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Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 21
Wow! Alice is not really the best person to be with when someone is dealing sexual abuse. We just did something for our school about violence against women (mostly sexual kind). The statistics are staggering. I'm so glad you're doing this. More people should address this issue.
Author's Response: I'm doing my best. Thank you!
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 12
I don't really like rereading the same thing in a different POV. It's repetitive.
Author's Response: That may be so, but it's important for the story that you see some things from both pov.
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 11
EPOV is more interesting for me to read than BPOV. I guess I just crave the Darkward. He is my favorite.
Author's Response: Mine too, actually. I prefer to write EPOV.
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 10
I didn't really like all of the same lines as in the book, it felt a bit like deja vu. I like reading it anyways, though.
Author's Response: Okay.
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 9
The rest of the Cullen's must be completely confused by Edward.
Author's Response: You'll find out more about the rest of the Cullen's feelings toward Edward throughout the story.
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 8
Gotta love Carlisle. Will he mention to Edward anything about Bella?
Author's Response: I don't know. Or... I do know, but I won't tell you here. *lol*
Reviewer: francy_princess (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 23
cant wait 4 tha next chapter!!!
Author's Response: You shouldn't have to wait very long. Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 7
Lovely chapter...
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 6
I'm glad Rosalie is nice. :)
Author's Response: For now...
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 5
Haha, I think the purple bathrobe part is the funniest.
Author's Response: Glad you liked. :)
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 4
Oh, he did apologize! That's an improvement, but it would have been better if he did it on purpose. I wonder if they're going to have an interaction at the Cullen's tomorrow.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 3
Good for Bella, and Edward should go apologize for laughing at her. But he won't, of course.
Author's Response: Keep reading, and you'll find out...
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 2
He's moody, but trying to be nice for Bella. I don't like how much Emmett seems to dislike Edward, though....I hope that they can work that out sometime in the future.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review.
Reviewer: agovita2312 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 23
Wow, I started reading this yesterday and just couldn't stop. Sorry, I usually don't review every chapter of a story that is so far along, but I will try to review every chapter from here on out.
This is a heart wrenching story. I just wanted to hug Edward and tell him it will all be ok. I can't even imagine how someone in that situation would feel. And honestly greatful that I can't.
Very excited for the next chapter especially since it seems like he is finally understanding a lot of things, or at least starting to.
Author's Response: I'll try to update again tomorrow, hope you'll like the next chapter. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my story!
Reviewer: depper57 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 23
Wow, I am a blubbering mess atm. Listened to Pieces by Red as I read this and had a hell of a time due to reading through my tears. This is absolutely amazing! So sad and heart wrenching. I think of my two sons and being a single mom it scares me that someone could do that to them. I would kill them! I totally understand how Edward would think it was his fault.. especially if his mom did nothing to protect him!
Absolutely brilliant read! Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know you like my story!
Reviewer: maserati (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 23
Bit by bit that wall is coming down, isn't it? Love your story. Thanks so much for writing.
Author's Response: You're welcome. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! :)
Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 23
it's great that Bella can read Edward so well. this was beautiful
Author's Response: Glad you think so, thank you!
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 23
awww... my heart just crumbles with these things. these gestures are bring edward out of his abyss. I LOVE YOUR STORY. REALLY REALLY LOVE IT
Author's Response: And I really, really appreciate it. *lol* Thank you!
Reviewer: deya (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love that he let her touch his face :). I have read a lot of fanfics, but this is one of the fanfics that touch me the most.
Author's Response: So happy you feel that way. Thank you!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 23
Hooray for progress!
Author's Response: Yay! :)
Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 23
Awww oh my gosh this chapter made me cry! Bella touching Edwards face just ahh that was soo sweet and such a huge step for him. What Bella is doing for Edward is such a beautiful thing. I seriously love this story soooo much!! I was so excited to see that there was an update :) Cant wait for the next one! :) <333 AMAZING!!!!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! :) More real soon.
Reviewer: loyalluv (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 23
Every chapter reminds me how much I love this story! Edwards POV are so powerful and emotional and thats what makes me enjoy reading them so much. I love Bella for doing what no one else is willing to do for Edward.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm really happy you're enjoying my story so much. :)
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 23
Awwww! *sniff* So much emotion in this chapter! He's come so far already with her! And touching his face now??? He "felt like crying"--? Awww!!
Oh I can't wait til the next chapter!!
Author's Response: I'll post another chapter soon. Thank you! :)
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 23
wow. Major progress...but he needs to make more...
Author's Response: You're right about that. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 23
Guh. That was heartwrenching in the best way possible. The entire chapter spanned, what, maybe fifteen minutes? But I felt like I was there, my stomach turning with Edward's increased nerves. Sigh. Have I mentioned how much I love this story? Haha. Cause I really really do.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you love it, thank you very much!
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