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Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 24
I like this story very much. It's dealing with some really dark subjects, but I think you handle it really well.
I really feel for Edward, and I'm so pleased to see that he's beginning to let Bella in. I think they can both be good for each other. Hopefully, Edward can learn to trust her and open up a bit and get his life back on track, or at least make it go in the right direction.
More soon, please!
Author's Response: I'll post the next chapter tomorrow. Thank you very much for leaving a review!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 24
More progress! Success!
Author's Response: Yay! :) Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: AlexaET (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 24
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!! New Chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bummerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr I have to wait more days for the next one!!!!!!
OMG Nilla ur killing me here! Please have mercy of this poor reader!!!!
I truly loved this chapter, but I'm not going to lie I can't wait to be in Edward's head.......
The first part was ok, I mean it was the same as last chapter from Bella's point of view but it was cool nonetheless. I like when "time passes" I mean you don't need to write day by day play by play, is better to say "the following week, month or months" in that way we get the sense that time is really passing by and that they are "bonding" and it makes understand how they become closer, at least that's my opinion as it would be so unreal that in a matter of days Bella and Edward became soooo close!
I love the "this shit" portion hahahaha..... yeah I would like to know what Edward thinks they are I mean of course I'll love for him to think about her in a romantic kind of way but at this point I'm not entarely sure if he is up for that, I'm even afraid to say he isn't at all!!!
I don't know something has to happen, I don't know what, but something, for him to start having romantic feelings for her cause so far I just see Edward being with Bella for totally comfort, I mean is totally totally understandable, but isn't it what we want? Love conquering all? Hope something big happens soon! Maybe him telling her part of his past and seeing her support can be that something, but well your the mastermind behind this.
BTW I placed a recomendation in my FanFic profile to ur story hehehehehe hope u get some more readers there!
Have a nice week!
Author's Response: Aw, you're always spoiling me with your long, kind reviews. Love reading them. I promise you'll get to spend the entire next chap inside Edward's head, which should be interesting. :) And about something big happening soon, well, you just might be on to something... ;) Thanks as always for reviewing, more coming real soon.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 24
*Doing a happy Jig* I am absolutly floored and elated by the progress those two are making. It is mind boggling and can't help but cheer Edward and Bella on everystep of the way!! I have to wonder though what is goin on with Bella's headaches. I sure hope this does not devastate Edward if it turns out to be something worse than just headaches. Ohh I am so excited by it all, and dinner with the Cullen's. Oh the healing is to begin...
Author's Response: Maybe he'll be ready to open up to her soon. Or not. As for the headaches, well, you'll just have to keep reading. :) Thank you so much for your review!
Reviewer: oliveU (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 24
He is so cute, like a little wild deer, all skittish. No wonder Bella wants to pet him. I want to pet him too.
Author's Response: Me too. *lol* Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 24
Awesome chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Reviewer: santa muerte (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 24
This is fast becoming one of my favorite stories!!! I love the way your Edward and Bella fit together. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! And I will. :)
Reviewer: 1twifan4evr (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 24
I knew it. MAJOR breakthrough. I just hope Bella doesn't do something to break that trust. I know it will be harmless and unintentional but something like talking to Carlisle will hurt Edward. She really has to be ready to kee his secrets and be there for him. Maybe she can help him talk to other people but he has to be aware of the situation at all times. If not he will retreat. I loved this chapter. I would rather they just came out with their intentions instead of hiding. I really thought they were not gonna have dinner all because of a stupid misunderstanding. I am glad Bella had balls enough to tell him why she said no rather than assume. When you assume you make an ass out of yourself. loved the update!!!
Author's Response: Major breakthrough indeed. So glad you loved the update, thank you!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 24
Great chapter!
I'm glad that things are going well for Bella and Edward. =) Hopefully it will stay that way because it seems that Edward is really starting to come out of his shell around Bella a little bit.
Looking forward to your next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, and I won't keep you waiting very long. :)
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 24
LOL aww they so cute!
Can't wait til they hug ^__^
Author's Response: I can't wait to write their first hug. *lol* Thank you for leaving a review!
Reviewer: lionandthelamblove7 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 24
I freaking love your story! I sometimes get bored and feel like I'm losing intrest in stories, but I love your chapters! They're always new and interesting. I never feel like I HAVE to read it. I WANT AND NEED TO! I love it and cannotw ait until you update!!
-lionandthelamblove7
Author's Response: I'm so glad my story keeps you interested! Thank you very much!
Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 24
More progress and a little insight into Bella's past. I wonder how all of this will play out. Thanks for another great chapter.
Author's Response: You're welcome, and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 24
awww, I LOVE Edward....I'd go eat pot roast at his place any old day. :) It's a big step for him to admit he wants her there....still sad though that he fessed up that he fears he'll mess everything up at some point. Baby steps, Bella....he'll get there. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: AMusefan77 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 24
Loved the chapter. They're still making so much progress. I wonder what the history with Bella and Jacob is all about? I think that little detail wa s important. Can't wait to see how dinner goes.
Author's Response: You'll find out more about Bella and Jacob eventually. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: deya (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 23
I really really need a new chapter, i can't wait :)
Author's Response: The next chapter is posted and will hopefully be up real soon. Thanks for your review! :)
Reviewer: Kairi J (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 23
she's finally getting through to him !!!
:)
Author's Response: At least she's on the right track. :) Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: fretgirl (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 23
Oh wow! I love this story! I'm hooked! =)
Author's Response: Yay! :) Thank you. More soon.
Reviewer: fretgirl (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 8
Honestly, I didn't think I would be able to finish this story, thought it would be too dark and painful. Now I can't STOP reading! I'm so excited to see how Bella helps Edward heal!
Author's Response: I'm really happy you gave my story a chance. Thank you!
Reviewer: fretgirl (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 3
Progress? =)
Great story btw!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: My-Girl96 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 23
<3
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: akaalice (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 23
Poor Edward, he's been through so much. Bella is so loving, sensitive and kind. I am looking forward to a place of happiness for them both, even though I don't want Loner to end. I am enjoying your story, great writing, realistic character development...I await the next update...
Author's Response: Thank you so much, and I can assure you we're nowhere near the end yet. :)
Reviewer: cheeseiscool (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 23
Oh my god......this story and plot is amazing. You are an incredible writer. I hope you update soon.
-Cheeseiscool.
Author's Response: I will, and thank you! :)
Reviewer: myszjada (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 23
this chapter is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! :)
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 23
Wow! Bella might work better than the therapist. Therapy only works if you're willing to get healed after all.
Author's Response: Very true. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 22
Wow! Bella is just what the doctor ordered.
Author's Response: Just what he needs. :) Thanks for reviewing!
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