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Reviewer: dena82484 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 19

OMG, I flippin LOVE this story, I literally did a little girl squeal when i realized that it updated. Had a bad day and it made my day to see an update!!



Author's Response: I'm so glad my update made your day better. :) Thank you!

Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 19

wow. He's making some progress.. Can't wait!



Author's Response: More soon, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 19

aww that's lovely x



Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 19

*giddy*

YAY!!!

What progress!! Ohhh I am SO excited!

*does happy dance*

 



Author's Response: Glad you liked! *lol* Thank you!

Reviewer: TammyDevil666 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 19

You don't need me to tell you about how evil it is to leave a cliffhanger.  I think you know that all too well...lol!  I like the progress in this chapter, that was a sweet moment between them.  I wonder what Carlisle will have to say about it.  He's probably too busy being shocked.  If Edward knows that Bella has no intention of leaving, maybe that will make it easier for him to tell her the truth.  Can't wait for more=)



Author's Response: *lol* Hey you, I've missed you! Thanks for sticking with my story and for reviewing!

Reviewer: missielynn (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 19

i can't tell you what reading this story does to me. iv'e been "edward" and i found my "bella" and he's done so much to make my life not hurt anymore.



Author's Response: I'm sorry. I don't know you, but I'm really glad to hear that things are better for you. It means a lot to me that you chose to read my story. Thank you!

Reviewer: smithle1 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 19

ARG! I hate when you stop at the best parts. I love this story so much because you make Edward's pain so real. I might have to quit reading for a while so I don't have to withstand your awful cliffies. LOL. Keep up the good work.



Author's Response: I promise, not every chapter will end with a cliffie. *lol* Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 18

Ok that went VERY well. I am glad it wasnt really bad. I feel so bad for Edward. I hope Bella does help him out of his slump. Well now I am all caught up and I am sad because I want...no NEED more. I guess I just have to wait for the next update. Did I mention this story is AMAZING????



Author's Response: I think you did mention that, but I don't mind hearing it again. *lol* Thank you so much for all your kind reviews. The next chapter is posted and should be up soon. You can always check out the teaser I posted in the story thread at the forum. :)

Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 17

I cant leave a long message cuz I have to see why the hell is Edward in trouble. I bet it was that bastard Mike!!!! ARGHH They were actually getting somewhere. this chapter was AMAZING!!!! I wish the rating went past 10!



Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much!

Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 16

I think that will mean a lot if Bells shows Edward that is completely trust him. Who the hell is Victoria??? Mike so deserved what he got. I also want to know if Emmett does not like Edward why did he stick up for him to Rose???



Author's Response: You'll get the answers eventually. ;)

Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 15

I want him to hit Mike...but I would rather Bella put him in his place letting him know that Edward is WAYYYYY better than he would ever be!!! Gosh mike is a JERK by the way I noticed how he did not go to any of his classes except Bio....to see Bella. I LOVE IT!!!!



Author's Response: I never liked Mike. :) I'm happy you loved it, thanks!

Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 14

It was very funny and it made Edward smile so good job kerrybell. I hope Edward does let Bella in, but gosh do I hope she does not hurt him in the process. He will not be able to handle it!



Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was funny, so did I. :)

Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 13

I wonder what ws going through Edward head when she gave him the towel. Boy am I glad he did not leave



Author's Response: You'll find out in the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 12

Oh how I absolutely love Bella and Edward interactions. The beginning is always the best because they are just realizing how much they love and need wach other. Its so innocent and sweet. I love it!!



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 11

This was not a good chapter for poor Edward. But I am hoping he will leave to go see Bella now. I am such an optimist, lol. Although I did notice that he does want help he just does not think he can get any halp. He wants her to try. Edward wants the help you just have to be patient with him. I think the only person who understands that is Bella.



Author's Response: I think you're probably right. ;)

Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 10

I like that Bella is bold in this story. Taking control and Edward, poor Edward does not know what to do with Bella. It is sort of cute. I hope he comes by to visit her later or at least calls her or something. I am going to read on to find out



Author's Response: I always like bold Bella as well. :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 9

I dont like the way Emmett and Rose treats Edward they are assholes and they need to just back the hell off. I know he is a jerk but shit just leave him the hell alone and thats all!!! I knew she was going to accept the ride from Edward. Carlisle noticed when Edward said he caught Bella before she hit her head. He does not mind touching her which is not normal for Edward. I am loving this so much!!!



Author's Response: Yay, I'm so glad to hear that! :)

Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 8

First I am glad to have finally found this story on Twilighted because I started it on fanfic and a friend tole me it was up here and I am very excited to be able to read more of the story. I stay up late every night to get the update on fanfic, lol. This chapter was a relief compared to last chapter. I was in tears so now that I know Bella was not abused I am very happy although I am very sad that Edward was abused as a child. I am glad Edward is letting Bella in and wants to get closer to her. I am excited about the development of their friendship...maybe romantic relationship in the future???? I love this story. It is hard to read because of the content but it is AMAZING and I LOVE it



Author's Response: I'm so glad you love my story, thank you!

Reviewer: francy_princess (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 18

cant wait 4 tha next chapter!!!



Author's Response: It's finished and posted, hopefully it should be up soon. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Cullenlingus (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 18

I love Carlisle.  I can't wait to hear what Alice and Bella talked about.  Will she tell Alice how she really feels?  Can't wait.  Thank you for writing.



Author's Response: You're welcome. And thank you so much for your review1

Reviewer: SleepMyBella (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 18

I just discovered your story and I absolutely love it!  I can't wait to read more!!!



Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really glad to hear that you love my story!

Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 18

The story just keeps getting better. I feel so awful for poor Edward, how he feels torn about his love for the Cullens and doesn't want to love them because he doesn't feel he deserves their love. It's heartbreaking, really. But it's refreshing how Bella is slowly showing him he is worthy. She's so sweet and genuine to him, something he desperately needs.



Author's Response: Yeah, she's probably exactly what he needs. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: jacmom (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 18

Figured out why he was in trouble, duh, my mind must not be working. Thank you for updating!!!

Author's Response: Good. :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: deya (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

hi i'm from germany and i love your story :)



Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that, thank you! :)

Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 18

Wow!  Edward really did have a hard life before Carlisle and Esme.



Author's Response: He really did. Hopefully his life is about to change for the better. Thanks for reviewing!

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