how sweet! I love it

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Powerful story, really!!  I get goosebumps with every chapter.  The feelings you draw out in Edward's character, it's like I am feeling them.  Truly wonderful.  And, although the story covers a very difficult topic, it's one of my favorites.  Thanks for writing.  I am certain it will help some people who may stumble across it heal from their pasts.

Author's Response: I really hope so. Thank you!

Amazing chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks!

ohhhhh....finally Edward is beginning to let her in....cant wait to read the next update

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! More coming soon.

he breaks my heart! I just want to love him and make all his pain go away!!! but bella is working on that for me!

Author's Response: She sure is. :) Thanks for reviewing!

Poor boy.  Well done on the sensitive writing - Bella is just superb, so understanding, kind and sweet.

Thank you

Achilles x

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!

YAYY! Edward's letting her in, such a big step in not only holding Bella's hand but letting her touch his face. I could almost picture him leaning into her touch :)

Author's Response: A big step indeed. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)

so i wasn't planning on reading this, just due to the theme but i really enjoyed it. i'm not familiar with the whole psychological problems that Edward is facing and as such, it is a bit tedious dealing with his angst.  i understand that it's part of his character makeup, so i have to remind myself of this.

while i do enjoy the different POVs, it is sometimes redundant/repetitive to read the situation twice.  just a thought.

BUT I LOVE THIS STORY, it's really well written.  please update soon. :)

Author's Response: I can see your point, but sometimes I feel it's absolutely necessary for the story to show both Bella's and Edward's pov. It won't happen all the time, but there will be more repeated scenes throughout the story. Thank you very much for giving this story a chance though, and I'm really glad you love it. There will be more soon. :)

I wonder what happened in Bella's past.  Maybe they have more in common than they know.

Author's Response: You'll find out more soon. :)

Rae_Cullen gave me the link to this story.  I can't wait to see what happens.

Author's Response: Aw, Rae's just wonderful, rec'ing my story. :) I really hope you'll like it. Thanks for reviewing!

Hey Nilla do u recognize me? I'm Alexa from FanFic! Oh yeah I found ur story here, I've never have worked so hard to figure out a page, cause let me tell u this is kind of complicated for me u have to register for forum and for stories differently, ugh so much stuff, and I'm sneaking cause my hubby is here and he hateesssss twilight related stuff......

Anyways I was able to read the chapter 22 ahhhhhhh!!!!!!!! So cool, but at the same time I was a little bit disapointed cause it didn't happen much after chapter 21, only Bella's POV, I mean I like her a lot but I would've liked more things too happen! I recomend (again) making the chapters longerrr....please!!!!

I love it nevertheless, ur amazing u knwo that don't u?

I think things r looking up I mean, I'm not surprise at all about everybody staring, of course they would, I'm glad Emmett is finally stepping up! I'm glad Alice help instead of being in the way for ONCE!!!! I'm glad this Bella has a brainnnnnn!!!! All in all so happy!!!

But I'm upset too cause I know tomorrow when I go to sleep I won't be refreshing my page time after time cause ur story wont be updated as you say after chapter 22 u will post like just twice a weekkkkk..... oh no!!! what am I gonna do? please do tell me! If u can recomend me a story or something it would be awsome cause most of the ones I had started I've just drop cause they suckkkkkk!! I hate all those Bellas, they are just too easyyyyy..... too annoying!!

Anyways can't wait for next chapter.....

PS.- Have a nice weekend!

 

Author's Response: Hi Alexa, it's good to see you on this site as well. I'm glad you managed to figure it out. :) Can't promise you longer chapters, (maybe once in a while though) but I will keep the updates coming as often as I can until the story is complete. (which I don't see happening anytime soon) Don't know what story to recommend, there are just so many. :) But I'll try to post the next chapter tomorrow, although it takes a day or two to get validated on this site. Thank you soo much for all your lovely reviews and continued support, and I hope you'll have a really great weekend as well!

Yeeees!

Progresssss!

Author's Response: Indeed. Thanks for the review!