Edward:((( please tell me Bella wasn't abused too! That would just be too much! I Always look forward to ur updates ans then never disappoint, but when is there gonna be some happy times cuz all this angst is really starting to bring me down, but this story is never the less amazing!!!!!

Author's Response: I promise, in the next chapter, you'll find out what really happened between Bella and Phil. Also, the angst won't last forever. Thanks for your review! :)

Reviewer: GlitterInMyHeart (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 7

i love epovs<3

Author's Response: Writing Edward's pov is my favorite part, I'm so happy you love it. :)

Reviewer: Sakkosekk (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 7

Hey, i liked this! Update soon :)

Author's Response: Yay, thank you! I will update as soon as I can. :)

Reviewer: evrythingmusic1 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 7

Aww Edward and Bella!! Great story, keep writing!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I will. :)

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 7

oh poor edward. update soon!

Author's Response: Will do, thanks for your review!

Reviewer: fashionista19 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 7

I might sound repetitive, but I just love your story. I'm literally hanging on each chapter, impatiently waiting for the next. Can't wait for more!!! : )

Author's Response: I don't mind you repeating yourself at all. :) Thank you so much, I'm so glad you love the story!

Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 7

I just want to give Edward a hug!!! And poor Bella too! I can tell they are going to be good for eachother! I can't wait for more :) xx

Author's Response: The next chapter is almost finished, I'll try to post it within the next couple of days. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 7

awww i love this story i want to give both of them hugs and make everything go away all of their pain and sadness this is one of the stories i have become very fond of i look for the update when i come on once a week and im soo very glad i stumbled upon this story great job on this story i cant wait for more :D you are brilliant

Author's Response: Brilliant, really? *blush* Wow, thank you so much! :) There will be more soon.

Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 7

That update was short.

Author's Response: Sorry. I'll try to update soon to make up for it. :)

Reviewer: wonnabcullen (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 7

awwwww poor Edward I kinda love this story even though im crying my eyes out after reading the last chapter :(

ur handeling the hole story line beautifully and carefully ur doing a great job and i can't wait for the next chapter!! ur totally awesome!!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! :) Have to admit, writing the chapter made me tear up as well. More soon!

Reviewer: TammyDevil666 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 7

Yep, you are still the Queen of evil endings.  I'm thinking her situation is nothing like his, but I like that at least one of them is opening up to the other.  You so have to post more soon, it's rare that I'm actually this interested in a Twilight fiction.  You must be doing something!  I added the story to my favorites, so I'll get e-mail alerts when you update, that way I don't have to keep checking the site=)

Author's Response: *lol* I'm so happy you like my story that much! I only hope to see your story here some day. :)

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