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Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 17
oh, what did Alice tell him? Please, don't leave us with a cliffie too long. Bella's heart might not stand it :)
Author's Response: I'll update in a few days. Thank you for reviewing! :)
Reviewer: francy_princess (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 17
cant wait 4 tha next update!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll post again soon. :)
Reviewer: Bronze_620 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 17
RaeCullen recommended this to me right before she wrote the raving review for it on SYTYCW, and she was right. I love it. Once I started reading it, I couldn't put it down. Like I told her, I was ridiculously upset to see I'd reached the end at seventeen chapters. Can't wait for more!
This Edward breaks my heart. And the cliffie at the end has me insanely curious. Looking forward to the next update. :)
-Bronze
Author's Response: I absolutely loved the review she wrote, and I'm so flattered and grateful. Actually, I'm amazed that my story has gotten such a wonderful response. Thank you so much for reading, and I'm so glad you like it. More coming soon, and look for the teaser that will be up at the forum some time tomorrow. :)
Reviewer: smartasssbich (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 17
Damn I love this story...He let her hold his hand. YAY! Not too much but just enough to know he's not a total lost cause. Love it!
Author's Response: Big YAY indeed. :) Thank you!
Reviewer: Kat-ryn (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 17
Uh-oh!!! Do they think he kidnapped Bella..ahhhhhhhhh She's gonna have to really stick up for him now huh? Hurry and post.....I can't stand it!
Author's Response: I'll post as soon as I can. And a teaser will be up at the forum tomorrow. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Sixasee (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 17
Thanks for the update! Loved it like always
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: viltsuuh (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 17
You're evil! But I love this story.
Author's Response: Good! :) Thank you! (and I know I'm evil) *lol*
Reviewer: laced (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 17
i bet its mikes fault
Author's Response: Well, that wouldn't be surprising, would it? You'll find out soon if you're right. :)
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 17
Why?
Author's Response: Why is he in trouble? You'll see.
Reviewer: zoe3 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 17
Wow! I just found this story and read all the way through. It's captivated me! It's such a difficult topic and you've written this story with great sensitivity and grace. Hope that makes sense. Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Yay, a new reader! :) Thank you so much for letting me know you like it so fart. More coming soon.
Reviewer: loyalluv (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 17
They held hands and Edward didn't completely shut himself out! That means improvement. This chapter made my day, but I'm sad that the phone call ruined their moment. Oh well I'm excited for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm really happy you liked it, thanks! :)
Reviewer: Spike82 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 17
O God what's going to happen now???
Cruel girl... yes, really cruel.
Love this chapter. We can almost touch Bella's feeling and Edward's fear.
More???
Author's Response: Absolutely, I'll post another chap soon. Thank you!
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 17
A little progress - I love the way you have written Bella, the perfect amount of push and assistance here, nicely done :)
Achilles
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 17
Yay for Bella making a little headway with him - getting Edward just to trust her a little. :)
Author's Response: Trust is good. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: RiaMaria (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 17
Oh I hope it's not too much trouble, he's making progress!
But then, he's probably got it coming for what he did to Mike I suppose...
Author's Response: Maybe. Thank you very much for your review!
Reviewer: Bliss1986 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh no I want to know what happens!
Loved this chapter. Felt the emotion from behind my pc.
Keep on writing, because you are great!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you loved it. More coming soon.
Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 17
gah! no! don't leave me hanging! ...god, im so in love with this story. it's such a hard subject to tackle and i think you've done so fabulously.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And I promise I won't leave you hanging too long. :)
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 17
it's all progress in the right direction i'm sure holding hands for him is a major big deal as is sharing the meadow, bella seems to have good instincts when it comes to assessing his mood as in laying off when needed and not going for pity but understanding, edward is in trouble i suspect about the fight i bet bella tries to stick up for him and defend him in some way, a great chapter lovin this story
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so glad you love it!
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 17
double triple grounded
Author's Response: We'll just have to wait and see...
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 17
it's so sad that he's locked up inside himself. I see the transition though. Bella is slowly bringing him out of his shell. that's good. Edward is even more tolerant of his siblings now.
Author's Response: Bella is just what he needs, isn't she? Thanks for your review! :)
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 17
Slowly making process...I like it.
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks. :)
Reviewer: lal08 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 17
Again another evil cliffie, you should really stop doing that:) Edward is like that deer, isn't he, very very vulnerable and scared... I loved the whole meadow scene. Edward is opening up to Bella very slowly, but I think Bella's patience will truly be tested...
Author's Response: You're the first person who has actually made the parallel between Edward and the deer, which was my intention all along. I'm very pleased! :) Thank you very much for the review!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 17
What the hell? That tool Mike better not have started crying like a baby. I hope Bella is there so that way she can set the record straight.
Sigh...I love how Edward is slowly coming to trust Bella, to let go for even just a little bit. This was fantastic!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it, thanks for letting me know! :)
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 17
Good chapter the opening up is going well, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks! There will be another chapter up soon. :)
Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 17
Oh! I have never been as excited over hand holding as I am right now.
And is it that jackhole Mike Newton that has said something untrue to get Edward into trouble? That little ratfucker. I hope he gets his.
Lovely update, cannot wait for the next and EPOV of the hand holding!
Author's Response: So glad you like the update, thank you! EPOV coming right up... ;)
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