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Reviewer: Spike82 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 9
Good! More interaction. 10 points to Bella for the Emmet moment ^^.
I wish you a Merry Christmas, with a little note for "Santa".... More please!!!^^.
Author's Response: Merry Christmas, and thanks for reviewing! There will be more soon. :)
Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 9
i freaking love it. i like how he offered to take her home. that is icing on the cake. love it
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: lord periperi (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 9
those two are too cute.....
and edward is reall something!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! :)
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 9
Cool and he's sweet. It's funny but in all these fan fics where she faints there is always someone there to catch her (generally Edward) but in RL I'd have fallen on the floor and walloped my head - I love the fairy tale better! :)
That's several times they've connected now so can't wait for any conversations etc. in the car. I'm also really pleased how you have her standing up for Edward because in a way he needs someone like that too.
Achilles
Author's Response: *lol* I bet no one would bother to catch me if I fainted, either. Bella sure is lucky. ;) Thank you very much for your review!
Reviewer: CandraJade (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 9
I love it how Bella always defends Edward and takes his side. He really needs that.
And Edward is so sweet with Bella - for his standards. He was so worried and protective when she fainted.
The families reaction was priceless.
I wonder how long it will take the family to notice Edward and Bella have a thing for each other. I guess the thought of Edward reacting like a normal teenage boy and falling in love is just too strange for them to even think about it.
Author's Response: I have a feeling at least *someone* in the family is about to start wondering. ;) (not telling who) Thanks for your review, another chapter should be up soon. :)
Reviewer: fuckward (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 9
You should see the grin on my face right now! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Wohoo! I'm so happy to hear that, thank you! :)
Reviewer: TwilaEveningStar (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hi! Well, I usually don't review anymore, but I just had to say I'm completely in love with your story. I've been looking for a story like this and you made it just perfectly! Update soon! And when you do, I'll be doing my happy dance!
Oooh! I forgot to tell you what I like. Edward is my favorite character in here because you made him so realistic. His bitter attitude and foul
mouth let's you see how damaged he is from his abuse. I'm glad Bella will be there for him. She seems like a sweetie ^.^
So yah! Have a fantastical day!!!!
Author's Response: Wow, your review really made my day. Thank you very much! I really hope the story will live up to your expectations. And I hope you will have a fantastic day also. :)
Reviewer: evrythingmusic1 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 9
Aww Edward is so sweet!! I'm really getting pissed off with Rosalie and Emmett, though! Don't they know what Edward's been through? For God sakes!
lol Great chapter I can't wait to see how the car ride with Bella and Edward goes! :D
Author's Response: You'll find out more about his family eventually. :) I have to admit, it feels kinda weird to write Emmett like this since I really like his character. Glad you liked the chapter, thank you!
Reviewer: Kairi J (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 9
awww, eddie's got some human emotions in there! and rosalie owes him an apology
Author's Response: She really does. We'll see if it comes to that. And yes, he's still capable of human emotions, they're just buried really deep. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 9
That is so sweet that Edward is taking care of Bella - that he feels protective of her...and they felt the "spark"! Cool!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. :)
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 9
oooooooo ..... can't wait for the car ride
Author's Response: That should be interesting. (writing the scene as we speak) Thanks for your review! :)
Reviewer: francy_princess (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 9
oooooooo.... cant wait 4 tha next chapter!!!!!!!
Author's Response: It'll be up in a few days, I hope. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 9
I love how everyone has these expectations of him and he's defying all their preconceptions. it's like he is powerless against it.
Author's Response: I agree. Thank you so much for your review!
Reviewer: clancy (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 9
thank you for a wonderful Christmas present : )
I am so proud of Bella for not letting the others influence her and for Edward to noticing it !!
Author's Response: You're welcome. And thank *you* for leaving such a nice review. :)
Reviewer: fashionista19 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 9
Awww Edward's turning around!!! finally...a little step closer to normal : ) Did I mention how much I am competely in love with your story??? yayy can't wait fo rmore!!!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! More to come soon. :)
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 9
Woohoo, mind over matter!!! That was awesome...poor Edward, zapped with Bella's electrifying love. LOL
Author's Response: *lol* That's one way of putting it. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 9
Awesome chapter, cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks, you won't have to wait long.
Reviewer: TammyDevil666 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 9
You tell them, Edward! I love how shocked everyone was over his interaction with Bella, and that she's basically ignoring them. Of course she would faint over a little blood...lol! Great chapter=)
Author's Response: *lol* I just had to make her faint. I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you!
Reviewer: lovesam66 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 9
Awww Bella fainted and edwrad caught her that's like prince charming stuff:) lol I wonder if anything will happen in the car * wiggles eyebrows* lol can't wait for the next chap and hope u have a happy holiday!!!!
Author's Response: I'm having a great holiday so far, thank you, hope you do too. And thank you very much for your review! :)
Reviewer: eliza3ame (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 9
great chapter, please update soon
Author's Response: Thank you, more soon. :)
Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 9
this is much better than the scene from last night- way cool-
Author's Response: Yay, thank you!
Reviewer: clancy (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 8
i have no words... this chapter *especially Edward's POV* was... well it made me smile and cry and then at the end i felt warm : ) thank you
Author's Response: Aww, thank you for leaving such a kind review, I'm so happy you liked it! :)
Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 8
If ony I was good at that stuff...then I'd make you a banner but I can barely work paint on my computer let alone make an amazing banner lol.
Really liked this chapter (how can I not). I think that it's good that Bella wasn't abused. You don't have to be in someone's exact position to help them or have a connection with them.
I like how Edward isn't almost instinctly wanting to kiss her by now. I like when the character falls into liking her instead of it happening right away ;).
Author's Response: I used to make my own banners for my stories, but I just don't seem to have the patience anymore. *lol* I'm really glad you liked the chapter, thank you so much!
Reviewer: soccergirl23 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 8
Wow!! I totally thought that Bella was abused too. I thought her reaction to Tyler was kind of similar to Edward's reaction to people touching him, maybe a little too intense, is she hiding something?? It doesn't seem like the whole story, I mean if her mom dieing was it then why didn't Phil go with her to Forks, he didn't die too right?
Author's Response: No, Phil didn't die. Although I want to explain, I'm afraid you'll have to keep reading to get the answers to your questions. :) Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: kellyliz82 (Anonymous) · Date: December 19, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 8
I love your broken Edward. I look forward to seeing his relationship with Bella grow. Thanks for sharing!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
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