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Reviewer: Spike82 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 10
love this chapter... and the banner too is very indicated ^^. Love also Bella's stubborness asking for Edward's friendship, and really want to read EPV... and the little, sweet part of me, hope for Edward to stop at Bella, after the thing he have to do!!!
Author's Response: Let's see about that. ;) Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you liked both the chapter and the banner. :)
Reviewer: laced (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 10
i like your story its quite interesting
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you think so. :)
Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 10
wow. I absolutely loved this chapter. I am glad Bella put herself out there and let Edward know how she feels :) I can't wait to read EPOV. Keep up the great work. Look forward to more soon :)
Author's Response: Yay, I'm so happy you loved the chapter. There will be more soon. :)
Reviewer: Emmla (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 10
I love how you managed to get in some real Twilight lines here, perfect!
Author's Response: So glad you liked it. Thanks! :)
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 10
Good for Bella! I thought it was great the way she put herself out there for Edward. I am thrilled that she wants to be his friend. He really needs one. I hope that when the truth comes out - she can handle it!
Author's Response: Let's really hope she can, for both their sakes. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you!
Reviewer: francy_princess (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 10
cant wait 4 tha next chapter!!!
Author's Response: You won't have to wait very long. :) Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 10
Nicely done - looks like his barriers are at least wavering a little :)
Looking forward to more as usual.
Achilles
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing. More soon. :)
Reviewer: katt flynn (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 10
Love Edward's confession that he can't stay away anymore. Canb't wait for his P.O.V. Still an excellent story and looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm in the middle of writing the EPOV right now, and I'll post the next chapter soon.
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 10
Hee hee kewl. He's coming around. Slowly, but surely.
I dare those other boys at school to bug or hit on Bella now!!! *giggle* oh I hope they try...just to see what Edward does to them ;0)
Author's Response: That would be interesting, wouldn't it? :) He wouldn't like that. Thank you so much for your review!
Reviewer: lal08 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 10
First of all, I have been reading this story for awhile now and meant to leave you a longer review but never had the time. Hence, I have been leaving a few sentences now and then.
I was hesitant to read this story at the beginning because rape in any form is the lowest act of a human being. Having said that, when I especially hear about children getting raped and by their own parents that makes me physically sick. Because children are the most innocent human beings and when they are the victims of such acts, it is absolutely horrendous.
Then again your portrayal and words were strong and I had to see how your Edward would cope. Bella will help him that is obvious because of her selfless nature, but he has a long way ahead. He is extremely lucky that he finally found such caring foster parents and a loving family, but as I said it will be hard.
Because his situation is multi-dimensional, I am curious to see Charlisle and Esme's take on it, like why did they adopt him, what was the state he was in when they made such a decision, how hard it is to have him as a part of their family, etc... I wonder how Carlisle feels as a father figure to Edward as Edward's real father was such a terrible figure and that's all he knew when he was growing up
As I said in my first review, it is a very though subject, but you have been tackling it fairly and I respect that.
Author's Response: Hi again. I've appreciated every one of your reviews, and I always get excited when I receive the long ones. I don't blame you for being hesitant to read this. I was hesitant to post it in the first place. I totally agree with you, rape and child abuse is horrible. But I want you to know that I take my writing, especially with such a delicate matter, very seriously. And I have every intention to make Edward heal from his abuse and give him a happy ending with someone who cares for him deeply. I also intend to let you see things from Carlisle's pov eventually, and maybe some other characters as well. That said, I wanna thank you for taking the time to let me know what you think. I'm so glad you decided to give my story a chance.
Reviewer: HeartStopsBeating (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 10
wow i have compelty fallen for this story. its so intense and exciting. please update soon. im so happy.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'll post the next chapter soon. :)
Reviewer: Kairi J (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 10
and it keeps getting better
Author's Response: So glad you think so, thank you!
Reviewer: clancy (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 10
will he come back ?? i am glad that Bella pushed him a little - he needed it : )
Author's Response: I don't know. Will he? Just kidding. I do know. *lol* Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: lal08 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 10
wow, very intense chapter. this is such a tough subject, I am sure it is very hard for Edward and it would be so hard for him to open up and talk about it. Bella will need to be very patient.
Author's Response: I have a feeling she will be. Thank you very much for leaving a review.
Reviewer: lovesam66 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 10
Wonderful chapter!! those lines in the middle about being friends is that from the book? like word for word, cuz it sound super familiar. lol i cant wait for more!!!!
Author's Response: A couple of the lines are borrowed from the book, yes.:) Thanks for reviewng, I'm so glad you liked the chapter.
Reviewer: lexy lujan (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 5
hahahaha. "Because I was standing in front of Edward Cullen, barefoot, in a purple bathrobe, with flour on my face. Asking him to help me bake cookies, in his kitchen." hahahaha thats imbarrising. great story
Author's Response: Thank you, so happy you liked it!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 10
Dear lord what a breakthru...Bella may not realize it but from what I've gotten from Edward that is definatly a huge step for him. I can't wait to see what Edward thinks...
Please update soon!!
Author's Response: I will, I have already finished half of chapter 11. Thanks for your review! :)
Reviewer: Kerri (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 10
please update!!! amazing story
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'll update soon. :)
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 10
i love you seriously i do :D you are brilliant :D cant wait for eddies pov
Author's Response: Aw, you're so sweet! :) Thank you! EPOV coming right up. :)
Reviewer: GlitterInMyHeart (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 10
i have as many questions as bella bout edward :P
Author's Response: I bet. :) You might get at least some answers soon. Thank so much for leaving a review.
Reviewer: trixie11 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 10
I just found your story today and read all 10 chapters. LOVE IT!! A tortured Edward and Bella make for a great story. Keep up the great job. I'll be watching for you as I just added you to my favorites!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you very much! I'm so happy you enjoy my story so far, hopefully you'll like the rest as well. :)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 10
i'm so happy that Edward and Bella started talking, and I HOPE he shows up on her doorstep!
Author's Response: That would be nice, wouldn't it? We'll just have to wait and see. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 10
Awesome chapter!!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! :)
Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 10
Sweet chapter. I like how Bella's not pushing him into telling her the whole truth right away. Can't wait for EPOV
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm happy you think the chapter was sweet. :)
Reviewer: TammyDevil666 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 10
Well, she's slowly getting through to him, it'll just take some time. The part about the dazzling cracked me up...lol! Even though he's an ass at times, this Edward is definitely more interesting. Great chapter=)
Author's Response: I kinda liked the dazzling part as well. *lol* Thanks for reviewing!
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