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Reviewer: louisianagirl900 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 15
Good chapter...evil cliffie...
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 15
Mike Newton is like a bad penney!!! I hope Bella tells him to go screw himself before Edward beats his ass. On second thought, please don't let Edward get into anymore trouble. LOL..Thanks for the update; it makes my day a lot brighter to see it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, and you're right, Edward deserves a break.
Reviewer: RiaMaria (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 15
Ooooh! Unlucky Mike! your time's up!
Author's Response: And he won't even know what hit him... *lol* Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 15
Awwww, did Edward come to class jsut to see her?!! lol I'm probably wrong, but wouldn't that be jsut adorable!!??!
Can't wait for more!
Sure, a thread sounds great!
ps- I'm so glad you're getting so many reviews...you deserve it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I have a thread now, hope you'll stop by. :) And I'm absolutely shocked by the large amount of reviews I've gotten so far.
Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 14
My comment!!!! lol I will ever understand why this makes me so damn happy, but it does!!! lol
Love the 20 questions thing cause that's always the way I go when things get awkward with people. And with Edward? Perfect.
You are awesome.
Author's Response: *lol* I loved your comment, and I think Edward liked it as well... :P Thank you so much!
Reviewer: bellalullabye09 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 14
Finally, progress! I am doing a happy dance. I can understand why he doesn't want to tell her, but he needs to or they won't grow closer. This has been my favorite chapter so far.
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that. And you're right, he does need to talk to Bella. Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: eliza3ame (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 15
Noooooooooo, I need more, damn Newton. Really cool chapter, please update soon
Author's Response: Thank you, and I will. :)
Reviewer: bellalullabye09 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 10
I need more from Lonerward. Hes an emotional brick wall right now.
Author's Response: More Lonerward soon. :)
Reviewer: adt216 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 15
Great chapter.
I do frequent the forums and would definitely visit if you started a thread.
Author's Response: There is a thread now. :) Glad you liked the chapter, thank you!
Reviewer: edwardinbed (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 13
I like this story a lot and love the way it is written; excellent! I like the possibilities of where this story could go! Keep up the good work. I figured that I would comment since I have been reading since Chapter 1.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for letting me know you're reading and enjoying my story!
Reviewer: bellalullabye09 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 9
I'm shocked that he offered. Okay, off to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Well, he kinda did it without thinking. :) Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Sandicus (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 15
ahhh no i cant wait for the next chapter,lovin this story thanks
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: francy_princess (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 15
OMG!!! i cant wait 2 c wat happens next!!!
Author's Response: You won't have to wait very long. Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: RaeCullen (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 15
Noooooo!! How could you leave it like that?? I hope that Edward punched Newton in the face!
Just loving this story! Its wonderful.
Hey let me know if you need someone to start a thread for you. I'd be happy to. =)
Rae
Author's Response: Sorry about the cliffie. ;) Thanks for reviewing, and for starting the thread at the forum. :)
Reviewer: RaeCullen (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 14
Another great chapter. Lonerward is just breaking my heart. I'm very fearful that eventually something will happen to where Bella does hurt Edward.. even if it's unintentional.. maybe after she finds out the truth. The whole "I'm bad" thing just tears me apart inside.
Great job so far!
Author's Response: 'Lonerward', I really like that. :) And I'm so happy you liked the chapter. Thank you!
Reviewer: wtm (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 15
love the end even if it was a cliffy!!!!!!
wtm
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Reviewer: RaeCullen (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 13
I like your use of quotes from the book. I think they fit nicely.
Wonderful job!
Lonerward just breaks my heart.
Author's Response: Thanks, and I'm happy to hear you think they fit. :)
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 15
mike is a jerk maybe edward will punch him or maybe they can just just bunk off school together cant wait for more excellent stuff
Author's Response: Thank you, I'll post the next chapter soon.
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 14
very nice their getting along
Author's Response: Well it's about time. :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 13
forgot to say before i'm glad bellas injury was just an accident this chapter and lovin the twilight refrences
Author's Response: Thanks! I didn't want to make her too much of a victim. She needs to be strong in this story.
Reviewer: RaeCullen (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 11
Oh man!! I'm so on edge with this. Another great chapter.
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks! :)
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 15
Bit fillerish but love it anyway. Sutpid Mike Newton ;)
Achilles
Author's Response: Stupid Mike indeed. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: RaeCullen (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 10
another great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 12
their fraught with emotion exchanges are quite sweet in there own way
Author's Response: Glad you think so. :)
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 11
that boy is seriously screwed up is bella the one to save him?
Author's Response: Let's hope so.
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