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Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 17

noooo i hate not being omnicent and not knowing what will happen next haha i loved this chapter and that they made such progress is awesome i love that they had that moment together and he took her and this is such an amazing story you are magnificent doll

Author's Response: You won't have to wait long to see what happens next, I promise. *lol* Thank you so much!

Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 17

So Edward did get into trouble. This will definitely complicated the budding friendship between him and Bella. That idiot Mike deserved the bum kicking he received. Bella is so good.

Your banner really is nice. It reflects this story so well!

Author's Response: Mike sure deserved what he got. I'm glad you like the banner, so do I. Viciousvictoria sure is talented. :)

Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 17

I loved how you tied in Twilight's meadow scene with your story. Beautiful!! The subject matter is hard to take, but related very well. Thank you for sharing and updating so quickly.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know much you liked it!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 17

Such huge progress. Edward touched Bella and admitted in his past he was hurt -- is huge!! So proud of both of them.

Author's Response: Yeah, that was a pretty huge step in the right direction.Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: duckyd16 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 17

ARGGGGG!!!!! >.<.... eh i guess its good it ended here. because i gotta go to bed. ......wahh!

Author's Response: *lol* There will be more soon. Thank you for leaving a review!

Reviewer: Kairi J (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 17

Please don't tell me Mike was a little bitch and went to the hospital and met Carlisle and told on Edward! Boo. and way to interupt my Edward/Bella make out that totally happened in the book. Just kidding. Sooner rather than later if you please ;)

Author's Response: I'll post the next chap in a few days. Then you'll find out what happened. Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 17

Great chapter. I love how close Edward and Bella are getting and how Edward is beginning to let his guard down. So sweet and romantic! I wonder what trouble Edward's in. Please update soon.

Author's Response: I will. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: eliza3ame (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 17

WOW, I love the description of the meadow with all the details and the tender moments between Edward and Bella. Love the chapter and the story. Please update soon, oh the new banner is perfect.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! More coming up in a few days. :)

Reviewer: MPattz (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 17

OMFG....I have so may butterflies in my tummy right now....I love your writing...Cant wait till next update!!

Author's Response: Thank you, so happy to hear that you love my writing! :)

Reviewer: clancy (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 17

that was actually really beautiful : ) right up until he took Alice's call.... so is he busted for the mike thing ??
as always looking for the next one !!

Author's Response: You'll find out what trouble he's in soon. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 17

Awesome chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: jacmom (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 17

I wonder why he's in trouble, I can't remember if he did something wrong in a previous chapter. Thanks for the update and I love the progress Edward made in this chapter.

Author's Response: Maybe you should read the last chap again. ;) Thanks for the review, and there will be more soon.

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 17

"I felt like my fingers were being pulled helplessly towards his, like two magnets, until they finally met....This time, there was no jolt of electricity, no burning sensation as Edward’s fingers interlocked with mine, our palms pressed gently together. This time, I felt like I had just found my way home." LOVE THIS!

“I’m in fucking trouble.”......It seems like he can never get a break.

Author's Response: Aw, I always love it when people are quoting my story. *lol* So happy you loved it, thank you!

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 17

Aww!

But they were making progress!?!

Author's Response: Yes, they were. And hopefully there will be more. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 17

ahhhhh what a place to leave it!!!!

Author's Response: I know. *lol* There will be more soon. :)

Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 17

Uh oh. Can't wait for more....

Author's Response: More soon. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: StoryPainter (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 17

Such a horrible cliffie! Meanie :-P

This story just keeps getting more and more interesting. I love that they got to hold hands! Such a sweet afternoon to share and he's finally feeling a little more comfortable around Bella. Yay!

Thanks!

~SP :-)

Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked it, thank you! And sorry 'bout the cliffie. :)

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 17

oh poor edward he shouldn't be in trouble

Author's Response: No, you'd think he's had enough trouble to last a life time. Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: RaeCullen (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 17

Aw man! You leave us with the worst cliffies!!

Great chapter! They are making slow but sure progress. I can't wait to find out what happened. I'm sure it relates back to Mike some how.

Thanks for the quick update! I think the review of your story is gonna go up tomorrow but I'm not 100% sure. I'll email you and let you know! :)

Author's Response: I loved the review you wrote, it was great! And thank you so much for reviewing here as well! :)

Reviewer: ans816 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 17

I love how Edward started to open up to Bella. I can't wait until he finally opens up to her.

Author's Response: I have a feeling it's just a matter of time... Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Sandicus (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 17

thanks for this, i cant wait for the next chapter. I'm always checking for updates and get soo excited to continue the story but i wish they were longer.

Author's Response: I feel kinda bad for not being able to make the chapters longer when so many people have asked me to. Still, I'm really glad because I know it means you want more of my story. :) Thank you very much for reviewing!

Reviewer: steffyxxface (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 1

ugh I can't wait for edward to open up more to bella and tell her, and I cant wait for her reaction. Also pllllllllllleeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssse make these chapters longer :]

Author's Response: I've said I'll try to write longer chapters, but so far the muse won't let me, so we'll see. I'll keep updating as soon as I can though. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: lovesam66 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 17

*happy dance* the first part was awesome they are slowly but surely getting closer:))) but I wonder what could have to cause Edward to get it trouble. Well I guess I'll just have to wait till the next update.

Author's Response: You'll find out soon. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: parker137 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 16

Thank you for your reply to my last review. I'm now caught up on your story and love the depth of emotion in the characters. I really love the plot and the way you've handled the themes sensitively. Good job and great writing! Thank you!

Author's Response: You're welcome, and thank you, for your kind review. There will be another chapter up soon.

Reviewer: My-Girl96 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 16

Can't wait for your next update! :)

Author's Response: It's finished and should be up soon. Thanks for reviewing! :)

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