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Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 15

I really like this Bella.  I like that she is kind and sarcastic.  She is smart and caring.  I love what she said to Rose.

I really liked that E/B interaction at the end was so natural and comfortable.

Can't wait to see what is next!

Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear that you like it. Thank you!

Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 15

who is Victoria indeed. If I was Bella, I would butter Jasper up a bit. I think she could crack him :)

And what can be done about Mike Newton?... :)

Author's Response: Maybe she will. *lol* And as for Mike... Hopefully he'll get what he deserves. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 15

Mike Newton is like turd in the not easy to clean crevices of one's sneakers.  It takes a lot to get rid of it all.  Ugh! 

Whatever difficulty Edward was having about "Victoria" earlier with his father was not enough to keep him away from seeing Bella in Biology. so yeah for that.  What an idiot that fool Mike is.

This story has become like a drug for me.  I'm already trying to figure out what to do with myself until the next fix!  I'll probably be trying to hide my DTs.

Author's Response: *lol* I'll try not to make you wait too long for your next 'fix'. The next chapter should be up in a few days. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 15

No one can cut Edward a break, seriously!?

Author's Response: He sure needs a break, and maybe he'll get one soon. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 15



Author's Response: That would be good, huh? *lol* Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: saniaast27 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 15


Author's Response: I'm pretty sure I answered that, but I don't mind doing it again. :) Yes, Edward was sexually abused by James. I prefer not to get into too much detail when it comes to that, instead mostly leaving hints, like in the prologue with the zipper being pulled down. I'm glad you love my story, thank you very much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 15

grrrrrrrrr no i hate that prick but im glad edward came to class for bella :D i hope she just goes with him when he leaves and i really hope bella tells mike off something fierce for that comment i love you i swear you are fueling my addiction and im starting to get over my withdrawl slowly haha :D great chapter :D brilliant doll briliiant

Author's Response: I hope you'll like the next chapter (have a feeling you will ;)) and thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: Cullenlingus (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 15

Great interaction with the Newton.  I am happy to see Emmett concerned and defend Edward.  Look forward to Edward's POV.

Author's Response: Well, there might be more to Emmett than it seems. EPOV coming up, thanks for revieiwng!

Reviewer: louisianagirl900 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 15

Good chapter...evil cliffie...

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 15

Mike Newton is like a bad penney!!! I hope Bella tells him to go screw himself before Edward beats his ass. On second thought, please don't let Edward get into anymore trouble. LOL..Thanks for the update; it makes my day a lot brighter to see it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, and you're right, Edward deserves a break.

Reviewer: RiaMaria (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 15

Ooooh! Unlucky Mike! your time's up!

Author's Response: And he won't even know what hit him... *lol* Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 15

Awwww, did Edward come to class jsut to see her?!!  lol I'm probably wrong, but wouldn't that be jsut adorable!!??! 

Can't wait for more!

Sure, a thread sounds great! 

ps- I'm so glad you're getting so many deserve it!

Author's Response: Thank you! I have a thread now, hope you'll stop by. :) And I'm absolutely shocked by the large amount of reviews I've gotten so far.

Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 14

My comment!!!! lol I will ever understand why this makes me so damn happy, but it does!!! lol

Love the 20 questions thing cause that's always the way I go when things get awkward with people.  And with Edward? Perfect.

You are awesome.

Author's Response: *lol* I loved your comment, and I think Edward liked it as well... :P Thank you so much!

Reviewer: bellalullabye09 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 14

Finally, progress! I am doing a happy dance. I can understand why he doesn't want to tell her, but he needs to or they won't grow closer. This has been my favorite chapter so far.

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that. And you're right, he does need to talk to Bella. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: eliza3ame (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 15

Noooooooooo, I need more, damn Newton. Really cool chapter, please update soon

Author's Response: Thank you, and I will. :)

Reviewer: bellalullabye09 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 10

I need more from Lonerward. Hes an emotional brick wall right now.

Author's Response: More Lonerward soon. :)

Reviewer: adt216 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 15

Great chapter.

I do frequent the forums and would definitely visit if you started a thread.

Author's Response: There is a thread now. :) Glad you liked the chapter, thank you!

Reviewer: edwardinbed (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 13

I like this story a lot and love the way it is written; excellent! I like the possibilities of where this story could go! Keep up the good work. I figured that I would comment since I have been reading since Chapter 1.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for letting me know you're reading and enjoying my story!

Reviewer: bellalullabye09 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 9

I'm  shocked that he offered. Okay, off to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Well, he kinda did it without thinking. :) Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Sandicus (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 15

ahhh no i cant wait for the next chapter,lovin this story thanks

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: francy_princess (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 15

OMG!!! i cant wait 2 c wat happens next!!!

Author's Response: You won't have to wait very long. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: RaeCullen (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 15

Noooooo!! How could you leave it like that?? I hope that Edward punched Newton in the face! 

Just loving this story! Its wonderful. 

Hey let me know if you need someone to start a thread for you. I'd be happy to. =) 


Author's Response: Sorry about the cliffie. ;) Thanks for reviewing, and for starting the thread at the forum. :)

Reviewer: RaeCullen (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 14

Another great chapter. Lonerward is just breaking my heart. I'm very fearful that eventually something will happen to where Bella does hurt Edward.. even if it's unintentional.. maybe after she finds out the truth. The whole "I'm bad" thing just tears me apart inside. 

Great job so far! 

Author's Response: 'Lonerward', I really like that. :) And I'm so happy you liked the chapter. Thank you!

Reviewer: wtm (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 15

love the end even if it was a cliffy!!!!!!


Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: RaeCullen (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 13

I like your use of quotes from the book. I think they fit nicely. 

Wonderful job! 

Lonerward just breaks my heart. 

Author's Response: Thanks, and I'm happy to hear you think they fit. :)

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