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Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 16
love it
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Mav (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 16
I love that Bella stood up for him - that's hard to do in high school. And it sounds like Emmett isn't a total jerk, after all. Can't wait to see where this goes!
Author's Response: It really is hard, but Bella is a good person, and she can't just stand there and watch. And who knows? Maybe Emmett really is a good person too, although he's hiding it pretty well sometimes. ;) Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: lifesaver918 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 16
I know I don't review often, but I just have to say that I LOVE this story. The dynamic relationship you are building between Bella and Edward is so complex, yet so intrinsically beautiful that I love each and every update you post because they are constantly learning about each other and trusting each other. Looking forward to that next update!! This conversation should be very revealing :o)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for your kind words! I'm so glad to hear you love my story. More soon! :)
Reviewer: lal08 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 16
nooooo, don't stop here!!!! they are in the meadow right, please do update soon.
i love how bella stood up for what she believed right. first how she handled mike and then how she ran after edward were both great.
really looking forward to your update....
Author's Response: Sorry for leaving you hanging, but not for long. Next chap should be up soon. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 16
I loved that Bella stood up to Mike for her and Edward. And then she defended him again! Also, I thought it was great that she went after him. Although, I do think that she is the only one who could. If someone else had it would have been different.
And proud of Edward for taking her with him. I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Author's Response: You're probably right about Bella being the one person able to go after Edward without him freaking out. Thank you very much for your review!
Reviewer: wtm (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 16
great chapter!!! mike really is an asshole!!!!
wtm
Author's Response: He is, isn't he? Ugh! Never liked his character. :) Thank you!
Reviewer: RaeCullen (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 16
I love the way Bella stook up for Edward.. to Mike, the school and to Emmett. She's right, it seems no one ever makes an effort to help him or break down those walls he's built up. It's great that Bella isnt afriad to go against the grain and defy the norm when it comes to Edward. It's wonderful!
Another great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: Ramona89 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 16
oh, Edward is taking her to the meadow!! There's a process...
I have to saythat I couldn't stand Emmett at first. And how he treated Edward. But I think I misjudged him.
And I love how you worked the quotations of the book in your story.
Author's Response: Thank you! And as for Emmett, maybe he cares after all...
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 15
I AM SOOOO HAPPY HE IS FINALLY GETTING THE CHANCE TO PUNCH MIKE'S LIGHTS OUT!!!! HOPE HE DOES. WHAT A CREEP
Author's Response: Mike really is a jerk, isn't he? Let's hope he gets what he deserves... ;) Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 8
I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY
Author's Response: I'm really happy to hear that. Thank you!
Reviewer: laced (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 1
chap 15
i just thought about it and it would be ten times better if bella beat the shit out of mike just in defense of edward
Author's Response: That would be nice. Still, as much as Edward needs someone to stand up for him, he also needs to be able to stand up for himself. At least that's how he feels. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: kayjanna (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 15
I want you to know how much I love your story. I'll be looking forward to updates! I love how Bella is reaching out to Edward. I also love how you have incorporated all the Cullens into the story. I think even Emmett has a soft side to him toward Edward. Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing, I'm really glad you love my story. :)
Reviewer: xNOMx (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 15
Uh oh Mikey boy should learn to shut it once in awhile! Whats Edward gonna do? Great chapter, post more soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I just posted the next chapter, it should be up within the next couple of days. :)
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 15
Very good I loved the chapter and can't wait for Edwards reaction
Author's Response: Thank you very much! There will be EPOV in the next chapter. :)
Reviewer: clancy (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 15
hopefully before Edward hits the slime ball and then gets suspended for it, Bella will say something outstanding to shut up mike and shock Edward : )
Author's Response: You'll find out soon if you're right. :) Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Buniq (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 15
I love this story. it is so well written and my heart goes out to edward trying so hard to let himself trust bella.
can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Aw, it means so much to me to hear that you think my story is well written. Thank you so much! More soon.
Reviewer: AMusefan77 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 15
Ok you raised a lot of questions in this chapter. i'm dying to know who Victoria is and I really want Edward to throttle Mike but I don't want him to get in trouble. I love this story
Author's Response: You'll get the answers eventually. I'm glad you love my story, thank you!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 15
I really like this Bella. I like that she is kind and sarcastic. She is smart and caring. I love what she said to Rose.
I really liked that E/B interaction at the end was so natural and comfortable.
Can't wait to see what is next!
Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear that you like it. Thank you!
Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 15
who is Victoria indeed. If I was Bella, I would butter Jasper up a bit. I think she could crack him :)
And what can be done about Mike Newton?... :)
Author's Response: Maybe she will. *lol* And as for Mike... Hopefully he'll get what he deserves. Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 15
Mike Newton is like turd in the not easy to clean crevices of one's sneakers. It takes a lot to get rid of it all. Ugh!
Whatever difficulty Edward was having about "Victoria" earlier with his father was not enough to keep him away from seeing Bella in Biology. so yeah for that. What an idiot that fool Mike is.
This story has become like a drug for me. I'm already trying to figure out what to do with myself until the next fix! I'll probably be trying to hide my DTs.
Author's Response: *lol* I'll try not to make you wait too long for your next 'fix'. The next chapter should be up in a few days. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 15
No one can cut Edward a break, seriously!?
Author's Response: He sure needs a break, and maybe he'll get one soon. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 15
BEAT DOWN BEAT DOWN BEAT DOWN. LOL
~Shani
Author's Response: That would be good, huh? *lol* Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: saniaast27 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 15
great because i simply love this story. i HAVE A QUESTION WHICH I ASK IN THE LAST REVIEW WAS EDWARD SEXUALLY ASSAULTED BY JAMES AS A KID I DONT GET THAT PART I UNDERSTAND HE HIT HIM BUT THAT ALL......
Author's Response: I'm pretty sure I answered that, but I don't mind doing it again. :) Yes, Edward was sexually abused by James. I prefer not to get into too much detail when it comes to that, instead mostly leaving hints, like in the prologue with the zipper being pulled down. I'm glad you love my story, thank you very much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 15
grrrrrrrrr no i hate that prick but im glad edward came to class for bella :D i hope she just goes with him when he leaves and i really hope bella tells mike off something fierce for that comment i love you i swear you are fueling my addiction and im starting to get over my withdrawl slowly haha :D great chapter :D brilliant doll briliiant
Author's Response: I hope you'll like the next chapter (have a feeling you will ;)) and thank you so much for your review!
Reviewer: Cullenlingus (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 15
Great interaction with the Newton. I am happy to see Emmett concerned and defend Edward. Look forward to Edward's POV.
Author's Response: Well, there might be more to Emmett than it seems. EPOV coming up, thanks for revieiwng!
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