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Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 12

OMG....Just found this and read all the in love with this story. This Edward just breaks my heart...hes so broken...doesn't let anyone in...mostly cause he has himself convinced no one cares...and then Bella comes in and all he thought is thrown out....SOOOOO freaking good! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so happy to have a new reader. :) There will be more in a couple of days.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 12

This was not an update. It was a teese. Please I want more. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Sorry. :) I promise to have a new chapter up soon.

Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 12

Beautiful story!  Thanks for the update.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm happy you like the story. :) More soon.

Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 12

Great chapter!!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: clancy (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 12

i know you cant see me but i am wearing a great big SMILE : )
i also know that this doesn't mean things will be smooth sailing its just it mean its a good start !!

Author's Response: I'm so glad the chapter made you smile. :) And you're right about the angst not being over, but it's at least a step in the right direction. Thank you!

Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 12

That's good, subconsious action is always better than something you think through too many times ;)


Author's Response: True. :) Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: NICOL3 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 11

add more chapter please

Author's Response: There will be another chap soon. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: BrightAngelofDarkness (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 11

i have to say this is really awesome story.. it breaks my heart to see Edward this way but im glad to see Bella being the stronger one.. emotionally that is! But all the same.. Fantastic job so far.. keep updating often :) :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, it means a lot to me to hear that you think my story is awesome. I just posted the next chapter, hopefully it will be validated within the next couple of days.

Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 11

Please don't make Edward run away!  I'll cry if you do.

Author's Response: Even if he'll run, I have a feeling he won't get very far. ;) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 11

This chapter was so sad :( I feel bad for Edward. I can't to read Bella and Edward's POV next.
Keep up the great work. Excellent chapter

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, it's sad, but things might get a little better soon. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 11

Oh I can't tell you how much it breaks my heart to see Edward hate himself so much. That bastard James really did a number on him. live with such self loathing is just devastating. I can only hope he will let Bella in as she may be the one who can help heal his heart. This really is such a sad Edward, but I can't help but just cheer him on as he finds himself.

Author's Response: He needs help to heal, yes, and I have a feeling Bella just might be the right person. Thank you for leaving a review.

Reviewer: eliza3ame (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 11

Wow, poor edward, I really liked this chapter. please update soon

Author's Response: I will, thank you very much, I'm happy you liked the chapter. :)

Reviewer: wonnabcullen (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 11

awesome i loved it can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: I'll update again soon, thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Cullenlingus (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 11

This is downright painful to have him see himself this way.  I love how you twisted the Doc's intentions to make E feel like he was "being fired" by her too.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad to hear you loved it. More soon.

Reviewer: adt216 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 11

I cannot leave reviews on my stupid iphone so I apologize for leaving just this one, but I absolutely love this story and both of your characters.

Your writing is very good and I am very much looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: No need to apologize, and I really appreciate you letting me know what you think. Thank you so much for your review, and there will be another chapter up soon. :)

Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 11

I think we can all relate to Edward's behavior here. I wonder what made Carlisle consider taking him in, in the first place. And whether Alice and Emmett really don't know about his past. After all, the yhave been living with him for years.

Author's Response: Interesting questions, which will be addressed later on. ;) Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Kairi J (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 11

snaps for an update occuring sooner rather than later!

Fantastic story line, once again.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! More comin asap. :)

Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 11

A touching and heartbreaking fic.  You capture the angst and lonliness that Edward carries around and his need to be be loved and accepted very well. 

 I don't think that Carlisle is handling the situation with him effectively, in fact, I think that he is helping Edward to avoid the issues and deal with them, in his need to not hurt him any more.  Edward's therapist is also not very good at what she does - the way she handled that talk, it had the effect of making her patient worst and building on his self-hatred, and low self esteem.  I guess she felt ineffective and subconciously acted insensitively.

Both Emmett and Rosalie are horrid and need some sensitivity, tolerance and caring added to their makeup.  Bella is a light of hope and I hope that Edward opens up to her a bit.

Update soon.

Author's Response: So far, neither of them are handling things very good. I've been thinking about writing some outtakes, from Carlisle's, Emmett's and Alice's pov, maybe some other characters as well. Because they all have their issues. Anyway, thank you very much for your review, I'll post the next chapter soon.

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 11

I liked getting in his head more and getting more of his memories.  It breaks my heart how he can see love and he doesn't feel worthy of it and feels the need to protect himself from it.  I do love that Bella is getting under his skin.  And - I have a better understanding about Emmett now.

His therapy session did surprise me.  It seems that Dr Clearwater didn't think it would go that way with her ultimatum.  It was a risky bet and I think she lost!  She should have know better that to give that choice to him!

And Poor Edward - he is so lost and hurting and doesn't want to hurt those who care about him.  They just don't get it!!

Author's Response: Yes, Dr Clearwater may have made a mistake. On the other hand, Edward just might be better off without her. At least he feels that way now. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: rubytuesday (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 11

So intrigued by this story :)

I hope Edward gradually starts opening up to Bella more!

Author's Response: I'm sure he will, eventually. So glad you're intrigued. Thanks for your review! :)

Reviewer: ghartling (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 9

He is taking care of her....I am not a fan of Emmett.....booo hisss......I am loving how this story is written!



Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm really glad you like my writing. More soon. :)

Reviewer: Spike82 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 11

Ok, i don't hate you (for the moment^^), but really want to read more about Bella and Edward's feelings. I already said i hate Emmet in this moment? Very, very much!!! hope he'll understand something sooner or later (or before i have to kill him). Beauiful and sad chapter, but you can't stop it in this way. More???

Author's Response: Glad you don't hate me. :) More Bella/Edward in next chap. There will also be more about Emmett and his behavior later on. More in a few days, thanks for your review!

Reviewer: ghartling (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 5

I am really enjoying your story....

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that. Thank you.

Reviewer: pie2moon2 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 11

poor edward. he's so goos...he just doesn't know it yet

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing.

Reviewer: wtm (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 11

keep updating!!!!!

Author's Response: I will! :)

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