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Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 20
I feel like I say the same thing each chapter. I am so proud of Bella for being so strong for Edward. She continues to trust her instincts and they are always right.
I loved what she said to Carlisle. It was perfect.
And Edward is changing so much - especially with his thinking about Bella.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! Another chap will be up soon.
Reviewer: 09kez (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 20
love that Emmett is starting to be on Edwards side. Love that your Bella isn't a meek mouse, and is mature enough to understand as much as she does. Cheers
Author's Response: Double post, thanks again. :)
Reviewer: 09kez (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 20
love that Emmett is starting to be on Edwards side. Love that your Bella isn't a meek mouse, and is mature enough to understand as much as she does. Cheers
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so happy you enjoyed. :)
Reviewer: Spike82 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 20
Love this chapter. Carlisle's fear for his son's feelings and tust in Bella... and maybe, but just maybe, Emmet is not so bad in the end.
Author's Response: Maybe. ;) Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you loved the chap!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 20
Slowly but surely becoming addicted to this story! Can't wait until the next update.
Author's Response: Happy to hear that. :) More coming soon.
Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 20
have I told you how much I love this story???
really...
Author's Response: I think so, but I don't mind hearing it again. *lol* Thank you so much!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 20
I'm so happy about the way things went with Carlisle.
Author's Response: Glad you liked. :) Thank you!
Reviewer: mforrest28 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 20
I am loving this fic - it's really fascinating! Thanks for the frequent updates recently!!!
Author's Response: You're welcome, and thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 20
Awesome...so, is Edwards anger toward Emmett maybe just a tab bit because he's a big, strong guy and Edward has a bit of fear for him, and it manifests as anger? Just wondering. Well, good for Bella standing up for Edward. He's got a woman totally devoted to him and he doesn't even know it. Thanks for the update; been waiting patiently. LOl
Author's Response: I promise not to keep you waiting too long for the next update. :) Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 20
Good chapter -it was nice to see Bella standing up to Carlisle.
I like hearing Edward's POV regarding the trust issue with Bella, but I would love to know more about the relationship between Ed and Emmett.
Looking forward to the next installment!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed the chap!
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 20
another fab chapter, carlisle was kinda pleased but also worried and i understand why if he trusts bella and she lets him down carlisle probably thinks that would finish edward, deward also stared in bewilderment after emmett does that mean he was regretting his words? is bella beginning to make edward question lots of things about the way he is? cant wait for more thanks
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! And you'll get some answers to your questions eventually. :)
Reviewer: StoryPainter (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 20
Bella is just confusing the heck out of everyone here. I'm glad she didn't really give Carlisle the opportunity to tell her Edward's story and even said she was willing to wait until Edward was comfortable telling her himself. Edward would probably hate it if someone else told her.
I'm all excited that he is excited about going to school just to see Bella but I'm worried about what the rumor mill will come up with and how that will effect both Edward and Bella.
This story just keeps getting more interesting and I really appreciate you taking the time to share it.
Thanks!
~SP
Author's Response: Thank you very much! And you're right, it's not Carlisle's story to tell.
Reviewer: Kairi J (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 20
cheers for team edward!
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 20
Poor Edward ... he feels that the whole world is against him. I think it's good that he is taking the risk and allowing himself to care what Bella thinks, allowing her in.
Would have liked more interaction between Carlisle and Bella, but I guess it would have been odd ... still I would love to hear Carlisle's thoughts.
Author's Response: I'm still considering doing an outtake from CPOV, although I haven't decided for sure. We'll see. :)
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 20
This conversation with Carlisle went much better than I thought it would. I'm very concerned about what Emmett said. I wonder just how this will impact Bella at school. I hadn't even thought about this.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! You'll find out more about that soon, ;)
Reviewer: lal08 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 20
Em's final comments were what I exactly what I tried to explain in my previous review. Edward never gives a break to anyone in his family and they are trying. That is why aside from Bella, I hope he will also improve his relations with Em, Alice, Carlisle and Esme by the end of this story.
Author's Response: Hopefully he will. But he still has a long way to go to get there. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 20
*Happy snoopy dance* Seriously I just love this story!!! I can't help but smile as Bella handles all the males around her like a pro without her knowing it. I can't wait to see what tomorrow brings for both of them. I will anxiously await the next update...
Author's Response: Aw, thank you, I'm so happy you love my story! :)
Reviewer: UrbanAngel (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 20
ah so now edward is the bad guy again and emmett is just such an ass cause edward is not opening up to him...thanks em, give the guy another thing to blame himself about, not that he does that anyway...don't know if i'm a total bitch here but em is to me a hypocrite - it's not like he isn't a total ass everytime he talks to edward.
Author's Response: Lots of different opinions about Em at the moment. Is he really a jerk, or just misunderstood? Keep reading and you'll find out. :) Thanks so much for your review!
Reviewer: laced (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 20
oh em's trying to be nice i feel all warm inside i loved this chap keep em coming
Author's Response: I will, thank you so much for your review!
Reviewer: ghartling (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 20
i love Carlise!!!! You are gonna be good for all of us!!!!
G
Author's Response: Glad you liked. Thanks! :)
Reviewer: AMusefan77 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 20
Wonderful chapter. I was really pleased with Carlisle's reaction. I was actually afraid that he would be more difficult than that. But Emmett's comments about Bella and what was going to happen with the gossip at school pissed me off. He may not mean any harm, but I think Edward will be more anxious about it now. I can understand the last stament he made, though. Hopefully they will clear the air and eventually bond. I think Emmett wants to have a relationship with Edward but he doesn't know how and they completely misunderstand each other.
Author's Response: You may be on to something. Let's see if you're right. ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 20
Awesome chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: lovesam66 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 20
Loved it!! Can't wait for more!! Seriously u r an amazing writer!!!!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you very much! *blush*
Reviewer: RiaMaria (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 20
Poor Carlisle, and Emmett! They most both be so upset that Edward's opening up, but not to them!
Author's Response: You're probably not wrong about that. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: deya (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 1
I have been so happy to see the update and i like that Edward agreed to give his phone number to Bella :). Sorry my english is not perfect.
And again i can't wait for the next chapter,hehe :)
Author's Response: I think your english is just fine. :) Thank you so much for the review, I'm really happy you liked the update.
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