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Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 19
I'm glad that Edward is starting to trust Bella. He needs someone other than his family to talk to. =)
Excellent work on this chapter and this story! I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Author's Response: You won't have to wait too long to find out. :) Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: littlevamplady (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 19
im absolutly obsess with this story,i check everyday to see if theres a new update even if i just read the last update that morning hehe..im just alittle worry on how Bella is gona react when she knows the truth i really hope she will really stick by him and not hurt him its too depressing to think that she might let him down but then again a good story needs some drama..keep up with the great work you are doing,oh yea i wish you would make the chapters longer hehee like i said im obsessed.
Patricia
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review, I'm really glad that you like my story! :)
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 19
great chapter...love the progress theyre making towards each other....please continue
Author's Response: I will, thank you so much!
Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 19
This was such a lovely, lovely chapter. I'm so glad to see the glimmers of Edward trusting her. I'm am going to get over to your board for this story tomorrow to discuss....this story is sucking me in!
Author's Response: I'll look forward to see you over there. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Reviewer: steffyxxface (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 19
omg you made my day way better cant wait for the next chapter make them longer please there not long enough and I wanna throw my computer sometimes I got all excited I thought I read chapter 18 by mistake and had one more to read today and then I refreshed and realized I dident have a knew one gahhhhh
Author's Response: Aw, that had to suck. *lol* Sorry you feel the chaps are too short, but I'll try to make up for it by updating often. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Ibblet (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 19
AHHHHHHHHHHH! ok this story is just too freakin awesome!!!!1
there are not many stories that i wait for and read as soon as i see i have a email telling me the next chapter is up.
Most times with stoires i loose intrest whille waiting for an update, but, not this one! it just keeps getting better..
CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!
Author's Response: Wow, I'm so happy you enjoy my story so much. Thank you! And another chap will be up soon. :)
Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 19
love it! more please!
Author's Response: Absolutely, and thanks! :)
Reviewer: wishfulthinking (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 19
Fantastic chapter. I love your writing. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you, more soon! :)
Reviewer: amom2my3kids (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 19
poor edward, i love this story
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 19
LOVE THIS: “If you take my hand...” My voice cracked, and I started over, “If you take my hand, I promise not to let go.”
This exchange is perfect: “Look, Edward, whatever it is you’re hiding, whatever you’re so afraid of, it won’t make any difference to me. I’ll still be here, no matter what."....“Promise?” ...“I promise,” I breathed, giving his hand a soft squeeze. “You’re stuck with me now.”
Edward jumped slightly next to me, clearly just as surprised as I was. ...
However, he didn’t let go of my hand...This makes me smile
I sincerely hope that carlisle doesn't give them a hard time...He should be happy Bella is there.....
Author's Response: I actually cried when I wrote that part, and that's the first time ever I've cried over my own story. :) So glad you liked it. Thank you!
Reviewer: MJ Mason-Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 19
oh please let carlisle be happy i am more more please please :)
Author's Response: You'll find out what C thinks soon. ;) Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: On Wings of Lead (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 19
So I was trying to come up with some thought-provoking revelation of a review in response to this story and the best I can come up with is...I love it. I love this Edward and I just want to scoop him up and hug him (though he'd probably punch me ala-Mike Newton for doing so :P) And I love the fact you update regularly, otherwise I'd be pulling my hair out constantly. Ugh, okay, craptastic review over :)
Author's Response: Sadly, that would probably be the reaction from E at this point, yeah. :) Thank you so much for letting me know you love my story. I'll do my best to keep the chappies coming. :)
Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 19
awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Reviewer: jacmom (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 19
Thanks for the update! This is a great story!!!
Author's Response: I'm really glad you think so, thank you!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 19
No more cliffhangers lol. I can't get enough of this story. It's so well written and i love your version of Edward and Bella. This story is really progressing. Hopefully the next chapter will be posted soon...please!
Author's Response: The next chap is almost finished and I plan to post it tomorrow. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Ailisraevyn (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 19
So sweet, and simple, what a single word can mean when uttered at the right time, from the right person, with the right intent. 'Promise.' A word that can build bonds stronger than heavens gate, or shatter a heart easier than death.
Beauitful Chapter. I'm happy to see that Alice is aware of Edward changing, now if only Carlisle and Esme could have faith like their daughter.
<3 ~Nae
Author's Response: Let's hope Carlisle will be understanding then. I'm so glad you thought it was sweet, thank you very much for your review!
Reviewer: AMusefan77 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 19
That was awesome! So sweet! And they made so much progress. I nearly cried when she told him that she wasn't going anywhere no matter what his secret is. I kept thinking about this Sarah McLaughlan song called Answer while I was reading.
Carlisle catching them holding hands was kind of awkward but given Edward's typical phobia about being touched I would hope he'd be happy about their little display of affection. Anyway I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing, I'm so glad you liked it. There will be more soon.
Reviewer: lovesam66 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 19
Wonderful!!! They are geting closer and I'm doing happy dances! Can't wait for more!!!!!
Author's Response: They are. More coming soon. Thanks for the review! :)
Reviewer: eliza3ame (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 19
WOW, this chapter is my favorite, its so lovely. Do you listen to music when u write? I was listening to Gravity by Sara Bareilles when I read this chapter. I can't wait to read more, so pretty please update soon
Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter, thank you. Actually, I don't listen to music while writing, I'm one of those weird people who find that too distracting. *lol* I'll hopefully be able to post the next chapter tomorrow.
Reviewer: Sandicus (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 19
Im lovving this chapter (no surprise) cruel ending on such a cliffy cant wait for next update thanks x
Author's Response: Thank you so much and sorry about the cliffie. :)
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 19
I would think Carlisle would be happy that Edward is willing to touch someone. I hope he is. Update soon!
Author's Response: You'll find out about Carlisle's reaction in the next chap. Which will be up in a few days. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 19
Wonderful chapter, cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you, more asap. :)
Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 19
I am so in love with your story. My heart both leaped and broke when he spoke "promise". Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: You're most welcome. And thank you so much for the review! :)
Reviewer: calemzoe (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 19
Sweet chapter...glad to see they are one step forward instead of two steps back. How long will it last.... Update soon!
Author's Response: I will. Glad you liked the chapter, thank you!
Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 19
teay Carlisle he's healing, don't get in the way!!!!!!
Author's Response: Talk about bad timing, huh? ;) Thanks for your review!
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