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Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 21
Oh poor Edward and his self-doubt! I hope he continues to trust Bella. Can't wait for the next chapter of them eating lunch together.
Author's Response: Thank you, you won't have to wait very long.
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 21
God, am I glad you didnt decide to end your story after a few chapters; as you can see by your reader response, your story is the bomb.Its amazing how you take a subject so serious and make it bearable to read about, while still getting across the true feelings os pain behind it.I can actually feel Edwards trepedation about trusting Bella now but being afraid to. He can't see yet how being popular at Forks High means nothing to her, but that he doles. Im not expecting miracles here; I realize there will probably be alot of angst and misunderstandings before the HEA, but I do hope Bella can convince him of her growing love. The fact he is even holding her hand is monumental. Nilla, you have no idea how bummed I get when Im reading, reading, and then all of a sudden I see the word previous. LOL...I hate when the chapter ends, but hold out hope youll update soon. LOL. Happy Valentines Day to you
Author's Response: *lol* I hate the word 'previous' too when I read an update. Thank you so much for your kind review, and Happy valentines day to you too, a few days late. :)
Reviewer: ans816 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 21
I'm so anxious to find out where and what Bella has planned for Edward. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: You'll find out soon. I'll post the next chap tomorrow. Thank you!
Reviewer: katt flynn (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 21
So glad to see Edward and Bella progressing. They need to have some uninterupted alone time. Also can't believe it, this chapter didn't make me want to cry! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Can't make you cry all the time, can I? *lol* Thanks for your review! More coming soon.
Reviewer: gbasjw (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 21
I am so glad you are getting positive reviews on this story & that you are sticking with it. Your writing is fantastic and has made me fall in love with these characters - regardless of the dark subject matter. Another beautiful chapter,
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: RaeCullen (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 21
OMG I love love love Bella. She is so sweet for figuring out that he doesnt like going in the cafeteria. Lonerward make my heart hurt. I just want to cuddle him and make him cookie.
Another beautiful chapter! Thank you so much for the quick updates!
Rae
Author's Response: You're welcome! And thank you! :)
Reviewer: lovesam66 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 21
*squeal* they are getting closer ans closer!! Bella is so atuned to Edwards worries, I can't wait until they are finally together together. But inget a distinct feeling that things are going to get worse before better. I just hope that they realize that they are meant to be together in the end.
Author's Response: I'm sure they will. ;) Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: bluehotel (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 21
Ugh! I am completely hooked on this story!!
My only complaint is that the chapters are soo short! To quote UrbanAngel, below,
'more, more, more!'
Author's Response: Thank you, more coming soon!
Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 21
Awesome chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: UrbanAngel (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 21
you really need to write MORE!!!! i'm dying here (okay i exagerated a bit)...anyway: more, more, more
Author's Response: I'm writing as fast as I can! *lol* Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 20
To answer Emmett, I might. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: angel27eyes (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 3
he was about to go defend her!!! but my girl didn't need it!
Author's Response: Bella sure can take care of herself. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: angel27eyes (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
poor edward!!!!!
Author's Response: Poor Edward indeed. Things might get better soon, though.
Reviewer: princessbjuti (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 20
Oh, how I love your story <3
It's so good. Even though it makes me sad, A LOT.
But you write so good :)
When will you update next? :)
~ Love, C
(www.twitter.com/CarinaOlsen)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I've posted the next chapter and it'll be up as soon as it's been through validation. :)
Reviewer: xNOMx (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 20
More Epov! Cant wait for next chapter :)
Author's Response: Your wish is my command - more epov coming right up. :) Thank you!
Reviewer: NICOL3 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 20
Oh pleaase add moree chapters need to reaad more pleeeeaaaaaseee love this story
Author's Response: The next chapter is posted and should be up soon. Thanks for your review! :)
Reviewer: laylaywo (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 20
Okay, I never review this much! This storry is such a thoughtful switch, changing Edwards beast from vampire to the other. And Bella's lack of fear to put herself in a physically dangerous situation to an emotionally dangerous situation! Really genius. Please keep writting as quickly as you have been! I'm impatient and am loving this story! Please let me know if you need any beta help or plot line ideas! Thanks!
Author's Response: It's so kind of you to offer your help, I really appreciate it and I'll be happy to take you up on it if I need to. Thank you! Also, I'm so happy you're enjoying my story so much! Hopefully you'll like what's to come as well. Thanks again!
Reviewer: jacmom (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 20
Thanks for another awesome update!
Author's Response: You're welcome, and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 20
Wow!! This story is one of the best I have ever read on here!! I am completely addicted to it and I just started reading it today. I love Edward and Bellas interaction. Gosh It breaks my heart so much for Edward, its horrible but i love Bella not giving up. Only digging deeper trying to help edward. I cant wait for the next update! Seriously you are an amazing writer!
Author's Response: Aww, you have no idea how much your words mean to me. I only hope my story will keep living up to your expectations. Thank you so much!
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 20
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, what a great story, and good updating! Its really unique and intricate...and well handled, I think. It strikes a good balance as sensitive to trama while still having a plot where things happen more than once every couple chapters :)
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, and I'll do my best. :)
Reviewer: Sandicus (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 20
thanks for the update! poor Emmett he is trying, cant wit for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, another chap will be up as soon as it's validated.
Reviewer: Catrin_Whitlock (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 20
You know I normaly hate Bella/Edward stories, I'm just not an Edward fan. But I've read this story I think from since you posted chapter 5 and this is my frist review, but I look forward to waking up and seeing if you've updated, I truely love this story.
Author's Response: Wow! Considering you're usually not into Bella/Edward, this is a huge, HUGE compliment. Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: parker137 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 20
Wow, Twilighted added a white back ground! I like your Carlisle in the way that his concerns seem valid. So often Carlisle is portrayed as having all the answers and that can't actually be realistic all the time. Again, really great! Thank you!
Author's Response: I agree. In my story though, Carlisle is not a vampire with centuries-old experience and knowledge, only human. *lol* So happy you liked it and thank you for the review! :)
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 20
I hope Edward goes back to his 'relaxed' state with Bella when he sees her again. Would be sad to see him retreat back into himself just because Carlisle caught them holding hands and felt momentarily hurt and really taken aback that Edward would let anyone touch him. :(
Author's Response: You're right, that would be bad. You'll find out soon enough, though. Thanks for your review!
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